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Posted: 10 years ago
Di did u have any clip of that pariticular time when sangika di presented the gift to him.. And anyother in which daya sir's expression was captured of that time or he said anything.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Parii...

Di did u have any clip of that pariticular time when sangika di presented the gift to him.. And anyother in which daya sir's expression was captured of that time or he said anything.


Personally i have no such video...2 videos are posted here...i saw one of them & there is no such scene...
Shagnika tried to take videos but they were so excited at that time so when taking video forgot to click record 😆 Its very much natural...If i was there probably i did the same...😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its okay di..
infact if i was there will do the same..
so no worries...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wao u remember to add my name😃
Thank u so so much debu🤗
All gifts r superb👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KhushLuvsGC-AK

Oh wao u remember to add my name😃

Thank u so so much debu🤗
All gifts r superb👍🏼


How can i forget u 😛
Thank you Khush 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
both the gifts are indeed lovely Di...⭐️👏
i especially loved daya sir's gift...it's really unique..pehle toh samajh hi ahi aaya tha...😳
thax for adding my name di...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

both the gifts are indeed lovely Di...⭐️👏

i especially loved daya sir's gift...it's really unique..pehle toh samajh hi ahi aaya tha...😳
thax for adding my name di...


Thank you Riya 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Story 😆 which one? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago


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One romantic OS on AT & DS. 😲😆


At some place, Daya is waiting for Shreya & after few minutes Shreya comes.

Shreya : Sir, apne mujhe bulaya?

Daya : Ha..a...n..woh...actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...

Shreya (surprised): Kya Sir?

Daya hesitates...both of them are silent for few seconds.

Daya at last: Shreya tum kya kuch vi nehin samjhti ho?

Shreya : Sir, aap kya kehna chahte hei?

Daya : Shreya saari baatein kahe nehin jaate kuch baat samajhna vi chahiye aur mere khayal se tum samjhti vi ho...

Shreya becomes silent & looks down.

Daya becomes impatient...

Shreya : Ankahi bataon ka koi matlab nehin hota hei Sir aur kyunki kavi kavi woh ek tarfa vi ho jaate hei...

Daya : Kya sunna chahti ho Shreya ke main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon...??

Shreya shocked & surprised still happy. 😲😃☺️

Daya continues : Thik hain to suno...haan main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon...aaj se nehin bohot pehle se...par yeh baat keh nehin paya...nehin hota mujhse... (Embarrassed) 😳😳

Shreya gives romantic look...& thinking : At last Sir apne dil ki baat keh diya

Daya looks at Shreya : Kya hua aise kya dekh rehi ho? Kuch kaho? Maine to kaha na?

Shreya smiles... & says : Sir, aise kisi ko propose karte hein kya? 😉

Daya embarrasses & says : To tumne kya socha tha ek gulaab lekaar apne ghutno pe baith kar main tumhe propose karungi? 😆😉

Both laugh loudly. Shreya thinks about that moment with Sidharth in their romantic date.

Daya : Kahan kho gayi?

Shreya : Kahin nehin Sir...magar sir Sidharth ka kya hoga...apne bohot der kar diya...aap khud bol nehin paaye to kam se kam ek letter hi likh dete...

Daya : Likha tha...

Shreya (shockingly): Kya? 😕😕 Par mujhe koi letter nehin mila...

Daya : Pata hain...Abhijeet ne tumhe woh letter diya hi nehin...

Shreya : Magar kyun Sir? Abhijeet sir ne aisa kyun kiya?

Daya explains.

F L A S H B A C K

2 days before, at Daya's House, 10PM

Daya is watching Discovery Channel. Suddenly, door bell rings. He opens the door & surprises to see Abhijeet.

Daya : Kya boss tum itne raat ko?

Abhijeet : Kyun main iss waqt nehin aa sakta kya?

Daya : Aree nehin mera woh matlab nehin tha...aao andar aao...

Abhijeet enters & sits on sofa. Daya becomes confused.

Daya : Kya hua boss? Tension mein lag rehe ho?

Abhijeet hesitates & says : Ab aur mujhse nehin hoga...har roz sochta hoon tumhe bata du par...main to bilkul fas gaya...

Daya doesn't understand head & tail of it. 😕 He gives a confused look while
Abhijeet continues : Bohot kosis kiya ke saare paise ka intezaam khud kardu aur sab kuch thik ho jaye to aa kar tumhe bata dunga magar nehin kar paya...5 crore bohot hote hei...aur

Daya interrupts : Abhijeet tum kya bol rehe hei ho? Kya paisa? Boss mujhe kuch samjh mein nehin aa raha hei...😕

Abhijeet : Daya, main uss letter ke bare mein bol raha hoon jo maine Shreya ko nehin diya...

Daya : Main iss bare mein koi baat karna nehin chahta...ek baar isi wajah se hamari dosti mein daraar padhte padhte rehe gaya aur Shreya ki sagaai vi ho chuki hei...so everything is finished!

Abhijeet : Nehin main aise finish nehin hone dunga...3 zindegi barbaad ho jayega...

