AntarMahal- The Palace Politics- A PrAja FF Note Pg 19!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: Luvkrsna

HI

I M A NEWBIE HERE. CAME ACROSS UR STORY N IT IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. I SIMPLY LOVE HISTORICAL STORTIES. DIS ONE WOULD DEFINATELY EXPLORE UNSEEN BOND N UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN PRAJA N HOW THEY SUPPORT AND STAND BY EACH OTHER. WAITING FOR D STORY TO UNFOLD.SORRY, BUT I MAY NOT BE ABLE TO COMMENT OFTEN DUE TO COMING BOARDS.

NITYA

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Hi Mahishee

Nice update!

Loved it!

Hope you update soon.

How's ur exam going?

Sorry currently my personal life has me a bit upset so I may not be able to comment and even if I do then i doubt they will be detailed ones as I'm sometimes in a bad or sad mood due to it.

But I'm reading the updates.

Hope u update soon.

All the best for ur remaining papers!

Love

Sayli

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Resss

Me firstie

UNRESS

Mahishee OMG such fireworks filled update

JB-DB face-off: Use of the Doha was a really nice idea. It clearly describes the role JB plays in her children's lives.
DB is the most cunning woman ever and JB can see right through it
JB knows how to clean up messes and also remind people their place
Ajabde needed some tough love
You know when I read about the letter form JB I was like maybe it was from DB but no it was from her and JB is right- Ajabde is also at fault
Loved how JB made sure to get Ajabde set things right
DB was yeh kaise ho gaya??

Loved DB-Ajabde convo- Ajabde proved why she was not an easy target for anyone
Her giving her the sheera and telling her that she didn't mix anything in it unlike her - that was like😎

DB screaming for cleanse of the room and I go- room nahi tumko zaroorat shuddhi ki

Pratap being unable to console her was a good touch as it showed that there will be times when he won't be able to help her and she would have to deal with it on her own

SB-JB convo- again a brilliant stroke

I enjoyed reading this
And have a feeling about whom Ajabde gets so happy about in the end (Am going to keep it in and not divulge- keeping the suspense intact)

Loved it Mahishee

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Hey Mahishee

A good and tight scripted update. This story in particular has a bound scale in terms of time. Things change fast and are well connected.

Loved the Doha on guru shishya. JB indeed was one such guru to be respected, learned from and to be loved forget deeds. She being strict left no room for Ajab for self pity. Yes you made a mistake and should repent in time for the same. Also a clear indication that if you can guess who was behind it then you should had been careful as it deals with lot many lives. The opponent is cunning enough to hurt innocents. And if you like this fall pray to them you too unintendedly will play with innocent lives. Also with or without position being a responsible human should be your second nature. Ajab curing the patients on her own will fetch her lot of support in the time of need.

JB kept KP at bay as if he would had helped her in any way the citizens would had forgiven her for the sake of KP. But today she earned their respect as well. Also she has to learn to fight her own battles without any help.

Glad Ajab found the confidence in her to give it back to DB without a hint of revenge. DB jyada dhua mat karva Lena ekto tum Hi gir padogi!!! Aur kahi galati se tumhara nakara pati kho gaya to tum to na ghar ki rahogi na ghar ki... Phir to sheets bhi nahi milega...

Loving all conversations in this series. I think even if Ajab looses some of her innocence its fine coz she will be able to safeguard, serve and enchant many more with her protective stance. This will help her serve KP' s purpose of life in a better way.

Me too will keep mum on... How's the preparation going for exams?? Watch ur health!!!

Originally posted by: PrAjalover

Superb Update!!

Hope your exams are going well !!

Loved the way ajab gained back her confidence, Pratap trying to console her, how caring!!

DB ki chaal uspe hi ulti ho gayi>>

DB bach ke rehna...

Ajab Db ki naak me dam karde na😡

Lots of Love

Tijil