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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER-9

(Bijoliya)
The next morning saw pratap brandishing his sword and his bow and arrows.When ajabde came in after her daily prayers,she was surprised to see him preparing his weapons.
ajab:kp,aap kahin jaa rahein hain?
kp:haan ajabde,hum shikaar par jaa rahein hain.
ajab:kya?toh phir hum bhi chalenge aapke saath.
kp:nahin ajabde,aapko chalne ki koi awashyakta nahin hai.
ajab:kintu aapne toh humme vachan diya hai naa ki aap humme chod kar kahin nahi jayenge?
kp:hum aapko chodkar nahi jaa rahein hain ajabde.hum toh keval patta ke saath kuch samay ke liye aakhet par jaa rahein hain.aur jald hi laut aayenge.
ajab:toh aapko humare bhi aapke saath chalne par koi apatti nahi honi chahiye.
kp:nahi,nahi ajabde bhala aap kyun kasht kar rahin hain.aapko swayam ka dhyan rakhna chahiye.
ajab:humne keh diya ki hum chalenge,toh chalenge.aap humme humare bhaisa ke saath aakhet par jaane se nahi rok sakte.
kp:accha thik hai,aap jiti aur hum hare bas.ab aap shighra tayar ho jayiye.tab tak hum aapki pratiksha kartein hain.
ajab:ji kp.

Ajabde quickly prepared herself for the hunting expedition and joined the others.She looked astonishing in her new warrior dress and kp couldn't help staring at her.He was lost once again in her pretty eyes until patta coughed a bit.

patta:kp,jija ab hum chalein.
kp:haan,haan chaliye.
patta:vaise jija,aap kyun chali aayi humare saath?aapko iss samay vishram ki awashyakta hai.aapko apna aur humare bhanje ya bhanji ka dhyan rakhna chahiye.kp,aapne inhe roka kyun nahi?
kp:humne koshish toh bahut ki thi parantu koi nahi jit sakta aapki jija se.
patta:so toh hai.

The trio reached the appointed place laughing and chatting but soon pratap was ahead of the others speeding on his unmatched horse chetak.He stopped only when he realised he was lost.He looked around himself trying to figure out the right way.Ajab too was lost in her bid to reach kp and patta was left far behind.
As pratap was just trying to reach the other two he heard some low sounds.He paused a bit to listen more clearly.These were approaching footsteps and they were coming nearer and nearer.He was quite sure that the footsteps were of some wild beast and he hurried to look for patta and ajabde.Soon he spotted ajabde,but looking closely, he was scared out of his wits.What he saw was beyond fright,there was a ferocious tiger prancing just behind his ajab and it was waiting to pounce on her any time.He ran at the top of his speed and pushed her aside.In this process the tiger pounced on him and scratched his arms.Kp,fought the powerful tiger with his bare hands.He pushed it hard but was unable to free himself from its strong clutches.He kicked hard on its upper body sending the tiger a few centimeters away.He himself jumped on the beast like another fearless tiger and punched its face.The tiger caught hold of his legs with its sharp claws but kp continued to wage his war undeterred.His efforts succeeded in exhausting the tiger and he started gaining an upper edge over it.Finally with a mighty blow he killed the tiger with the tiger letting out a fearful roar which was enough to instil terror in the hearts of even the mightiest of the mighty.

All this while ajabde was standing in a corner terrorized and helpless.She was shocked at first for kp pushing her but her whole being trembled at seeing him fighting the hungry beast.
She rushed to him weeping and crying.

ajabde:(hugging him tightly and breathing heavily)kp,aap...aap thik toh hain naa?(looking closely at the wounds all over his body)kitni chotein aayin hain aapko.aur yeh sab keval humari vajah se.humme aana hi nahi chahiye tha aapke saath.yeh sab humare karan hua hai.humme kshama kar dijiye...parantu hum toh shayad aapki kshama ke bhi laayak nahin hain.
And she cried unconsolably while still tightly hugging him.
kp:(consoling her)aapko kshama mangne ki koi awashyakta nahi hai ajabde.isme aapka koi dosh nahi hai.jo kuch bhi hua voh sab ek haadsa tha aur kuch nahi.
ajab(still sobbing):nahi kp,yeh sab humari hi galti hai.na hum aapke saath aate aur naa hi aap humme bachane ke liye iss tarah uss sher se bhidte.aapko kya awashyakta thi humme bachane ki?
kp:nahi,nahi ajabde.humme toh aapko bachana hi tha.aap humare liye humare jivan se bhi adhik mulyavaan hain.aap hi batayiye yadi aaj aapko kuch ho jaata toh kya hum aapke bina ji paate?
ajab: shayad nahi,kintu kam-se-kam humme toh aapko iss tarah ghayal awastha mein nahi dekhna padta.kam-se-kam aap toh surakshit rehte.
kp:ab aap swayam ko dosh dena band karein.(trying to smile)aur phir yeh chotein,yeh toh abhushan hain ek sacche rajput yoddha ke liye.humme toh dhanyawad karna chahiye aapka.
And they both broke down in each others arms.

