PrAja FF : Meri Aashiqui Bas Tum Hi Ho - part 9 on pg 14 /18th feb'16 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Teaser traler ke liye thank you Apeksha! We are all waiting for the update when praja meet... update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Arre waah!!!
Maha episode!! Ek toh serial mein we are getting and now...this story is also having a Maha episode!!!!
Me is waiting 😛 first thing tomorrow morning update this story so that I can easily read and comment jaldi jaldi ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Ohhh the promo has me all excited

Eagerly waiting for this update

Baccha my baccha

Am so looking forward for the next one but 1st is dur re beech mein ek teaser aur dena pleaseee

Loads of love



Thanks dida🤗 next part will be posted tomorrow as promised😉ab dekho dur kaha kal hi toh hai 1st oct😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: aditi_angel

Hey apeksha...I think we are interacting very first time nice to meet u ... and I must say I loved your story ...hope u will update soon



Hello aditi(hope that's your name) Nice to meet you too🤗
Thanks a lot..😊 glad that you like it😃

will update tomorrow..😉
Edited by ApekshaM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: poeple1234

Teaser traler ke liye thank you Apeksha! We are all waiting for the update when praja meet... update soon😊



You'r welcome vibha! will update tomorrow😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Arre waah!!!
Maha episode!! Ek toh serial mein we are getting and now...this story is also having a Maha episode!!!!
Me is waiting 😛 first thing tomorrow morning update this story so that I can easily read and comment jaldi jaldi ❤️



ha double maha episode😛 will update jaldi for sure😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Hello ppl..!! I'm here the maha episode updates! Hope you enjoy reading and leave love😊

Part 5
Maan ajabde and soubhagyavati all were looking stunning with their elegant dresses ready to flatter many hearts by their beauty and all thanks to maan..

Flashback-
Maan knocked the door of the room in which ajabde disappeared for nth time.. but there was no sign of her..
Maan: ab aa bhi jaayiye ajabde..! Hum sab pehle hi bohot late hochuke hai..
Bhago: ha ajabde.. jaldi kijiye!
And gods grace.. this time the door opened and a lady with chudi with big jhumka's witha braided hair, bindi, bangles and a pair of anklets.. she looked pretty
Maan: wow ajabde.. you'r looking so pretty..
Bhago:ha ajabde.. bohot acchi lag rahi ho
ajabde jumped hearing the compliment
Ajab: haina?!
Maan: but hum log party me jaa rahe hai.. and tum jo pehni ho, its too traditional for a party...
Ajabde face became dull
Ajab: hum jaante hai maan but humare paas aise dresses nahi hai toh..
Maan: so what abhi khareed lete hai!
Ajab: kya?!
Maan: wait a min.
She dailed someones no. on her mobile and asked that person to come to her guest house..
Ajabde was staring maan in utter confusion..what she is upto..
Maan then grabbed both ajabde and soubhagyavati to her car on a drive to her guest house after taking enough permission of ajabde's parents
Maan stopped the car infront of a big banglow which seemed to as a palace itself.
All got out of the car and were enjoying the sight of the royal palace
Bhago:hmm.. toh yeh hai rajmahal.. wah! Kitna accha hai..
Maan: nahi nahi bhago yeh humare guest house hai mahal nahi..
Ajabde and soubhagyavati were shocked to hear this.. this was a guest house!! If only a guest house is like this then how big the rajmahal would be..
soubhagyavati passed out after hearing this information but was saved from hitting the ground by ajabde as she patted her to wake up and soon bhago was all well
Bhago: baapre..!! yeh guest house hai!! Itne mein toh humara poora college aajayega..
Ajabde gave a shut up look to her whereas maan laughed on how excited they both are.
Maan: chalo..
They then entered the hall to find a man standing near the dining table,,facing his back to them.
Maan: Hakim!!
He turned around hereing his name aloud

Hakim khan was the bestest fashion designer in entire udaigarh and thus he was now the personal designer to the royals.. he was working for them since around 16 years..but what gave him happiness is the royals treated him equal as though even he was a important part of their family..
Hakim: hey maan!!
They both shared a quick hug
Hakim:Where are the girls?
Maan looked pointingly towards ajabde and soubhagyavati
Hakim: Oh my my..!! Inka toh full makeover karna padega..
Ajabde stared at maan as if asking what is going on here.. maan as though reading her thoughts introduced hakim to them
Maan: he is my friend as well as our royal designer.. aaj yeh tum dono ko party ke liye taiyaar karenge..
Bhago: kyaa?!

