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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Aru_A

Roshu di...the lyrics of the title track...(what i think)

He dhara wali dharati ra...
He laal aayo re..
Rakt tu ubaal sa..
Sakt hai tu dhaal sa...
BHarat kahe veer sa..
Mera putr Pratap hai...
Prachand tu..
Akhand tu...
Sury Saathi taap hai...
Matr-bhoomi garv kare...
Mera putr Pratap hai...
Chadha rakt ka tika hai
Mitti ko maa ye maane...
Desh bhakti ka mol hai jo
Mewari Rana jaane...
Sun saahas is put ka desh ka kan-kan hai ye gaaye...
Jai Jai Jai JAi JAi jiski jaikar...
Pratap hai...
Ekling ka kahe jise avtar...
Pratap hai...
Veeron ke saahas ki jo hunkaar...
Pratap hai
Jai jai jai jai jai jiski jaikar...
Pratap hai...
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Veer tu...
Prachand hai tu...
Tu kshatriya hai...
Akhand bhi...
Koi na bhoomi par...
Teri is maati par...
Kadam bhi rakh na sake...
Putr tu Sanga hai...
rakt jo jaaga hai...
Agni jo bhuj na sake...
Dekh Pratap ko shatru dare dar...
Chale talwar jo shatru bhare mar...
Jeevan samarpan hai desh ko de chala...
Jeevan savari hai ashvon ki jo maala...
Kat jaaunga...
Mit jaaunga...
Bhoomi mukti...
Karvaunga..
Desh bhakti...
Dikhlaunga...
Maharana...
kehlaungaaa...

those are it...i think yes...



i guess, this is right to great extent!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: -phenomenal-



oh gawwdd... 🤣
you are feeling jealous... like seriously abhi (i hope i can call you that) ... 😆
anyways, thanks for such a big compliment.. means a lot to me! 😳




Aiyyo! Why won't I feel jealous? As for now, you gave me a neck-to-neck competition in Diwali Tag Contest...😭😭 But,I'm still happy that my NON-animated one gave the same to your animated one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: -phenomenal-



i guess, this is right to great extent!

mene second half nhi likha tha..
bt edit krne k baad i feel almost frst half same h..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
ok me sirf raat ko aa paungi 4 limited time...here...me avis banane ka try kr rhi hu..as i am not so much xpert in dat..tho pta nhi..hina di ka xams h idk whether she cn cum b4 20 or not..😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Abhishek_King



Aiyyo! Why won't I feel jealous? As for now, you gave me a neck-to-neck competition in Diwali Tag Contest...😭😭 But,I'm still happy that my NON-animated one gave the same to your animated one.