Meanwhile patta too reached there hearing the loud roars of both the tigers.He was shocked to see the aggressive animal lieing dead bathed in blood.He questioned the couple who were still trying to comfort each other.
patta:yeh sab kaise hua jija?kp,aapka itna rakt kaise beh raha hai?aap thik toh hain na?

Kp explained everything to patta while ajabde was still ashamed to speak of her own folly.

patta:jija,aap chinta na karein jaisa ki inhone kaha aapka koi dosh nahi hai.sab kuch thik ho jayega jija.aap kripya shant ho jayiye.eklingji ka dhanyawad jo aap dono bilkul thik hain.

Kp,by now could barely stand with all those bruises over his iron body.He was totally tired and thus he soon collapsed in agony.
patta:kp,kp uthiye...jija humari sahayata kijiye humme inhe jald hi vapas bijoliya le jana hoga vaidji ke paas.
Patta and ajab helped pratap onto his horse chetak.Even in this unconscious state kp was groaning in pain.The faithful animal carried kp to bijoliya followed by ajab& patta on their horses.
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So friends this was chapter-9.This chapter and the next one would be little emotional ones but don't worry everything will be fine.😊
Friends i don't know why but i'm not getting a good response nowadays.😭Pls guys,if u want me to continue than pls like and comment.😊

Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: vvishalini

Nice update dude 👍🏼

Thanks friend!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Thanks bella😊!
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😊hi
your updates are simply awsome. i like these stories very much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: silk12

😊hi

your updates are simply awsome. i like these stories very much.

Thanks @silk12.I hope u like the coming chapters as well.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
CHAPTER-10

(bijoliya)

Chetak brought his master to the bijoliya palace with the velocity of light.Ajabde and patta brought him to the inner chambers and laid him down on the bed.Hb instructed her son to go and call vaidji and she herself hastened to be at the side of her daughter and son-in-law.

hb(in a panicy tone):ajabde,ye sab...ye sab kaise hua?kp ko itni chotein kaise lagi?humme toh bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai.
ajab:maa,ye sab humari vajah se hua hai.ye sab humari galti hai.
patta:jija,aap chup rahiye.aapki koi galti nahi hai.hum batate hain ranisa.darasal...
And patta narrated the entire happenings of the day to a shocked hb.

patta:aur phir itna rakt beh jaane ke karan ye besudh ho gaye.
hb:he eklingji!raksha kijiye kp ki.ajabde,kitna prem karte hain ye aapse jo inhone aapka jivan bachane ke liye swayam hi apna jivan sankat me daal diya.
ajab(sobbing):haan maa inhe koi awashyakta nahi thi humme bachane ki.
hb:ajabde,aap shaant ho jayiye.sab kuch thik ho jayega.vaidji bas aate hi honge.kuch nahi hoga kp ko.

When vaidji arrived and checked kp,he looked quite worried.When patta & ajab asked him regarding the same he announced-

vaidji:kp ka bahut rakt beh chuka hai.hum aapko ek vishesh lep de rahein hain baisa.isse har do(2) ghanto mein inhe lagate rahiye.
ajab:vaidji,ye thik toh ho jayenge naa?
vaidji:baisa humme kshama karein.jab tak inhe hosh nahi aa jata hum kuch nahi keh sakte.
Ajabde could now no longer control herself.She broke out lamenting in her mother's arms.
ajab:maa,ye kya ho gaya hai kp ko?maa,ve thik to hojayenge na?ye sab kuch humara kiya dhara hai.
hb:kripya swayam ko sambhaliye ajabde.kuch nahi hoga kp ko.eklingji sab thik karenge.
ajab:humari hi bhool thi , hum anawashyak hi inke saath jaane ki zid liye baithe the.
hb:ajabde,ishwar ke liye aap rona band kijiye.aap maa banne wali hain aur aapko sadiav prasanna rehna chahiye.
ajab:maa,hum kaise sambhale swayam ko?aaj humare karan kp ki ye halat hai.shayad ishwar bhi humme kabhi kshama nahi karenge.
patta:jija jab kp ne hi aapko kshama kar diya hai toh ab aap kyun chinta kar rahin hain?aap dekhiyega ve bahut jald thik ho jayenge.

Ajabde didn't sleep a wink that night .She ate nothing and nursed him the whole night and applied the medicines in every 2 hours.When she wasn't looking after him,she prayed to her kanha ji.She pleaded and begged him to save her kp.

ajab:kanha ji,kripya humare kp ko thik kar dijiye.unhe thik kar dijiye.hum unke bina nahi ji sakte.kripya unhe vapas le aayiye.unhe hosh me le aayiye.aap chahein toh humara jivan le lijiye kintu unhe thik kar dijiye kanha ji.jivan mein aaj pratham baar kuch manga hai aapse.kripya aap unhe thik kar dijiye.

When kp finally regained consciousness the next morning,ajabde's happiness knew no bounds.She began laughing and crying at the same time like a mad person.