Hakim then approached the girls who stood there confused
Hakim: hello ladies..! I'm hakim khan one of the best desig... ah i mean THE best designer of entire rajputana!!
He forwarded his hand for a hand shake.. and the ladies took is with a smile
Ajab: hey! I'm ajabde..
Hakim: hmm interesting name.. may be i've heard this name before also..
He was scratching his forehead Little to remember where he heard this name..
Bhago: hello, I'm soubhagyavati.
This broke his chain of thoughts.
Hakim: soup what!?
Bhago: arr..not soup!!! Its soubhagyavati!!
Hakim still didn't get her name so he narrowed his eyebrows
Ajabde then came to rescue
Ajab: ah..you can call her bhago!
Hakim: oh bhago!! You mean run.?! But what kind of name is that..
He laughed a bit.
Soubhagyavati's temper has raised by now and she was about to retort him but her she was cut off by maan

Maan: Oh come on hakim..! humne tumhe yaha par indono keliye ek acchi se dress doondne keliye bulaya hai.. so you'r concern is not in their names rather than you have to concentrate on what they are gonna wear for today's party!
Hakim: sure babes!
And took a moment to look at them from top to bottom and asked maan to get ready as well till he can give her friends a makeover..
Maan was reluctant at first but then gave in to his request as its was already late..

After an hour

Maan came out from one of the room of guest house. She was wearing a shoulderless bottle green gown which was slitted along her lower thigh that went down till her ankles, with minimal makeup, her hairs were tied in a side messy bun with some of the loose curls touching her shoulder , she wore a diamond studded long earings, a clutch, and a platinum braclet to keep it simple with her signature nose stud adorning her glowing face..

she was down pacing in the hall waiting for her friends to come soon..she turned around as she saw Hakim khan come out of the room as if he was done with any operation.
"Kya hua kaha hai woh log?" Maan asked hakim as she was curious to know how her friends look
Hakim: relax sweet heart..! Kitni tension leti ho tum! Wait..
He then calls both the ladies to come out of the room..

Maan's face formed a O shape seeing the beauties standing infront of her..

Ajabde was wearing a cream,long lace evening designer gown with a pair of high heels,, her hair was let free with a small front braid tucked up with a hairpin on one side ,she was wearing stones' studded earings, a braclet and a clutch in her hand.. with minimal make up on..her smoky eyes were adding an extra beauty touch to her..

Soubhagyavati was looking like a pretty doll as she was wear a black cocktail dress with her hair neatly braided in a fish tale.. a pretty stone studded braclet, a pair of stone stud earings and a clutch in her hand. and at last a black high heeled sandals.

Maan: OMG!! Hakim!! This is..
Hakim: Gorgeous isn't it?
He smirked as he felt proud of his designs and also the ladies who carried it well enough to flatter many hearts...

Maan hugged hakim thanking him for the help he did..

Hakim: No worries babes..!!
He then looked at the 2 ladies who were standing there wearing his masterpiece and hugged them tightly starling both the ladies
Hakim: all the best darlings!! Rock the party..muah
Although ajabde and soubhagyavati were uncomfortable by his move first they took it as a friendly gesture of the royals when maan nodded in assurance..

They smiled at him and hakim bid bye to all the 3 gorgeous ladies..
-Flashback ends

Maan: hmm...so ready for the party?
"YES..!!"Ajabde and soubhagyavati jumped in excitement..
They all shared a hug and cheered themselves..

#In Car#
Maan: so girls lets party!!!!
She started the car with a thud and now she was driving it with so much speed as though the car was racing with air.

Maan: waise ajabde ek baat poochu?
Ajab: ha ha kyu nahi?
Maan: tumhari mom.. rajmahal walon se itni nafrat kyu karti hai??
Ajabde had no answer to this question as she never question her mom about this..
Ajab: pata nahi..

