PrAja FF:Symbol of love (Complete!!) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Amazing nok jok between the sisters. Loved how pratap sided with Chand and Ajab helped maan.

Especially loved how pratap asked so what did you do
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a really good and familial beginning ...enjoyed the sibling fun and now am waiting to see what we have in store for the next chapter
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u my buddies for liking my ff.I'm super happy 😃 . After all my first ff & so many people liked it.🤗 So on public demand here comes the next chapter😊 -

CHAPTER-2
Kunwar pratap brought ajabde to their room & gently laid her down on the bed.He looked at her-his eyes revealing his pain.He tried sprinkling some water on her face but to no avail.

kp:ajabde,kripya aankhe kholiye,aankhe kholiye.

He was now too worried-worried beyond measure.His ajabde whom he loved unconditionlly was now lying unconscious.He wanted ,rather needed her to regain consciousness.Now he could not wait for vaidji as every passing moment appeared like centuries to him. So,he was just about to go & fetch vaidji himself ,when he finally arrived.He was checking ajabde when kp loaded him with questions.

kp:vaidji,kya hua ajabde ko?ve is tarah besudh kyun ho gayi?inhe kaun si aushadhi deni hai?aap hume batayen,hum abhi jakar le aate hain.
vaidji:shant ho jayiye kunwar pratap! aap chinta na karen,baisa ko iss samay kisi aushadhi ki awashyakta nahi hai.
kp:arey,aise kaise aushadhi ki awashyakta nahi hai?aur hum chinta kyun na karen,vaidji?
vaidji:yeh chinta ka nahi,prasannta ka awsar hai kumwar pratap.badhai ho ,aap pita aur ajabde baisa maa banne wale hain.

Kunwar pratap was shocked & found himself at a loss of words.Ajabde too had ,by now ,regained consciousness and was super happy.The two loving sisters were ecstatic.
kp:dhanyawaad,dhanyawaad vaidji ! hum bahut prasanna hain aaj.
vaidji:ji kunwar pratap,aap baisa ka dhyan rakhen,inhe vishram ki awashyakta hai.accha ab hum chalte hain.

And vaidji left.ajabde & kp looked at each other,too surprised to speak.Maan & chand stepped out to congratulate the couple-who were now the happiest couple in the whole world.
maan:aapko bahut,bahut badhai ho dadabhai aur bhabhisa.
chand:haan dadabhai,ab to aapko dajiraj kehne wala aane wala hai.
kp:dhanyawaad chand,maan.
maan:accha dadabhai to ab hum chalte hain,dajiraj ko bhi to ye shubh samachar sunana hai.
chand:aur choti maa ko bhi.

&The two sisters walked out ,jubliant,to inform their dajiraj& choti maa.

After long pause,kp finally spoke up, only to break the silence prevailing in the room.
kp:ajabde,hum,hum aapko bata nahi sakte ki kitne prasanna hain aaj hum.
ajab:prasanna to hum bhi bohut hain.
kp:sach kahen,to hume to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai ki hum dajiraj banne wale hain.
ajab:ji kp
kp:vaise,hume aapka dhanyawad karna chahiye jo aap hume humare jeevan ki itni badi khushi dene jaa rahi hain.
ajab:nahin nahin kp,iski koi awashyakta nahi hai .aur yeh aapki bhi to santan hai naa.
Kp hugged ajab tightly.
kp:ajabde,aaj hum aapko vachan dete hain ki hum aapka poora dhyan rakhenge.kabhi akela nahi chodenge aapko.aap janti hain,hum kitna ghabra gaye the jab aap behosh ho gayin thi.hum bahut prem karte hain aapse!
ajabde:dhanyawad kp jo aapne humara itna dhyan rakha.hum bhi bahut prem karte hain aapse.hum aapke bina nahi jee sakte.