Ajab:maa,kb, kp ko hosh aa gaya.patta kp ko hosh aa gaya.shighra vaidji ko bulayiye.

kp slowly opened his eyes and smiled meekly at her.Soon vaidji entered and checked him.

vaidji:baisa,kp ki swasthya mein sudhaar hai.ye ab jald hi thik ho jayenge.kintu inhe kuch dino tak vishram ki awashyakta hai.
ajab:dhanyawad vaidji.
vaidji:aur haan baisa,aap swayam ka bhi dhyan rakhiye.aapko bhi sahi samay par vishram aur bhojan kar lena chahiye.
ajab:ji vaidji.
hb:haan vaidji,ab aap hi inhe samjhayiye.aap jante hain inhone kal raat bhojan hi nahi kiya.aur puri raat nahi soyi ye.
ajab:maa,aap chinta na karein ab hum aisa nahi karenge.

Hb and patta inquired about kp's health to which he replied that he was fine.Then they left the room so that he could take some rest.Ajabde too was leaving when kp held her hand and pulled her closer to himself.

kp:ye hum kya sunn rahein hain ajabde,aapne kal raat bhojan nahi kiya.aur aap kal raat soyi bhi nahi?
ajab(trying to conceal the truth):vo hum...
kp:aap humme sach sach batayiye..
ajab:haan kp,bhala hum bhojan kaise karte ,aapko aisi awastha mein chodkar.hum aisa nahi kar sakte the kp.(sobbing)
kp:ek baar aap chittor chaliye.hum aapko choti maa se khoob daat khilvate hain.aap humare liye pratham hain aur uske pashchat hi hum swayam hain ajabde.humare liye aap adhik awashyak hain.
ajab:kp,vaise toh humare liye bhi aap hi adhik awashyak hain.toh yadi humme kuch ho jaye toh...

Kp stopped her from uttering any further by placing his hand on her mouth.

kp:aisa mat kahiye aap.aapko kuch nahi hoga.sochiye yadi aapko kuch ho jaye toh hum kaise jiyenge aapke bina.
ajab:haan toh hum par bhi yahi baat laago hoti hai.hum bhi aapke bina nahi ji sakte.isliye toh hum kal raat aapko iss awastha mein nahi chod sakte the.
kp:accha thik hai.kintu ab aap aisa dobara nahi karengi.
ajab:ji kp.accha layiye hum aapko ye lep laga dete hain jis se aapke ghav jaldi bhar jayenge.

Ajabde began applying the herb on his wounds.But she herself couldn't bare his pain and she had tears in her eyes by the time she finished.Kp noticed this and he slowly wiped her tears.

kp:ajabde,hum jante hain ki aap humse bahut prem karti hain aur shayad ab bhi aap swayam ko humari iss halat ke liye doshi man rahin hain.par sach maniye,aisa kuch nahi hai.jo kuch bhi hua vo sab ek hadsa tha.isme aapka ya humara koi dosh nahi hai.aur ab aap humari chinta naa karein hum bilkul thik hain.aur hum toh iss baat se prasanna hain ki aapko kuch nahi hua.

Ajab was overwhelmed with kp's love for her.She embraced him and confessed her love for him.
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So guys,this was chapter-10. I hope that u all like this chapter as well.😊
Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I know I'm late and this is very bad and have no excuse but what to do yaar - whenever I try posting comments I get error messages and then sab kuch khallas ho jaata hai

Mereko toh meri apni post par Spamming karne ke liye error dete rehte hain Apni post spam kar rahi hoon kisi aur ki toh nahi na

Chalo coming to the updates - love them all: the way you brought in all of teh characters that were left out was so good and ek Happy birthday bhi dikhaya - party ke saath

the last two updates - enjoyed KP and Ajab-Patta bonding esp Patta and KP: Ajabde se koi nahi jeet sakta LOL

Chalo keep on writing and don't worry about comments yaar - sab padh rahen hain and they will comment - thoda time lekar karenge but they will so don't pull yourslef short and keep writing
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Awesome dear. Loved kp and ahab convo
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lovely update loved the convo of kp and ajab...
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

I know I'm late and this is very bad and have no excuse but what to do yaar - whenever I try posting comments I get error messages and then sab kuch khallas ho jaata hai

Mereko toh meri apni post par Spamming karne ke liye error dete rehte hain Apni post spam kar rahi hoon kisi aur ki toh nahi na

Chalo coming to the updates - love them all: the way you brought in all of teh characters that were left out was so good and ek Happy birthday bhi dikhaya - party ke saath

the last two updates - enjoyed KP and Ajab-Patta bonding esp Patta and KP: Ajabde se koi nahi jeet sakta LOL

Chalo keep on writing and don't worry about comments yaar - sab padh rahen hain and they will comment - thoda time lekar karenge but they will so don't pull yourslef short and keep writing

Thanks for boosting my confidence garima.😊 I wanna know if u liked the tiger part or not??
I hope the technical problems get sorted out quickly.😃

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