Radev FF PYAAR KI BARSAT Part 14B,pg16 on 5th april.a short update - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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10q nice update...waiting for the next one... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG OMG Was this the reason of their separation ?? Pls update soon ,i am waiting anxiously ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 12

"Please Radhika...ruko...meri baat toh suno...Radhikaaa" Dev was screaming while following Radhika...

Radhika was crying all the way and entered the ladies washroom before Dev could reach her... Dev stopped his feet at the door and tried to call her.. Before he could Radhika's friends came and entered there... Rohan too came there and tried to take Dev away...

"Rohan let me see n talk to her once" Dev pleaded to Rohan..
Before Rohan could say anything they heard Vishakha's voice "Hey,Dev and Rohan..what are you guys doing in ladies washroom?"...
Dev got irritated but tried not to show her anger and frustration to her...
"woh..Vishakha,we are just passing hereby" rohan replied in a normal tone and took Dev's hand and dragged him "Chalo Dev,we are getting late for our class as we have to finish our lunch"
"No Rohan,you go and have the lunch,I wil wait here till Radhika comes out"Dev tried to stay there..
"No Dev,it won't be nice..if Vishakha gets any clue,she wil spread the whole matter in the college like BBC..and it wil upset Radhika more..now come with me,we will talk to Radhika after the class..pakka" said Rohan and took Dev along with him to the canteen.

"no Rohan..i won't take my lunch until Radhika takes her"said Dev sadly..
"Dev,don't worry,we wil send her food" saying this Rohan sent Radhika's food in her friend's hand.. Dev took one morsel and went back to his class.. Rohan followed him,but when they reached, the clases had already started...while going through their junior's clas Dev found Radhika sitting with a gloomy face.. It pinched him and he promised himself,he would make her happy soon..
Dev and Rohan were waiting for Radhika outside her clasroom when the clas was over.. They saw evryone except Radhika.. When they saw her friends,Dev asked hurriedly..."Where is Radhika?"
Her friend Anu replied "Radhika left early to the hostel as she didn't feel well"
"Why?what happened to her?"Dev asked again..
"She didn't have her lunch na,isliye she was a bit tired" Ram's words pained Dev again..
"Rohan come,we are going to hostel now" Dev said and dragged Rohan along with him..
"wait Dev...pagal ho kya!! How can we enter girls' hostel!!they won't allow any boys there.. Also they wil surely report this to Principal" Rohan stopped Dev..
"so what will i do now Rohan?? I really want to talk to her.." Dev said sadly..
"don't worry Dev..we wil phone her when we reach home" Rohan said excitingly..

Dev's face lit up a little,but went sad again and said"But i don't have her number"
"oh yaar,we wil get it from her friends" saying this Rohan turned to Radhika's friends but they had left already... Dev became sad again..To cheer him Rohan said "Don't worry my bro..we wil call directly to the hostel..you just relax and come home"... Both left to their home..
Dadima noted the gloomy face of Dev and questioned Rohan with her eyes.. Rohan assured everythng was alright.. After having tea,both left to Rohan's room... "Rohan,how wil we cal her?wil the warden give her the phone,if she heard my voice?"said a worried Dev..
"Dev just relax and give me the phone" Rohan said while taking the phone from Dev.. Rohan dialled the hostel number and within seconds he said "Gud eveng madame,can i speak to Radhika Shastri now..I am her aunty"...
Dev heard the voice of a woman from his bro and smiled.. Then Rohan handed the phone to Dev.. Dev took the phone and after a minute he heard Radhika's voice"Hello.."
"Radhika..." Dev said in a soft loving voice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Why did you stop yaar...now another wait... Ok,it s very nice update,plz update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
OHO...don't know if you end at such situation making us anxious or your story is such as making us fully anxious all the time ...i think the later one ,right?
AM waiting eagerly ,will radh talk or not ? is there something more which made them separate or ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 13 A

As she picked up the phone, Dev's caring and worried voice flowed to Radhika's ears, "Radhika..."

Soon a happy smile formed on her lips. She felt an unknown feeling formed inside her..
"Dev!!",she said in wonder as she never expected he would call like this..

Dev heart jumped in joy as he found Radhika realized his voice..
He wanted to sooth her and said,"I am really sorry Radhika... I never wanted to hurt you,and wil never do it,promise..please,forgive me this time.. From the moment I saw you for the first time, my heart wanted to be with you forever.. I love you Radhika... Will you be my better half?"

Radhika felt a sudden blush formed on her cheeks,because she never expected Dev's open confession.. She felt that she too expected this.. But she was too shocked to respond to this sudden confession, and stammered "Ji...woh...main..main..woh"

Eventhough Dev knew that Radhika felt for him,but her stammering gave him full confidence that she too loved him.. But he didn't want to force her and said, "Radhika,you can take your own time to give me an answer,I wil wait for you"

"Ji" Radhika replied with a relief.. She felt Dev's love and concern for her.

"Did u eat your food,Radhika?",Dev asked in concern..

Radhika was really touched by Dev's love and care for her... She felt that he too didn't have his lunch and said, "ji, I wil have it soon...kya aapne khana khaya?"

Dev was over whelmed with Radhika's concern.."I too wil have it soon", he said with a smile...

Rohan too smiled seeing Dev's smile.. He snatched the phone from Dev and said naughtily, "Radhika,it is good that we got you on the phone now,otherwise my bro would have to jump over your hostel wall to meet you.."

Dev gave an angry glare to Rohan and Radhika blushed furiously and said,"main phone rakhti hoon" and put the phone down with a sweet smile..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sory 4 d late update..this s my 3rd attempt to update,i lost my updats frm cmptr becz f virus..so i have to work again now..i'l updatd 13 B soon.. The no f LIKES r really less,it too make me pul frm writng further...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No plz do nt stop it.. I really liked ur story plz, i hope you listen...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love ur ff...and want to read the whole story ...plzzz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It s very nice update!! Plz continue soon! Waiting!

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