As the beautiful pair,cherished the beautiful moment, chand & maan reached the royal darbar to inform US regarding the good news.They were running at their top speeds in order to reach their dajiraj first.Chand was the first one to reach.
chand(panting):dajiraj hum aapko kuch batana chahte hain...
maan:ruk jayiye chand,dajiraj ko pehle hum batayenge.
chand:nahi jija pehle hum.
maan:nahi hum.
us:arey,ruk jayiye aap.pehle batayiye to sahi,aakhir baat kya hai?
maan&chand(together):aap bade dajiraj banne wale hain.
us:accha,accha to yeh baat hai.(suddenly understanding)kya kaha aapne hum bade dajiraj ...?
maan:haan dajiraj,dadabhai dajiraj aur bhabhisa ranima banne wale hain.

All of a sudden a wave of happiness swept the darbar.All were excited for this baby who was now the future of mewar.All were congratulating US.
rawatji:ranaji,aapko badhai ho. aaj hum sab behad prasanna hain.
US:haan rawatji,ye samachar to hai hi itna shubh.Accha, hum abhi jaakar kp aur ajabde se milkar aate hain.

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Hope u like this one too.BTW the next update would most probably be a bit late😔.But i promise to add more praja scenes.Till then enjoy & don't forget to tell me ur views on this one.😊


Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely chapter 😊
Ajabde and pratap are becoming parents😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awww such a nice chapter...can't wait to see Pratap taking care of his wife!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Great start to the story. Love the rivalry between the sisters and Maan in the kitchen. The good news is out, so expect to see everyone pampering Ajabde, especially Pratap.

Welcome to the forum.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Thanks everyone for ur overwhelming response🤗.Will try to update it today itself😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Hoshiyaar ch3 padhaar rahein hain😆-
CHAPTER-3

As US was just leaving the darbar amongst the hustle & bustle of the samants,he thought of something & turned to rawatji.
US:rawatji,hume lagta hai ki aapko swayam,shighra-atishighra bijolia jana chahiye aur hansa baiji aur kunwar balwant ko ye shubh suchna deni chahiye.
rawatji:ji ranaji. hum swayam bhi abhi yahi soch rahe the.hansa behan ko badhai hum hi dene jayenge.hum shighra hi bijolia jane ka prabandh karte hain.

With these words,US left the darbar to meet his son & daughter-in-law to congratulate them on their new-found parenthood.Meanwhile chand had informed vb too about this news & a joyful vb too headed for praja's room. They reached the room together, to behold the flamboyant couple chatting & expressing their happiness.As praja saw their parents they greeted them ,touched their feet &took their blessings.

ajab:chotima,dajiraj aap dono ne kyun kasht kiya?hume bulwa liya hota. hum aajate aapse milne.
vb:nahi,nahi ajabde.isme kasht kaisa?aur phir aapne to hume itni badi prasannata ka samachar sunaya hai.
us:haan ajabde,veer baiji bilkul thik keh rahi hain.humare liye isse adhik prasannata ka awsar aur koi ho hi nahi sakta.
vb:ajabde,ek baar ke liye to aapne hume dara hi diya tha jab aap iss tarah behosh ho gayi thi.kintu ab hum apni prasannata ko shabdo mein zahir nahi kar sakte.vaise,hum aapke liye ek uphaar layein hain.yeh mata ko chadhaye hue kangan hain ,inhe pehan lijiye.

Saying so,vb gave her the bangles.Then she embraced ajabde lovingly,whom she considered like her own daughter.US too hugged his son,proud father that he was.
After this us & vb left while asking ajab to take care of herself. kp too left in order to look into some urgent state matters. Ajabde who was left all alone got the company of her two nanands who loved her dearly.They were too chirpy&cheerful for the arrival of the baby.

maan:bhabhisa ab to hum dono aapke saath hi rahenge ,aur aapka pura dhyan rakhenge.
chand:nahi bhabhisa,keval maan jija aapke sath rahengi,hum nahi.hum to aapse rusht hain.
ajab:kintu kyun chand?
chand:kyunki aapne bhojan banane hetu inki sahayata ki.
ajab:hume to aisa karna hi pada,aap janti hain inhone puri pakshaala ka kya haal kar rakha tha?aur inke pure chehre par atta hi atta tha. bhootni lag rahi thi ye.

