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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

@Rheu...Seju paagal ho gayi hai...
we are said to put up lengthy write ups...
Sejal madam...make the dream wedding of yours longer...
sun pehle ek basic intro se shuru kar...
fir uss mein phaldaan, haldi, tilak, talwar daan (oh... an't recollect it's name pata kar kisi se), sindoor daan, var maala exchange, Pratu being teased by hi saali i mean Phool(isko short mein kar dena :P) then PrAja's personal saat vachans which Pratap made Ajabde take...un sabko mention kar...symbolise kya karte hai woh bhi...
beta isse kaam nahin banega...

P>S Seju...i...i just love your writings...tu sach mein...u r a brilliant writer...if not we were asked for lenghty write ups this would have been just perfect.!!!


i thought this wold be lenghty re :P
kk .. i'll do it .. no worries but probs is that i'll finish it by tom it is late now and parso kitest ke liye tution is extra timings ke liye toh kal raat tak hoga ... tu layout ready kar .. main mera .. post kar dungi kal
and thank you too
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shanz_sejal

I could only write this much :

Stay Loyal, Stay Real : Miracles Will Happen

Pratap and Ajabdeh's undying love has taught us that we should never give up. Whatever the circumstances, we must fight through it and face every obstacle that comes in our path. God is there to help us for everything that we need or crave for. When we talk about love, we see that it is God that creates all the couples in the Heaven and sends them down to face everything that comes their way to prove their love. Everyone has to give a proof of their love, even though it is pure and true; this is because God is only testing us on another walk of life. We must stand upright, not fall because of others conspiracies. We must stay strong till the end. Being honest to yourself and your soulmate is equally important as it sets things going for both of them and keeps them on track.


^ if u wish to add any points to this .. you may tell me :)




PERFECT!! I was wondering ki iss part mein hum kya likh sakte hai.. but you ... bohot achha likha hai...
Achha last mein yeh point add karde like PrAja may not be united now-misunderstanding don't last long-true love never gets defeated-bhale hi woh juda ho kisi galat fehmi ke tahat-PrAja are do jism ek jaan-they will unite-maybe they are apart-but their heatr still united..
i mean aisa hi kuch likh daal...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seju tussi tension na lo.. just submit it before 19th 8pm. wahi kaafi hoga...
Kyunki mera apna kaam hi abhi aadha bhi nahin hua hai..
Sab tutions, PSA, exam preps and meri maa ji ki badaulat... :P LOL...

araam se kar...
but before wednesday 8 pm thik hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago

I fell for you and so did you:

Pratap had come back from the river side when he and his mitra decide to go to the haat mela a little distance away. Phool is seen to be very eager to go the same mela but her brother Jaalam Singh is totally against it and doesn't allow her to go there. That is when Phool decides to go there along with Ajabde dressed as ordinary girls. Ajabde reluctant to disobey Jaalam Signh's order, somehow agrees to accompany Phool. Both the girls stealthily leave for their khema and go towards the mela. Phool gets tired and Ajabde notices a cart with two boys riding it and asks them for lift. Ajabde is oblivious that the one in the cart is non-other than Pratap. They reach the haat and they go in different directions. In the haat Ajabde goes around the place when she notices a boy, ordinarily, Pratap in disguise is earning respectful glances from others and people also kind a saluting him. Further Ajabde sees some soldiers of Mewar talking to the same boy. She is mesmerized by the boy's down to earth behavior and is left totally in awe when she comes to know that the boy is non-other than the prince of Mewar, Pratap Singh. Pratap leaves Ajabde awestruck by his humble and well-mannered self. His down to earth personality and kind nature mesmerizes her...and knowingly her heart falls for Pratap.

The Mewari soldiers informed Pratap that he was going to stay in Bijloia for a few days as suggested by his Rani Maa, Maharani Jaiwanta Bai. Pratap makes preparations to go Bijlia but is upset as before leaving he could not meet his mitra once. Pratap reaches the borders of Bijolia and then decides go there by himself. After searching for a long time Pratap finds his way to the palace but unfortunately ends up in other side of the palace which is guarded by the fort walls. Pratap thinks of going climbing this wall itself and enter the palace as it would take a long time to search for the main door of the palace. When after climbing up the wall, Pratap jumps down inside the palace compound, he finds himself landing on cow dung. This irks him. He further tries to search his way to the entrance of the inner palace but is unable to do so. Wandering around searching for his way Pratap comes to the cowshed. He sees a girl there and thinks of asking her the way. The girl was none other than Ajade who was giving a bath to Laxmi, her cow. Ajabde didn't notice Pratap and threw the bucket of water unknowingly on his feet. This symbolizes that Ajabde had completed the ritual of washing the feet of the guest when he comes to their palace.

