AntarMahal- The Palace Politics- A PrAja FF Note Pg 19!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Mnp279



Hey Tijil

DB toh DB hai!! And she is far more ahead than we all think so just wait n watch!!

Thanks!!

Do check out the banner if you haven't😃



Nice banner yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

It's credit goes to Sandhya Di😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Mnp279


Yeh kya😲
Itne time baad comment woh bhi ress???

Unress soon!😆😆
Just kidding😆
But not the last line😆😆

Aur banner bhi dekh lo😛


UNRESS

Aa gayi main waapis to comment

Mahishee entering the world of kitchen politics now - am so excited
Sabse zyaada politics kitchen mein hi hoti as per Ekta Kapoor ke serials and even MP mein we saw it
Am really excited how you show Ajabde's journey
JB vs DB - expect fireworks all over, mind talks were amazing
VB is still a scaredy cat
Pratap is a bit vague - is he aware of the politics or not -maybe he is and distances himself from it to focus on more important tasks- we will see that later

DB is clearly showing her ruthless side and the fake dramatic one as well

US I believe will be tharki and paan boy as usual rahega
I'm excited for this new story of yours and it promises a lot of fireworks too

All the very best for your exams

Ajabde ki tarrif na ki maine - Ajabde shows ki she has a brain on her two shoulders so she is going to tackle every obstacle but she will also get hurt or say fall in the beginning
Psyched to see this journey of the Kunwarani into the Maharani of Mewar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: twilightlover29


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Aa gayi main waapis to comment

Mahishee entering the world of kitchen politics now - am so excited
Sabse zyaada politics kitchen mein hi hoti as per Ekta Kapoor ke serials and even MP mein we saw it
Am really excited how you show Ajabde's journey
JB vs DB - expect fireworks all over, mind talks were amazing
VB is still a scaredy cat
Pratap is a bit vague - is he aware of the politics or not -maybe he is and distances himself from it to focus on more important tasks- we will see that later

DB is clearly showing her ruthless side and the fake dramatic one as well

US I believe will be tharki and paan boy as usual rahega
I'm excited for this new story of yours and it promises a lot of fireworks too

All the very best for your exams

Ajabde ki tarrif na ki maine - Ajabde shows ki she has a brain on her two shoulders so she is going to tackle every obstacle but she will also get hurt or say fall in the beginning
Psyched to see this journey of the Kunwarani into the Maharani of Mewar



Aww...
Thanks di!
Finally unress... Yayyy

Yes fireworks toh honge Hi!
I am excited too
Just wrote a bit of next one today... Hopefully I can give it by Friday

Pratap ka status pata chalega but I think you can guess it by the way he talked to his "Chotimaa"

US yup he is a paan boy jisko "unpaan" karna padega😆😆


@bold: Wow!! Can't make out how you guessed it👏
But I think it was obvious😆

Thanks anyways!!!

Love you😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress

Me firstie!!!

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Pratap is team Ajabde yayyy
Loved the stolen praja moments
Poor Pratap bechaare ki family ladies ne usko baat na karne di Ajabde se😆 but kaafi kcuh baatein kar li hi
Loved the way he showed her around the mahal and the convo about the Jauhar kaksh was touching
Both of them are comfortable and trust each other as friends which is necessary and also good

JB: Awesome woman, love her to the core. She knows what DB is upto and acts accordingly. I hope she gives it back to US-DB in the best way possible
I want fireworks there Mahishee

VB - please gain a backbone I mean aren't you a Rajputaani and you got scared of DB
I understand DB is bhootni and devil but still try standing up fro yourself

US - you are a useless paan boy

DB- A woman so despised but has to be applauded for her cunning. She knows what she wants and how to get it. Totally unafraid to threaten and stoop low to get what she desires. A character that speaks a lot about ambitions, desires, greed, lust for riches and her ambitions broke a family apart. Her I don't care what happens to anyone else as long as I'm winning attitude destroyed alot and she was to be blamed for Jagmal's insanity as he always fell short in front of his brother and she pointed that out for sure

Mahishee am enjoying the way you are bringing out this cunning nature of DB, JB's alertness, Ajabde is naive but she will learn for sure and I would love to see ajabde tackle some issues on her own but that needs time

I feel that Ajabde is hurt that so many people fell ill that she won't be in a good space but Pratap and JB will definitely help her overcome all this

Brilliant update as ever

Mine is coming shortly
Edited by twilightlover29 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Ress

Me firstie!!!

UNRESS

Pratap is team Ajabde yayyy
Loved the stolen praja moments
Poor Pratap bechaare ki family ladies ne usko baat na karne di Ajabde se😆 but kaafi kcuh baatein kar li hi
Loved the way he showed her around the mahal and the convo about the Jauhar kaksh was touching
Both of them are comfortable and trust each other as friends which is necessary and also good

JB: Awesome woman, love her to the core. She knows what DB is upto and acts accordingly. I hope she gives it back to US-DB in the best way possible
I want fireworks there Mahishee

VB - please gain a backbone I mean aren't you a Rajputaani and you got scared of DB
I understand DB is bhootni and devil but still try standing up fro yourself

US - you are a useless paan boy

DB- A woman so despised but has to be applauded for her cunning. She knows what she wants and how to get it. Totally unafraid to threaten and stoop low to get what she desires. A character that speaks a lot about ambitions, desires, greed, lust for riches and her ambitions broke a family apart. Her I don't care what happens to anyone else as long as I'm winning attitude destroyed alot and she was to be blamed for Jagmal's insanity as he always fell short in front of his brother and she pointed that out for sure

Mahishee am enjoying the way you are bringing out this cunning nature of DB, JB's alertness, Ajabde is naive but she will learn for sure and I would love to see ajabde tackle some issues on her own but that needs time

I feel that Ajabde is hurt that so many people fell ill that she won't be in a good space but Pratap and JB will definitely help her overcome all this

Brilliant update as ever

Mine is coming shortly



Hey Garu di!
First of all I shouldn't have pressurised you for the update
Don't know what's happening to me these days...
Sorry😛


Coming to update
Praja is always together❤️

Glad you liked the Praja moments

Thank you😳

Of course there is Diwali(fireworks) coming up😆😉

And a big showdown too😃
So fasten your seatbelts!!!