Daya : Magar...

Abhijeet : Tumhe sunna hi padhega...aab main aur chupa nehin sakta...main Shreya ko letter dene gaya tha magar Shreya ki father ne mujhe rok liya...

Daya shocked...😲

Abhijeet continues : unhone mujhse promise karwaya ke main yeh letter Shreya ko nehin doon...

Daya : Kyun ? (Confused)

Abhijeet : Shreya ki father ne Sidharth ke father se bohot paise udar liye the...iske bare mein Shreya aur uski maa ko vi nehin pata...Shreya ki maa ko heart problem hai...isliye yeh baat avi woh bata nehin sakte...aur unke paas itne saare paise avi nehin hei isliye jab tak woh paise chukka nehin sakte main Shreya ko yah tumhe kuch na kahu...

Daya understands why Abhijeet has not told him this earlier. He again realizes that how he misunderstood his best buddy.

Abhijeet continues : Main kya karta yaar...kuch samjh mein nehin aa raha tha...socha ke saare pase ka intezaam khud hi kar lunga par bohot der ho gaya...hamare beech daraar vi padhte padhte rehe gaya...

Daya sighs...

Abhijeet : Shreya ki sagaai vi ho gayi...par main sirf 2 crore ka hi intezam kar paya... (unhappy) isliye aaj main tumhe batane aaya...hum dono milkar baki paise ka intezam kar lenge...kyun?

Daya : Kya faida? Sagaai ho chuki hei...

Abhijeet : Par shaadi to nehin huyi na? Tumhe kya lagta hei ke agar yeh shaadi ho gai to tum khush rehe paoge? Tumhari chodo kya Shreya khush rehe payegi? Aur Sidharth?

Daya : Magar...

Abhijeet angrily : Agar magar kuch nehin...tum jaake yeh sachai Shreya ko bata do...2 din baad New Year ki Party hei...aur isse achha mauka tumhe nehin mil sakta...phir hum paise ka intezaam karenge...


B A C K T O P R E S E N T

Shreya becomes shocked & disappointed that her father doesn't tell her.

Shreya : Magar Sir, itne paise ke intezaam kaise hoga...

Daya : Woh chodo...main aur Abhijeet kahin na kahi se intezaam ka hi lunga...

Few minutes silent then Daya asks : Magar tumne avitak woh baat nehin bataya mujhe?

Shreya (Confused) : Kausi baat Sir?

Daya : Wohi baat jo tum mujhse sunna chahte the...maine to keh diya par tumne nehin kaha...

Shreya blushes...☺️

Daya : Kya...kuch kaha...mujhe sunyai nehin diya...

Shreya : (Blushing) Sir, aap vi na...

Abhijeet enters suddenly...

Abhijeet : Shreya ab bol vi do...sharmane se koi faida nehin...😉

Shreya looks down & blushing! ☺️

Abhijeet : Lo bhai Daya, Shreya to Sidharth se hi pyaar karti hai...aur main soch raha tha ACP sir se baat karu ke woh Shreya ki dad se tumhari rishte ki baat kare...ab lagta hei koi faida nehin...

Shreya promptly replies : Nehin sir, main to Daya sir se hi pyaar karta hoon...After completing she realizes that she has expressed her feeling & becomes embarrassed & flees away...🤪 😳

Daya smiling & says : Boss, tum kavi sudhroge nehin...😛

Abhijeet : Par unse bol to diya na...😉

Daya smiling & says : Par main akele shaadi nehin karnewala hoon...😉

Abhijeet surprises. Daya continues : Are humne kya decide kiya tha...ek saath shaadi karenge...

Abhijeet blushes & says : Are woh to...😳

Daya : Boss aaj mauka achha hei...tum vi keh do Tarika se...

Tarika enters suddenly...

Tarika : Daya, Abhijeet mujhe kya kehna chahta hain?

Abhijeet embarrasses. 😳

Daya gives a naughty look & says : Tum vi pucho main to chala...(Leaves)

Tarika : Haan Abhijeet kya kehna chahte ho tum mujhse?

Abhijeet : Woh woh...naya saal aanewala hei...😛

Tarika : Kya?? 😕

Abhijeet : Woh mera matlab hain ke party bohot achhi hain na? 😛

Tarika gives a look...😳

Abhijeet : Tarikaji, kavi kavi bhavnao ko vi samjh liya ki jiye...😳

Tarika : Main ek forensic expert hoon...sirf evidence ko samjh ta hoon

Abhijeet : Aap vi na...Salunkhe saab ke saath rehte rehte kya ban gayi hei...

Tarika : Abhijeet! 😈

Abhijeet : Achha achha...chodiye Salunkhe sahab ko...hamari baat karte hai...

Tarika : Matlab?

