PrAja FF:Symbol of love (Complete!!) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
The bonding of nanands and bhabhisa is very cute😊
Ajabde taking to her baby is very heart touching ❤️
Loved the bonding of ajabde and pratap⭐️
Waiting for next chapter eagerly😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Loved Ajabde's talk with her baby. Nice that they remembered to send a message to Bijolia as well. In the show we did not get to see any of this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Bella02pie

The bonding of nanands and bhabhisa is very cute😊

Ajabde taking to her baby is very heart touching ❤️
Loved the bonding of ajabde and pratap⭐️
Waiting for next chapter eagerly😆

Thanks friend.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: coderlady

Loved Ajabde's talk with her baby. Nice that they remembered to send a message to Bijolia as well. In the show we did not get to see any of this.

Thanks for reading my ff😊.And yes i agree with u they did'nt care to include these moments😔.But i won't forget to do so.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
CHAPTER-4
The next morning,pratap was the first one to rise.He saw his beloved wife sleeping peacefully beside him.He went to the windows &drew the curtains as he did not want her to wake up,so early.He looked at her pretty,innocent face.He found her very lovely while she was sleeping.His love for her was endless and now that she was giving him the most beautiful gift that he had ever asked for,he wanted to love her even more.He could stare at her like this for hours.But he didn't want to disturb her sleep as she needed rest.So,he lightly kissed her forehead and went out of the room, gently closing the door behind him.Outside,he saw the sungod and thanked him for this new day in his life.He also thanked eklingji for everything ,just everything that he ever had.He took a bath and completed his daily prayers &rituals.Then he went to the dangal sthal to polish his abilities as a warrior.He was a great warrior but he never gave up practicing his skills every morning.He knew it gave him extra edge over the others.
Ajabde had just woken up&not finding kp in the room,she went out searching for him.Yes,he was there at his daily practice and ajabde smiled at him from a distance.She quickly freshened up & wore her warrior's dress.then she returned to where her husband was,to the dangal sthal.Catching sight of ajabde,kp was mesmerised by her beauty and the warrior dress was adding to it.He stood gaping at her for a few minutes.Then composing himself he went on to rebuke her.

kp:ajabde,aap iss tarah yahan kya kar rahi hain?aapko vishram ki awashyakta hai,vaidji ne kaha tha na aapse.
ajab:pehle aap bataiye ki aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain.
kp:ajabde,aap janti hain na ki hum pratidin iss tarah yahaan abhyas karte hain.
ajab:haan to, aaj humne socha ki hum aapki sahayata kar dein.

In return kp attacked her with his sword.ajab defended herself with hers.They tried different moves on each other.But both of them being great warriors,defended each other's moves and the fight continued for long.Finally by kp's swift move,ajab's sword fell and kp placed his sword on her neck.For a moment,he was lost in her myriad eyes.Then,he removed his sword and pulled her closer to himself.They were so close that they were completely lost in each other and both of them had forgotten that they were at the arena.kp was about to kiss ajab,when an unwanted person made his entry.It was US who had come to practice with his son.He was shocked to see his son romancing with his daughter-in-law at such an odd place.He coughed a bit and praja were back into the real world.Both of them were so embarrased and ajabde was now red all over her face.She hid her face ,and tried to compose herself.She was about to go when kp called out to her.

kp:baijilal,ho sake to hume kshama kar dijiyega jo humne aap par iss tarah vaar kiya.
And he continued practicing with his father,leaving ajab smiling at him once more.

(bijoliya palace)
Kunwar balwant(kb) came running to his mother bursting with news.
kb:maa,rawat mamusa padhere hain,chittor se.
hb:kya?hume abhi chalna chahiye unke swagat ke liye.
After rawatji was cordially welcomed by his sister &after he had freshened up after a long journey,he sat down to talk to his sister and bhanja.
rawatji:hansa behan,hume aapko ek shubh samachar dena hai.
hb:kaisi shubh suchna,bhaisa?
rawatji:aap nani banne wali hain.
hb:kya?hum nani...
hb was by now in tears.these were tears of joy.She had got such a happy news after such a long time that she found it difficult to stop her tears from falling. kb was so happy that he found it difficult to contain his happiness. He burst out with a big smile on his cute face.
kb:kya kaha aapne mamusa?to ab hum mamusa banne wale hain?
rawatji nodded in agreement.They shared their untold happiness with each other.
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So,basically there was a change of plans and now i'm going out only on sunday.😃.I'll try to update more chapters but i have one condition-i want more of your comments be it +ve or -ve.😛.
Edited by crazy-for-praja - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Such a nice Praja moment disturbed by US - Chakri ka asar pad gaya US par😆
Chalo love the update and looking to read more of it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
The first part was superb 👏
This US is such a kabab mein haddi...humare praja ka romance bigad diya 😡
But never mind, I'm hoping that you'll compensate this disturbance by more prajalicious moments in the next update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Thanks folks for ur appreciation.🤗I'll try to update as soon as possible😊.And next time there won't be any kabab mein haddi.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
So Pratap and Ajabde got disturbed, but it was still nice.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
firstly welcome to the world of writings dear...

read all the parts in one go.. must say all were really amazing.. 👏

continue soon and update ASAP...! 😉

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