#ajabde's house#
"Usse kabhi bhi pata nahi chalna chahiye.."
Sajjan said worried sitting on the sofa..
Jagawat yawned listening to his wife' going on and on with the same topic.
Sajjan seeing this got up from the sofa in anger
Sajjan: yeh sab aap hi ki wajah se hua hai.. aapke kehne par meine bheja hai meine apni pyaari beti ko

Flashback-
Jagawat dragged her inside their bedroom..
Sajjan freed herself after reaching the room
Sajjan: yeh kya kar rahe hai aap..??!
Jagawat: sajjan.. jaane do na ajab ko party mein.. bas aaj raat ki hi toh baat hai..kuch hi der mein wapas aajayegi..
Sajjan: aap.. aap yeh baat jaante huye bhi ki woh log humari ajabde ke jaan ke peeche pade the.. phir bhi aap usse waha bhejna soch bhi kaise sakte hai??
Jagawat: jaanta hu mein sajjan par iss wakt mujhe meri beti ki khushi important hai..
Sajjan: ha toh mein bhi ushi ki khushi chahti hu na..
Jagawat: toh phir usse waha jaane do.. plz.. ajabde ki khushi ke liye..
Sajjan thought for a moment but then gave in..
Sajjan: thik hai.. ajabde ki khushi keliye..
-Flashback ends

Jagawat: par sajjan.. usse yeh jaan ne ka poora hak hai..
Sajjan: ha poora hak hai.. par agar usse sach pata chal gaya ki uske apne baap ne usse maarne ki koshish ki thi toh..
Jagawat: don't worry.. sab thik hojayega!
He calmed her down.

#raj mahal#
The car stopped at the gates of the rajmahal as ajabde, maan and soubhagyavati got down the car and entered the palace observing every nook of that place..
Ajabde got some wierd flashes of a 'small little girl playing in the lawn of the palace with boy who seemed little elder to that girl..' she blinked her eyes for a few seconds..

Before she can think over what has happened just now.. maan dragged her inside the palace hall where all the guests were busy in their self activities..
But as they entered all of them turned to her and what was pleasant scene was that, they thought.
"What a beauty" one of the men commented a little louder for her to hear it..Maan nudged ajabde teasingly as she smiled at the people..

Maan made ajabde stand at a corner as she spotted her mom dad and other family member.. and she rushed to take their blessings after assuring her that she'll be back within few minutes..

Ajabde stood there bored.. she saw soubhagyavati already on the dance floor flirting with a boy, she smiled to herself seeing her flirt so openly
Ajab: yeh bhago bhi na..
She turned around as she felt a pat on her shoulder
Ajab:maan!! Thank god yaar tum aagayi.. pata hai hum kitna bore ho rahe the.
Maan was back after meeting all her family members as she doesn't want to leave ajabde alone to be bored..
Maan: i was right!! You're getting bored..well come.. let me show you my house! Btw bhago kaha hai?
Ajabde pointed her eyes in the direction where bhago was enjoying the dance.
Maan: Oh my!! She is such a..
Ajab: flirt!!
Ajabde completed her sentence as the girls laughed
Maan: anyways let her enjoy.. tum humare saath chalo..
Ajabde nodded and followed maan's lead

Maan was showing her entire palace starting with the royal kitchen to the 30 huge rooms..nope she wasn't doing show off here.. she was indeed happy chattering with ajabde while showing her the royal palace..
They were walking in the corridor of the 1st floor as suddenly a maid holding a tray of juices for the guests bumped into ajabde as a result all the juices were on her and her dress was totally a mess
Maan: Oh shit!! Ajabde you okay??
Ajab: ha woh..
She then scolded the maid for her carelessness
Maan: What the hell..!! Aap logon ko thik se kaam karna nahi aata kya?? Saara dress kharab kar diya inka.
by now the maid was shivering as she knew that bow her job was at stake..