hehehe 😆
competitive opponents make the competition fun! 😉 right? 😃
Obviously, you are such a good creator! 😊😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
hinu di cuming up wid fun post 2morow..pralal ki luv ish story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
okay so...
here with some announcements...
first of all, i need some tying/writing coz i'm pretty unaware of the bhils+boondi+sakhaveer...ik Panna Dhai has a history and Krishna is brave and Rao Surtan was just a puppet, but nothing more than that...as Anjori+Roshi di are doing the grahics, i think Hina di has written stories, so i think she can hel me with these bits...
ROshu di...the avie was beautiful...just try to make the text appear as if its a part of the image..its standing out for now...
btw...we can do with one sig of Faisal+Sharad showing the growth from Kunwar Pratap to Maharana Pratap...
I've almost finished typing the beginning...after which our story will start...
the headings/banners. whatever u call them...which announce the begining of a new section/part/subhead...one needs to be made for Kunwar Pratap also...and the Kunwar Pratap one must be Faisal Pratap only...because the write up shows the beginning at that time...
So basically, the story is that Pratap is having flashbacks of his rajyabhishekh...if we can have avis of an excited and cheering praja and Pratap & Ajabdeh in royal attire smiling at them...that would compliment the flashback really well, and a Rawatji+Pratap and JB+Ajab sig too (try to keep these as Sharad and Rachna)...
then the fb ends and its night and Pratap and Ajabdeh are sitting in their room, after taking off all their jewelry for the night...Pratap is in deep thought and Ajab is beside him..
Then Kunwar Amar comes shouting that my dajiraaj is maharana...is we can have some Ajab sigs where she has motherly expressions...a little stern, a little understanding...
then...the Maharana's story starts...to start the beginning, i think we need some banner sort with Dharti ka veer putr-Maharana Pratap written on it...majority of it should be covered by Faisal and Sharad...and small faces can be shown of the other characters...and then we start with Kunwar Pratap Singh banner/sig which has only Faisal as this is the beginning... we can have some Pratap's veerta sigs also as the write up proceeds, talking about Pratap, his valiance, his veerta, his kindness...then a speciall lotus scene sig(the first time we saw JB on the show and Pratap brought a lotus for her pooja..the epi1 on BKVPMP) followed by Pratap+JB sigs and Pratap+US sigs, Pratap+Shakti+Vikram too when we talk about his love for his family...maybe a family sig where we can include all Chittor family members (not VB here) with SB and DB too...
having established the base of MP, then comes the Afghan invasion and ShamksKhan stuff...we need pics and siggies and avies here too...some avies where we can show SK's evil laughter...(Anjori, we can have a tag for him too, coz he i sgoing to make a re-entry afterwards)...Pratap in the war pics, with Rajrana Bahadur(tag here) Pratap fighting and then finally hoisting the flag on the minar...some Pratap ki jai jaikar sigs and avies too...there was a group of lohaars too who declared him as their yuvraj...in one line we can mention how he won everyone's heart and stopped the Jauhar and became the darling of the masses...and in one line, we can also say that he started catching traitors...
by this time...the intros would be of Pratap, Shakti, US, JB, SB(maybbe), Rajrana Bahadur, Shamskhan, Som, maybe Rawatji too...
here we can add a fun post(Hina di's speciality) where Pratap says that he cud detect traitors and doo anything and etc etc and Ajab will start arguing ki meri sachchai to jaan nahi paye, etc etc...or anything of this sort to make people laugh in the tensed situation...
and after this...will come DB...(new section)
DB's intro...and we start with DB's conspiracies...there is the vish in thandai, etc etc...try make one sig for each conspiracy(Anjori, i need the list of these conspiracies...and do tell me when is Jagmaal born, he is somewhere here only...we may also have Kokoyaji's intro too..
Then we come to Pratap's gurukul time(new)...his encounter with Guru Raaghvendra, and the entry of that man hired SK and his elder brother(i dont remember his name..something like Abdul Khan, someone please clarify) we go through gurukul days(these section needs to be well eqipped with graphics...Gurukul, Pratap's new friends, Acharya ji, Gurukul atmosphere with Pratap+Guruji+Aashram helpers, that evil man)...we'll go through his lessons, failures, learnings, punishments...into of Chakri and Vyeni...and then...
(new sec)Jagmaal's birth and the competition between Pratap & Shakti, and DB's attempt to injure Pratap, Guruji declaring Pratap as his best student, the pratiyogita, ShamsKhan's return, Som's death and Shakti's death sentence, then him leaving with Rawatji...this, on the whole is a vey long and mixed section, we need to think an appropriate heading for it...and we need sigs for all the evnts i mentioned...especially the competiton which was a hot topic...do give the glimpses of all three queens JB,SB,DB as all were involved...Guruji, Som, SB, Rawatji intro here i think...
then comes the ordinary phase in which Pratap+Jb are banished and they live in jungles and JB's fear of Pratap's life, making him wow to not pick up weapons again, etc etc(now Anjori,, i need u to tell me the exact time whene Panna Dhai and Krishnaa entered, i believe there was some Duda also(i just heard the name, idk who is he)..the killing of tiger, rescuing Krishnaa's father, Sakhaveer, Rao Surtan, Bairam Khan...etc etc...and from here, my knowledge starts to go downhill...will try and catch up with this stuff, if someone can tell me...but abhi ke liye...i have named a lot of siggies and avies and tags to be made(trust me, the writing is even more elaborate)...till the time Roshu di and Anjori work on these and improvise each other's work...i'll try and do the write up till here by 15-16...i wud love it if some help shows up regarding the next phase...and if Hina di can think of some fun posts to insert in between...
PS-I may be sounding like the leader, but i am not. Sorry for this dussaahas. The Captain is Anjori only :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
saying so much and having to do stuff three times more than this...i feel as if i have to make a super-complicated classy dish in the masterchef kitchen in only 3 hours...i'm WHIPPED!!! coz i have to study for my maths FA too...
oh goodness me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Aru_A

saying so much and having to do stuff three times more than this...i feel as if i have to make a super-complicated classy dish in the masterchef kitchen in only 3 hours...i'm WHIPPED!!! coz i have to study for my maths FA too...

oh goodness me...



🤣 what a description of this round...😆😆

But you have to make the dish in time...😆 BTW,good luck for ur FA...😃

@Anjori di mujhe butter laga rhe ho aap!🤣

ONLY 6 DAYS LEFT.😛

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