Pratap is taken aback by the sudden accident. He looks at his wet feet and then towards a shocked Ajabde. Yes, Ajabde was shocked...shocked to see the great KUNWAR PRATAP there...shocked to know what a mistake she had committed by throwing water on his feet. Ajabde thought that Pratap would be angry but instead Pratap just softened his expressions asking her the way to the palace entrance. Ajabde, unable to utter a word, gestured through her hand towards the door. Pratap a little surprised by Ajabde's shocked expressions, goes inside the palace. There he is unable to find Rao Mamrakh or Hansa Bai. On the other hand Rao Mamarakh is seen asking to one of his soldiers whether flower petals are ready to be showered on Pratap when he enters the palace. At the very moment Pratap is coming from one direction, searching for Rao Mamrakh ji and Hansa Masi ji and Ajabde right from the opposite direction with a plate of petals. Both don't notice each other and thus collide which make the flower petals in in the plate held by Ajabde shower on them as both stare at each other. Ajabde is shocked while Pratap is surprised. This again symbolizes that Pratap didn't even have to skip this ritual of "flower-shower" at a royal guest as it was fulfilled by Ajabde. However Rao Mamarakh seeing the scene in front of him gets very angry and shouts on Ajabde for being so careless and Ajabde is hell scared by this. Pratap stops Rao Mamarakh ji and asks him not to scold the DASI as not only she but he himself is at fault. Rao Mamarakh gets even angry and says that it's not a dasi but his daughter Ajabde and blames on Ajabde that her appearance can only fit that of a dasi and nothing else.

Ajabde is then asked to show Pratap his room. Ajabde upset and scared leads Kunwar Pratap to his room. Pratap meanwhile apologizes to Ajabde for mistaking her as a dasi. Ajabde with a calm face replies that its not his fault as any other person in his place would have thought the same and she herself was at fault as she was in such a shabby appearance as compared to a princess's. Ajabde then starts arranging Pratap's room as per his liking. She arranges his cloths and his bed just in the way Pratap likes. Pratap just couldn't help himself to stare on the calm and serene face of Ajabde. He looks at the peaceful and angelic Ajabde lighting the diyas in the room. Only one thought comes to his mind. "Aapko pata hai Ajabde humein aapko dekh kar apni Rani Maa ki yaad aati hai..."

A corner of his heart was taken away by her beauty in simplicity...


kaafi zyaada detailed ho gaya na?

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Posted: 11 years ago

Stay Loyal, Stay Real : Miracles Will Happen

Pratap and Ajabdeh's undying love has taught us that we should never give up. Whatever the circumstances, we must fight through it and face every obstacle that comes in our path. God is there to help us for everything that we need or crave for. When we talk about love, we see that it is God that creates all the couples in the Heaven and sends them down to face everything that comes their way to prove their love. Everyone has to give a proof of their love, even though it is pure and true; this is because God is only testing us on another walk of life. We must stand upright, not fall because of others conspiracies. We must stay strong till the end. Though, PrAja are not together currently but misunderstandings don't last long.They are now engulfed by the misunderstandings but will break away from it and be one, once again. Love never dies and PrAja's love for each other too will never die. Being honest to yourself and your soulmate is equally important as it sets things going for both of them and keeps them on track.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Seju yaad rakhiyo that you are doing the most important part, on which our topic basically revolves around...PRAJA WEDDING..
toh take your take your time but give your best..!

Good night!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

Seju tussi tension na lo.. just submit it before 19th 8pm. wahi kaafi hoga...
Kyunki mera apna kaam hi abhi aadha bhi nahin hua hai..
Sab tutions, PSA, exam preps and meri maa ji ki badaulat... :P LOL...

araam se kar...
but before wednesday 8 pm thik hai?

ya for sure re .. i think i won't come on thursday too maybe after 9 only tum log sab kar loge toh main kya karungi ... wed ko 8 pm ke pehle even i'll help u for layout and all .. k ?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

Seju yaad rakhiyo that you are doing the most important part, on which our topic basically revolves around...PRAJA WEDDING..
toh take your take your time but give your best..!

Good night!

Yes , will try .. might not come tom . will be busy in writing this only

Good Night, me recieved a warning now😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seju break that into two paragraphs...
soch there is tag for this single thing samjhi...toh madam thoda exaggeration hi kar do...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

Seju break that into two paragraphs...
soch there is tag for this single thing samjhi...toh madam thoda exaggeration hi kar do...

will do .. tu chill kar .. main kar dungi

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