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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Lovely update
Hope pratap and gang will be able to take the girls and family safely to there Realm 😊
Eagerly waiting for next update
Do update asap 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Hello! Good to know that you're good at bargaining as well as writing fabulous stories!
I remember...once I bargained so much in a school trip...250 ka necklace 75 mein Karvaaya 🤣 it was fun! 😆

Coming to your update...it was awesome!!! Best part is that you give such nice long 2 chapters together!

It was nice...hope Balwant and Hansa will be perfectly alright...
Ajabde, Sau and Heer are gonna stay with these people that's awesome 🥳

I love love love your creativity and style of writing!!! ❤️ thoda mujhe bhi de do! 😉
I'm your secondie 😳
Update soon 😛
Edited by Natasha_1234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awesome Chapters Garima😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Hello! Good to know that you're good at bargaining as well as writing fabulous stories!
I remember...once I bargained so much in a school trip...250 ka necklace 75 mein Karvaaya 🤣 it was fun! 😆

Coming to your update...it was awesome!!! Best part is that you give such nice long 2 chapters together!

It was nice...hope Balwant and Hansa will be perfectly alright...
Ajabde, Sau and Heer are gonna stay with these people that's awesome 🥳

I love love love your creativity and style of writing!!! ❤️ thoda mujhe bhi de do! 😉
I'm your secondie 😳
Update soon 😛



Natasha my secondie!!!
Arey I thought I was good but tum toh yaar guru nikli - 250 ka necklace in 75!!!! awesome re😃

Thank you
Everyone will be fine I hope so too kuch keh nahi sakti ab main zyaada spoilers nahi dene na
😛

Awww your words make me go all 😳😳😳😳 yaar you are creative to re itni acchi stories likhti ho

Will do


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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Annei123

Lovely update

Hope pratap and gang will be able to take the girls and family safely to there Realm 😊
Eagerly waiting for next update
Do update asap 😉



Thanks

I hope so too yaar😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome Chapters Garima😃



Thanks Nonie😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Amazing update!👏Hope hansabai and kunwar balwant would be safe.😃Love the bonding between friends.😳Do update soon.😉
PS-I have updated ruqlal ff.Do check out.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Amazing update!👏Hope hansabai and kunwar balwant would be safe.😃Love the bonding between friends.😳Do update soon.😉

PS-I have updated ruqlal ff.Do check out.😛



Ramya

Thank you

Arey teri story update hui nad mereko pata bhi nahi chala- sowwy
kya karu am going crazy enjoying the rains and delhi ki chaat

will read it but comment baad mein kyunki mera network kab dhokha de jaaye pata nahi na

Love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's raining here and thandi hawaa saath mein accompanied with bijli and thunderam in heaven right now
I missed the rains so much bas iss hafte aise hi hoti rahe baarish
Baarish aur humaara rishta anokha hai
kehne ko woh garmi bhagaati hai aur rahat laati hai
Par agar koi dhyan de toh baarish hume sab kuch bhula deti hai- no tensions, no worries for a short time period and hum log sirf usko dekhte rehte hain
Greenery everywhere and sab ko paani milta hai- koi division nahi ki tumko baarish milegi amd usko nahi - sbko milti hai jab milti and sab ko apne mein rang deti hai
kaash aisa har cheez mein ho sakta and hum sab ek ho sakte


Khair apna update padho and mereko love dekar jaao

Also this story has been inspired by an anime (cartoon) Yu Yu Hakusho jo ki one of my favoruites hai- google it I have just turned the things according to my story


Here you go

Chapter 7

US: Shakti (a warning in his tone)

SS: The only place the girls will go is the spirit realm where they will be looked after by us and the protectors

Subho scoffed: Protectors really you mean the men who have been harassing us to sleep with them as a means of payment for the bills or maybe you were talking about the doctor who refused to provide treatment after Ajabde refused to kiss his pathetic ass

US: They will be punished accordingly

Heer: Like you punished Jagmal and Jhalim Singh

UD: Enough Heer we have had enough of your tantrums. You have been left alone because your Bade Daata didn't want to force but here you are tainting our name by mingling with these demons. You are will be coming back with us and that's an order

Heer (angry): I rather die a painful death then go anywhere with you

US: Enough. The girls are coming with us

Chakri: The hell they are

All of a sudden the temperature dropped as Pratap glared at Uday Singh- his eyes speaking the warning for them to stay away while US literally backed a bit seeing the anger flaring in the eyes that had him scared. Demon warriors' protective stance was enough to scare the spirit realm soldiers and Chetak returned in time to stand beside his master. The irony of the situation was not lost as every civilian was standing behind the demon warriors and not the spirit heads

Dheer Bai finally decided to play the trump card

DV: She is a human and the rules are clear- a human has to state that he/she wishes to go to the demon realm and they have to be of age whereas the girls are all underage-minors which means they need their guardian's permission which

Hakim interrupted: which is a good thing seeing that their guardian Hansa Baisa wife of late Rao Mamrakhji is in the demon realm and she just sent her consent for her dependents to come there which include - her daughter Ajabde, her son Balwant, Subhagyawati and Heer Kanwar. So as you said Dheer Baiji the rules have been followed but I wonder what your punishment would be to the ones who actually started this fire

RM: You mean to say we arranged for this fire to break out?