VB is gungi but will take time to open up

US is under DB's control and no one can help him😆

I am so very happy that you are liking DBs character portrayal
Glad you loved the update

Next one is full of action as our team gets to work to fix up things

Love you too😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Mahishee This update was full of Praja moments despite the plotting and scheming... Loved all of it. Very well coordinated all that was.
I agree with DB as a head strong woman for what she intends to have. Only that she was on the wrong side as far as her loyalties towards Mewar were considered. In a Royal family devoid of personal attention to each; trying to gain upper hand for your son was nothing wrong. Just that your son never had it in him to be king neither did you shape him up well to be one. N yes playing with innocent lives to prove your point was wicked and thus you never gained the respect and the position you so wanted.

Pratap is in love with Ajab was a relief. And their stolen moments were sooo WOOOW!!!😳 Thank God they got their room back. DB how long were you thinking of messing up the room to keep them apart. Their conversations were not quintessentially romantic but they spoke everything and romance. Hope here too they are teenagers like the age they actually got married. If so then the conversations were aptly designed. The Johar room talk was touching specially when she asked for the strength to carry her part if needed.

What happened the next day shall teach Ajab a lot of things... Glad JB stood by her kids!!! When she got the letter in the morning I swear my heart skipped a beat!!! Hope she is saved this time by JB n KP... Maybe she will do seva of all who are ill due to her health. And thus will win peoples trust back. Hopefully indirectly or directly DB's deeds are exposed in public... Something like Jaggu eats one of those food items and in panic mode she blurs all out 😉😉😉


But loving the wickedness here
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Touching update Mahishee..
DB teri toh😡
Aww.. so sweet PrAja moments...
Pagal US🤓
Ab Pratap ka kya hoga??

Well i hv a question... As in the story, there are 4 main ranis- JB, BD, SB and VB but how many more ranis will you show and how many did US actually have??

Lots of Love
Tijil
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Mahishee This update was full of Praja moments despite the plotting and scheming... Loved all of it. Very well coordinated all that was.

I agree with DB as a head strong woman for what she intends to have. Only that she was on the wrong side as far as her loyalties towards Mewar were considered. In a Royal family devoid of personal attention to each; trying to gain upper hand for your son was nothing wrong. Just that your son never had it in him to be king neither did you shape him up well to be one. N yes playing with innocent lives to prove your point was wicked and thus you never gained the respect and the position you so wanted.

Pratap is in love with Ajab was a relief. And their stolen moments were sooo WOOOW!!!😳 Thank God they got their room back. DB how long were you thinking of messing up the room to keep them apart. Their conversations were not quintessentially romantic but they spoke everything and romance. Hope here too they are teenagers like the age they actually got married. If so then the conversations were aptly designed. The Johar room talk was touching specially when she asked for the strength to carry her part if needed.

What happened the next day shall teach Ajab a lot of things... Glad JB stood by her kids!!! When she got the letter in the morning I swear my heart skipped a beat!!! Hope she is saved this time by JB n KP... Maybe she will do seva of all who are ill due to her health. And thus will win peoples trust back. Hopefully indirectly or directly DB's deeds are exposed in public... Something like Jaggu eats one of those food items and in panic mode she blurs all out 😉😉😉


But loving the wickedness here


Sujata di

Thank you very much!
DB was the one responsible for her and Jagmaal's condition. Being ambitious is not wrong but curbing others freedom and destroying innocents for them is something that is not at all acceptable.

Glad you liked the Praja moments😃

Yup here they are teenagers like in the show...
I will mention their ages when the story takes a leap in the future...

Thanks again!

Why? What was so scary in the letter?
You thought JB left? Naa... That can't happen

And I am afraid I am not exposing DB here... Not so soon
It would spoil the fun😉




I am so so happy that everyone is liking the progress of the story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: PrAjalover

Touching update Mahishee..

DB teri toh😡
Aww.. so sweet PrAja moments...
Pagal US🤓
Ab Pratap ka kya hoga??

Well i hv a question... As in the story, there are 4 main ranis- JB, BD, SB and VB but how many more ranis will you show and how many did US actually have??

Lots of Love
Tijil


Hey Tijil

Thanks!😃

Glad you liked Praja moments😃

US is a paan boy😃😆😆

Yup even here there are four main ones...
Since my story is about Antarmahal, I have introduced Mandakini Devi as DB's supporter coz I didn't want her to be alone in her plots. She is a fictional one
And I'll be taking some random names here and there like I took the name of Shanti Baisa in the first chpt... They can be real or fictional

Well US had many many wives, nearly 40 of them
So I can't cover so many Ranis in the story😆

And Pratap's Ranis too will come in picture after sometime...
He had 17 wives

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