Ajab:rehne do na maan..
Maan:nahi ajabde.. agar inn logon ko jyada free choda toh aisa hi galtiyaan karte rahenge..
Maid: kshama kare yuvraniji..
Maan: ab jaayiye yaha se..
Maan was guilty that because of her ajabde got into this mess.. if she didn't brought her up she couldn't get into this.
Maan: i'm sorry ajabde.. humari wajah se..
Ajab: offo maan.. bas dress hi toh kharab hua hai.. koi baat nahi.. but,, ab hum iss dress ka kya kare..
Maan: don't worry,,tum humare chalo., hum tumhe dusri dress dedenge..thik?
Ajab: thanks..

They were about to go but a maid came there running informed maan about her friends' arrival..
Maan: oh god.!! Unn logon ko bhi abhi aana tha.?!
Ajab: koi baat nahi.. tum apne friends ko receive karo.. hum manage karlenge!
Maan: sure?!
Ajab: pakka!
Maan: thank you so much ajabde!! Aap yaha se seedhe jaayiye,,phir dhaye waha se stairs leke 3rd kamra.. wardrobe mein kapde hai.. jo chahe pehenlo..hum jald hi aajayenge..
Ajabde nodded with a smile as maan went to receive her friends and she went in the direction guided by maan..
Finally she was up in the 1st floor but she forgot which room maan told her to change in she remembered her saying 3rd room but she was confused from right side 3rd or from the left side.. she tried to remember again but failed she finally made a guess and entered the 3rd room of the left side..

#Inside the room#
Ajabde closed the door behind and after making sure it was bolted properly.. she went towards the washroom and turned the knob to open it which she felt somewhat jammed..
And the next moment the door opened with a force pulling it inside which made her loose balance and hit something,, she closed her eyes fearing to hit the ground but that fall never came.. as a pair of strong arms held her in a strong grip.
She opened her eyes to know what made ger float in the air and she was treated with a pleasant scene of the prince holding her in arms preventing her from falling,, his one hand was around her waist holding her firmly and another grabbed her hand for the same.

Pratap was stressed so thought to take a hot shower before meeting the next set of guests.. he was done with his shower and as soon as he opened the door he felt someone fall over him so he caught the girl before she could fall "miss. Chawlwali?!" he eyes were wide in shock. But suddenly her kohl filled eyes caught his attention..they had an eyelock but soon they realised their position and ajabde jerked herself from his grip,,
Ajab: tum?! Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??!
Pratap: pehle tum batao tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?? Ohh i got it.. tum yaha chori karne aayi ho!! Chor kahi ki..
Ajab: kya??!! Hum chor hai??
Pratap: oops.. tum toh ladki ho na,, toh you are a chorni.!!
Ajab: nahi..!! hum chor... i mean chorni nahi hai..
Pratap: nahi nahi tum chorni hi ho..!!
Ajab: humne kaha na hum chorni nahi hai..!
Pratap: ha toh humne bhi kaha ki tum chorni hi ho..
Ajab: nahi hai..!
Pratap: tum ho..!
Ajab: nahi!!
pratap: ha!!
Pratap with his every words moved a step forward towards her and ajabde a step backward and by now her back hit the wall and he was caging her by keeping his both hands on the walls blocking her way..
till now he is only in a towel around his waist..few drops of waters from his hair flowed along his well sculpted body.. this made her swallow the lump formed in her throat.. she tried to move away but pratap moved more closer to her making her heart thump against her chest rapidly.. tehy were so close that they can breath eachothers air..ajabde's breath was becoming heavier by passing seconds.. she then regaining her sense pushed him with all her force that she could muster

Ajab: tumhari himmat bhi kaisi huyi humare paas aane ki?!
Pratap was starled by the sudden action,,
Pratap: oh please!! Hume tum me koi interest nahi..kya hai,, tum humari type nahi ho!
Ajab: aur kabhi hona bhi nahi chahte!!
Pratap: tum itni himmat..
Before he could complete his words ajabde rushed out of the room leaving behind a fuming pratap..