Hakim: I'm not just saying but am certain that you planned for this to happen so that you could take the girls to the spirit realm after all we all know that the legend scares you the most

Pratap: Enough. It's time to go back

DB: Kunwar Pratap

Pratap (eyes blazing): Never call me that again -you lost all the rights Dheer Bai Bhatiyani. It's Baujiraj for you and your companions. Next time you try to harm someone who matters and I will personally rain down hell and this time no one will be there to save Jagmal's neck from breaking or US from meeting his end

He turned his back as unconsciously Ajabde's hold on him tightened as she snuggled into his warmth and they walked away with the girls accompanying them to the demon realm. The legend had started to unfurl TD thought and now it was time for all of them to wait and watch for it to come true.

Chapter 8

The Demon world was exactly like the human world except for the yards full of greenery and dark clouds with lighting and thunders breaking down every few minutes- they were all seated in a small eatery that resembled an old age dhaba. Pratap had gone ahead with Ajabde and Balwant as they needed medical attention while the others took the scenic route to make their transition into the new realm easy on the new companions. Subho and Heer were exhausted from the travels, unknowingly Chakri found his shoulder being used as a support while Heer leaned against Akbar. Akbar had felt his heart thunder like mad when he had first seen her but he had controlled himself as he wanted to be sure about it- after being stabbed in the back by the females of his family including his badi ammi Mahamanga and the girl he thought he loved Ruqqaiya he had closed himself emotionally so as to not allow anyone to ever hurt him but Heer's presence was causing him to open up a thing he didn't like at all.

Seeing the girls sleep they all decided to use that to their advantage and reach the palace as soon as possible- Chakri carried Subho while Akbar hesitated so Shakti came to carry Heer but Heer held on to Akbar's shirt so tight that as they tried to move her a frown came on her face forcing her to get up

Heer looked scared on seeing Shakti so close to her

Shakti: Sorry but we need to move

Heer nodded her head and realised that she was holding on Akbar's shirt

Heer: Sorry and then she joined the others seeing her apologise pained his heart but he resolved not to show his emotions to anyone unaware that one guy had seen it all and was planning on making him face his feeling pretty soon

At the Jaiwanta Bai medical centre Pratap paced the corridor outside the VIP room where Ajabde was being treated by their best doctor Krishna who was in all ways was like a sister to him and HansaBai was being looked after by Khetu another member of the medical team. Both Khetu and Krishna were Panna Dai's wards now Panna Dai was Uday Singh's caretaker but not many knew that she was also his mother's confidante and in every sense a mother figure and since his birth had loved him like her own grandchild. When the realms were being divided she chose to come with them leaving his father all alone in the spirit realm after he had ruled him and his brothers as demons.

Krishna came out from the room watching Pratap stare at his imprint's sleeping form from outside. She knew the feeling of seeing a loved one in pain not that she was somebody's imprint but she had never allowed herself to meet anyone since they all had come to the demon world- her entire focus had been on making sure her family including Pratap, Khetu, Shakti and others were fine and also there was no way she could be somebody's imprint that boon was snatched away from her when the spirit soldiers had captured her and took away everything from her. Pratap turned to look at her before she could call him out

Krishna: Dada Bhai she's fine. I have given her the oxygenation treatment also ran a toxicology screen on her and she is perfectly fine. Exhausted but fine alright

Pratap: Thank You Krishna

Krishna: You're welcome Dada Bhai besides she's family and we protect family

Pratap nodded his head when he suddenly remembered - Vikram and Sagar

Suddenly Vikram appeared shouting Maasa and Dada Bhai with Sagar following in his father Rann Singh's arms playing with his virtual toy stick. Vikram ran straight into his mother's arm while Rann Singh greeted Pratap and his sister-in-law

RS: Baujiraj everything is calm but I'm certain that the spirit world must be planning something

Krishna: Do you think they'll attack?

RS: I don't think so but even if they do then our defences our impenetrable. They won't be able to cross the dimensional gates and they have no idea about the other entrances

Pratap: as of yet Rann Singh

Sagar: Maa...Maa

Sagar had seen his mother Khetu talk to a nurse about some treatment and started calling out to her. She gave him a smile and walked towards them

Khetu taking Sagar in her arms: Dada Bhai Hansa Baisa is doing well but her diagnosis isn't that good.

The doctor in Krishna kicked in: What does the blood report reveal?

Khetu: Jija her WBCs aren't making antibodies thus she's vulnerable to every infection. At the moment I have placed her in the solitary bubble to give her a sterile infection free atmosphere

Krishna: Alright start her on an IV and administer WBCs and platelets as well. If her own WBCs are not generating antibodies then her platelets won't do their function properly

Khetu: Ji Jija

Krishna: Dada Bhai I'll send food for you here. Please eat it alright and don't worry about the guests

Pratap nodded his head as he walked into the room where his imprint was resting. She looked peaceful was his first thought her hair were spread open on the pillow while an oxygen mask was placed on her face covering her nose and mouth making sure that she was getting enough oxygen for her lungs and tubes were attached to machines whose beeping confirmed that she was healing. He sat by her side held her hand in his allowing him to feel her and also to let her know that she was safe with him

Legend says that imprints are connected telepathically that the connection is always there but it becomes stronger once they are united in every way. Pratap knew she could feel him subconsciously so he sat the entire night focusing his energy on her guarding her and also providing strength to get better soon because they both would fight against the enemies together.




Edited by twilightlover29 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Thanks for posting such a lovely update 😛
Ur update made my morning 😃
Do update next part soon

PS. I m ur firstie 😉

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