my jesture..... THOSE PAINFUL DAYS!!!! (completed) - Page 2

hey ppl...


THANK YOU ALL from the core of my HEART.... thanx alot....😃😃👏
😃firsy BHAVNAB DII ur comment is COMPLIMENT for me... thanx DII to xtract for reading my story as well...😃.

ya SHREELA, NANDANI, SHIVANI, NIMI and RASHIDA... thank you DII's...👏

haan about NEEME.... thank YOU DII👏.... according to UR comments (i took them praise)... sum lines are OVER EMMOTIONAL.... ya bit true... pata nahi NEEME DII mujhay khud kya baat buri lagi... shayed DAYA Sir ki takleef kay wo cope nahi ker pa rahy thay.... and also i did not look secondly... but i think i m not an emmotional person (my family/buddies call me GANDA BACCHA😛)... cz DII if i was there the SCENE b/w DAYA Sir and ABHI Sir... i did not just only grab my buddy coller... i slapped him/her as well.... hahaha😉....

ppl... buddy per hee tou gussa nikaal saktay hain na.... khair... again thanx....

SHIVANI for my new story.... thora wait karna paray ga... advance mein SORRY.....

i wrote 2 stories keep in mind JDJ (the circular bond which is quite hilirious) and this one.... while I M REALLY SORRY DAYA Sir was not based on JDJ idea but it abruptly ended by JDJ....

i really appreciate all of U who r SILENT READERS..... ppl plz FEEDBACK.... its really boost the writer hardwork....

ya ab mujhay stories mein BREAK lena hoga cz GALS/GUYS, CHINNU DII ki new story FORUM mein aa gayii hay.... VISROM DII ki story bhi COMING SOON per hay... ya BHAVNAB DII bhi apni stories post karnay wali hain.... so main tou bhaag jaon yahan say.... wesay bhi in CLASSIC WRITERS nay thora BREAK liya tha... tou meri story aap logun ko nazar aa gayii.... wana most probably ME and MY STORY were DEAD🤢.....

yes NOTEPAD... where is UR feedback... u said that u do that when the story is over... so story is over and out.... i m waitin....❓

i also wait TASHAROSE comments... i missed them... so plz if U have time....

now GALS?GUYS fasten ur seat belts and prepare urself to have a flight on CHINNU DII.... VISROM DII and BHAVNAB DII coming up stories....

still i missed VISROM DII... CHINNU DII... DR.FAHMI DII... SAGNIKA DII and everone comments.... arry bhai CRITISIZE he ker lein..... magar kuch kahein tou!!!

yes one more... if anyones intentions hurted.... i say VERY VERY SORRY.... and really THANX ALOT....

But seriously Gadhadada, awesome job!!!! And as Bhavana di said, it was purely "touching"!!!!👏

Awesome story.....no words to describe.....just so touching ⭐️ had tears in my eyes when i read this
u have portrayed abhi-Daya's friendship( more like brotherhood) so nicely...especially daya's concern for abhi wen he supposedly lost his memory...n the letter daya wrote to ACP sir made me cry...and the line in the letter was so cute but true:

"Sir' aap log mera pata lagany ki koshish nahi kijyeyga' khas ker ABHIJEET' kyunkay mujhay malum hay wo mujhay dhoond hee lay ga' "

Gadhadada, ur stories are just so touching,I really like them...lookin' forward to more stories by u 😃