She got out of the room and ran in the corridor only to bang in to maan
Maan: ajabde!!! Kaha thi tum?? Hum kabse doond rahe hai tumhe..
Aur yeh kya tumne ab tak change nahi kiya??
Ajab: maan ek baat batao woh Mr. Akdoo singh tumhare kamre kya kar raha tha??uske room mein washroom nahi hai kya??
Maan: Mr. Akdoo singh?! Oh you mean humare dadabhai..? Woh humare room mein kya karenge?
Ajab: wahi toh hum bhi pooch rahe hai!!
Maan: ek min. Tum kis room mein gayi thi?
Ajab: 3rd room,, left se! Tumne hi kaha tha na!
Maan: Oh god Ajabde!! Humne left nahi right se 3rd room kaha tha.. left mein toh bhai ka kamr hai..!!
Ajab: kyaa??!!
Ajabde once felt she had went in coma state...
Maan: ajabde!!
Ajab: OMG phir toh galti humari thi.. but nahi jyada galti ussi ki hai!! Kitni badtameezi kar raha tha pata hai?! Itna besharam ladka humne apne zindagi mein nahi dekha!!
Halkat yeda kahi ka!!
Maan laughed a little hearing her..
Maan: waise ajabde.. tum itni colourfull words laati kaha se ho?? GOD!!
Ajabde was about to say something but maan stopped her
Maan: ek min. Baat toh baad me bhi kiya jaa sakta hai.. ab pehle dress change kare??
Ajab: arre ha.. tumhare bhai ke chakkar mein hum toh yeh bhool hi gaye the..chalo.

To be continue...

PS- No proof reading has been done.. plz bear me if any spelling /grammar mistakes
Edited by ApekshaM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
awesome upadate ...full on entertaining 😛😳
mystery badhati ja rahi.😛 what's ajab's real indentity ...must be royal but who???
Maan is such a nice girl 😳 and HK is designer 😲😆
special thanks to maid ..we got praja😉😆 bathroom scene was nice ..keep coming more...😉😆
pratu has such an attitude but no worries ajab is no less😎 go jab go 😛
past memory is interesting 😛 let's see how it unfolds 😛😛
halkat ...yeda 😲🤣🤣 It was totally unexpected for me ,I laughed like mad imagining ajab saying this 🤣🤣 aur bhi hain aise use those too 😉😆
update soon 😳
superb part ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59


UNRESSS

Baccha OMG itna mast waala update
So finally the girls are going for the partyyy
Aur yeh kya Hakim bana Fashion Designer

Aur Hakim ne kiya Subhagyawati ke name ka kacchra thank go for nick names
Hakim tum Bhagooo😆

There is so much mystery in your story re
Matlab Ajabde ka real papa is a khoon ka pyaasa buddha
And Ajabde has a flashback of the palace
Which means there is a connection
Ajabde is a royal?
Maan is so mean with the daasi
I don't like her yahan par
Dress ke liye ro rahi hai
Sochne waali baat hai yeh toh

Ajabde ko koi map dedo yaar
phir se kho gayi and iss baar toh Subho bhi nahi aayegi after all she's busy flirting
Par maari halkat yede hero ne entry
Waah kya entry hai and trap kiya Ajbade ko
Dono ke dono gusse waale
Kaash ek kamre mein band ho situation ho jaaye
Pata nahi agle din zinda niklenge ki nahi
Anyways it was so hot - temp rise ho gaya room ka
☺️☺️☺️☺️

Chalo am toh super duper excited for the next update Baccha
but more for when Chakri ki hogi entry
Yaa ho toh nahi gayi already after all Bhago is only comfortable with him na😉


Update soon baccha

Loads of Love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsm123

awesome upadate ...full on entertaining 😛😳

mystery badhati ja rahi.😛 what's ajab's real indentity ...must be royal but who???
Maan is such a nice girl 😳 and HK is designer 😲😆
special thanks to maid ..we got praja😉😆 bathroom scene was nice ..keep coming more...😉😆
pratu has such an attitude but no worries ajab is no less😎 go jab go 😛
past memory is interesting 😛 let's see how it unfolds 😛😛
halkat ...yeda 😲🤣🤣 It was totally unexpected for me ,I laughed like mad imagining ajab saying this 🤣🤣 aur bhi hain aise use those too 😉😆
update soon 😳
superb part ⭐️


Thank you dhanu🤗🤗 you must wait for that😉😆

ab kya hua jallu ko banana tha but hakim ban gaya😲🤣

Praja moments aaur aayenge don't worry😉 ajab hi pratau ko seeda karegi 😛

will use a lots 😆

Will update soon😃
Thanks once again❤️

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