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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Anjori...the tags are beautiful...

but one suggestion...and this is for all graphics...

from my POV, the graphics shud be real...real as in,not with the artificial colours and frames..they make the pictures look unreal and fake...try make them as real as possibe...give a bit traditional touch to them...merged pictures with a running hand font and no new colour shades on it (like pink and yellow...basically, the bright one, not the shade which can contrast with the pics)..they look best...i suggest u make the pics simple, real and royal, just by the glimmer that the real pictures(before edit) provide...

but u all know better, i'm just a third opinion in pics case...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

doing some trials here now:

royal pagdi

Edited by Aru_A - 11 years ago

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

^ i like that font and shade...

btw...this font (georgia) doesn't look good in bold...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

okay...so...here with my daal-chawal idea (omg, i just had that for dinner :P)

so...instead of making a normal and beautiful thread with introduction followed by title song followed by character sketchs and then the events one by one...i suggest we shud do it the creative way...

we start with flashbacks...of Maharana Pratap Singh's rajya-abhishekh...then we come to reality and its Pratap sitting in his bedroom at night, after the abhishekh in the morning...Ajabdeh comes, says that he's tired n a small discussion, then Amar enters, jumping around that my dajiraaj is maharana...and then we start the tale of how he became the maharana...and we proceed on his journey from Kunwar Pratap Singh to Maharana Pratap Singh Sisodia...

we narrate the story..speaking about all the major events(i believe Anjori listed them on the previous page, though i wud like to make some additons)...

as we narrate the story, we come across iits characters, its imporatant parts...so between th estory...we would pause and give the intro bit...and then continue...

in between, we could even pause the story and show some nok-jhok between PrAja (the husband-wife stuff...i'm actually indicating Hina di's fun posts here) and we could resume...

then the story could end with Ajab tellling Amar to go to sleep and after he leaves, even PrAja go to bed...

then like an epilogue, we cud list his rest of life (haldighati and jungles and Ajabdeh's death and then his own in the final post...and that's how our thread's write up would end... :)

so...howz my idea...???

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

okay...

Anjori...i don't know about the following ppl/topics:

i don't know much about Panna Dhai, Krishnaa, Rana Kheta+bhils...

i do want to include the 4 ranis...maybe not in the beginning..but in the middle, after VB's marriage...just their pics...

all this rajaabhishekh, boondi, normal, sakhaveer, bhils, yuddh, idk anything about these...only one line...

there is Kunwar Shakti's departure too...and i believe there was one more encounter of Pratap with Meera bai before her story was told, i want to know about it...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

and roshu di...don;t want to sound rude, but lyrics me thodi si galtiyan hai...some corrections needed...

and i also have this idea...

we can take all the bg musics of the show and post a line in a specific scene with an appropriate action following it...it will give bg music effect and also justify the music..

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Roshini

@RangeenCreation

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Aru_A
and roshu di...don;t want to sound rude, but lyrics me thodi si galtiyan hai...some corrections needed...
and i also have this idea...
we can take all the bg musics of the show and post a line in a specific scene with an appropriate action following it...it will give bg music effect and also justify the music..

no prblm..c i hv edited it..ab mujhe galat nhi lag rha h bt still u c it

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Nripendra

@Abhisheking

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

So guys...

In beginning you guys were full of determination but that is being lowered down as the days are passing.So, hurry up and catch all the things sooner...MP is such a vast topic that merely 10 days are not enough for it so you guys should hurry...😛

And I liked the unity here😃...no complaints,no bossing till now.👏..only team discussion,interaction and some chit-chatting...😆

Edited by Abhishek_King - 11 years ago

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Abhishek_King
Reserved...will update this post as I come from school...😆

But,@anjori di shouldn't u have kept your Diwali tag secret as we were told to have it, before the results?😲

diii ???? 😲
i'm just 15!! 😆
oh, i didn't delete it... omfg!!! 🤢
i thought i removed it 😭
shit! shit! shit! ...