Abhijeet : Aaj aap bohot achhi lag rehi hai...😳

Tarika : Woh to roz achha nehin lagta kya? 😉

Abhijeet : Are maine woh kab kaha? Aap to mujhe har waqt achhi lagti hai...😳

Tarika : Sirf achhi? Aur kuch nehin...😉

Abhijeet : Aur...aur...aap to janti hain na...😳

Tarika : Kya janti hoon? 😛

Abhijeet : Achha to mere mukh se bina sune manengi nehin...😛

Tarika nods. Both are silent for few minutes. Tarika moves forward.

Abhijeet : Are are kahan jaa rehi hei...😕

Tarika : Abhijeet, tum to kuch bologe nehin to yahan khade rehne se kya faida?

Abhijeet murmurs : Sr Ins Abhijeet, kar kya rehe ho...3 hi to words hei...bol do...come on!

Tarika : Kya hua? Kya bol rehe ho?

Abhijeet promptly replies : 143!

Tarika : Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Abhijeet : Wohi jo tumne suna...

Tarika : Abhijeet mujhe tumse yeh umeed nehin thi...kaha vi to code main...

Abhijeet : Are Tarikaji aap to mayus ho gayi...thik hain keh dete hain - (embarrassing tone) main aap se aap se...

Tarika : Aage vi bolo Abhijeet...

Abhijeet : (Without taking a breadth) Main aapse bohot pyaar karta hoon... (then sigh)

Tarika blushes & looks down. When she is going to say, suddenly Abhijeet's phone rings. Abhijeet becomes angry. Its Daya...

Abhijeet receives the phone : Kya Daya, 2 minute baad call nehin kar sakta tha?

Daya : Sorry boss, woh ACP sir bula rehe hei tumhe, ek khoon ho gaya hei...

Abhijeet becomes serious & says : Main avi aata hoon...(cuts the call)

Abhijeet looks at Tarika & says : Tarikaji, lagta hain aaj vi hamari baat aadhuri rehe gayi...

Tarika : Kahan Abhijeet...tumne to kaha na aur mera jawab woh to tum jante hi ho...143!

Both smiles.


Edited by debasree04 - 10 years ago
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A VM showing why CID should end. 😉



😲 😭


In true FW ishtyle you need to take a case from any other Indian crime TV show and merge into CID making sure you make a mess of it. 😛 Instead of writing the story you need to write a detailed plot as if you were writing a detailed review in the EDT after watching the episode. You need to mention which show you first saw the case in and when you saw it and the changes FW made to fit it into CID. You can mention actors and CID cops if you like, but it isn't necessary. Remember though it has to be a detailed review so that anyone reading it can easily understand what the case was, how the investigation progressed, and what they "borrowed" from the other show.



OMG! Yesterday's CID case is almost similar with one CP case. Let me remind the case. Yes its Abducted [Episode 263] [28th June 2013]. I remember the CP case very well.

CP case LINK - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wIPTa37z-wk

It's too good but FW can't show any episode without murder. I hate it. Anyway come to the story, Shalini is coming back from office, its late night & kidnapped by 2 men. Fortunately, one auto driver notices it & follows that black Scorpio but he can't reach it as its night time & Scorpio's speed is too high. He informs CID about it. CID team reaches the spot. Wow DUO together! According to auto driver, it happens near Lotus Colony, Worli. Shalini reaches in cab, when she walks towards her house, a black Scorpio rushes there & one man comes out & forcefully take her in the Scorpio. Scorpio runs at high speed, he follows it till Dadar West but then Scorpio vanishes. Sachin alerts all tolls about this black Scorpio. Duo decides that they have to divide now to catch the Scorpio. Abhijeet sir & Nikhil go towards Bandra-Worli Sea link, while Daya sir & Pankaj towards Dadar - Matunga and Sachin, Purvi & Shreya go towards Wadala. These scenes are quite interesting. ACP sir & Freddy sir try to find out more info about Shalini. They get Shalini's Id card on the spot where it has happened. ACP sir informed her parents & got to know that one Avinash Chauhan disturbs Shalini from last 6 months. ACP sir orders Freddy sir to find out more info about Avinash Chauhan. With the help of experts, they find the FriendsBook account of Avinash along with more info...ACP sir calls Avinash's father to warn his son but Avinash is desperate. Other side, Duo & Sachin can't find the Scorpio & they are still on their way. Again filmy dialog by Avinash - Shalini, agar tum mere nehin hue to kisi aur ki vi nehin hogi...FW can't think something better! Anyway, now CID can trace the Scorpio through Avinash's mobile number. It's shown Worli...ACP sir informs duo & Sachin, they become surprised. Now they are coming back towards Worli. With the help of Mobile trackers, they reach at Chowpatty Beach where they find Avinash with the dead body of Shalini. Avinash looks devastated & mentally disturbed. He confesses that he loves Shalini a lot but she refuses her even she insults his father so he tries to take revenge. He adds that when his father calls, he understands that CID will reach him soon & Shalini can't be yours so he kills her. Abhijeet asks how he reaches here but he is not in state to reply more. ACP sir concludes that he needs psychiatrist & the court would decide about his punishment. Overall good episode! I like the chasing scenes specially how they show it, good direction! I wish that they would not kill Shalini.

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