With this nanand&bhabhi started laughing.maan pretended to be a bit disappointed but eventually she also gave in and burst out laughing.
Here,a dasi came to ajab's room with the news that saubhagyawati had come to meet her.Ajab was waiting for her best friend's visit and was too happy to recieve her.

bhago:kaisi hain aap ajabde?kitne samay baad aapse mil rahen hain.aur humne jo abhi-abhi suna hai ,kya vo satya hai?
ajab:haan,saubhagyawati yeh bilkul satya hai ki aap mausi banne wali hain.
chand:aur hum bhi to buasa banne wale hain saubhagyawati jija.
bhago:haan,haan chand.
ajab:vaise hume bahut accha laga ki aap humse milne aayi.
bhago:arey,kaise nahi aate hum?aap to humari sabse acchi sakhi hain to hum kaise aapki prasannata mein shamil nahi hote?
maan:haan jija,vaise bhabhisa ko bhi aapki yaad aa rahi thi.ve abhi to aapki hi baat kar rahi thi.

This was just the beginning of the chat between the four girls which continued for many long hours.It was already evening when the girls wound up their talks.
After they left,a lonely ajab stood next to the window looking at the beautiful sunset.She touched her belly &started talking to her baby.

ajab:aap jante hain,aaj sabhi kitne prasanna hain aapke kaaran.aapke bade dajiraj,dadisa,buasa,mausi,dajiraj ,aur to aur poora mewar aapke aane ki pratiksha kar raha hai.aapki ranima bahut prem karti hain aapse aur ve chahti hain ki aap ,aapke daajiraj ke samaan hi veer bane.
Unaware of the presence of kp in the room,ajabde kept talking to her baby.kp had quietly sneaked into the room &was enjoying the beauty of his wife in the faint light of the setting sun.When he could no longer resist her, he just hugged her from behind &began kissing her cheeks.
Ajabde was totally surprised and was blushing badly.

ajab:yeh aap kya kar rahe hain kp?
kp:(without supplying a proper reply to her question)ajabde,hume kshama kar dijiye .hum rajya ke karya mein itne vyast ho gaye the ki hum apni patni ko samay hi nahi de paye.hum kitne bure hain na jo humne aapko iss tarah akela chod diya...

kp could have gone on&on but ajabde stopped him by putting her hand on his mouth.They shared a beautiful eye lock,but soon ajabde came back into the real world &she removed her hand.

ajab:aisa mat kahiye kp,hum jante hain ki rajya ke karya bhi avashyak hain.aur phir ab aap aa gaye hain naa ,aur ab to aap humare saath hi rahenge na.
kp:haan ajabde,shayad aap thik hi keh rahin hain.vaise aap akele yahaan kar kya rahi thi?
ajab:voh ,hum apne putra se baat kar rahe the.
kp:putra?kintu hume to ek putri chahiye.bilkul aapki jaisi.
ajab:nahi kp,hume to putra hi chahiye.aap ki hi tarah veer aur sahasi.
kp:kyun putriyaan veer nahi ho sakti?bilkul aapki tarah baijilal.

Now ajab could not say a word more&so decided to act a bit tactfully.

ajab:kp,chahe putra ho ya putri ,kintu hum usse bahut prem karenge.
kp:haan ajabde.
After a brief discussion,the couple went to sleep.
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So guys,this was chapter 3. Pls tell me if u like it.😃BTW I won't be able to update for the next few days as i'm going out of station😔.But i'll try to update another chapter tonight😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay first one to comment 😆
Loved the update thoroughly. The bonding of the nanands is very cute. So even bhago is here...nice idea.
Waiting to see more such cute moments 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayu_26

Yay first one to comment 😆
Loved the update thoroughly. The bonding of the nanands is very cute. So even bhago is here...nice idea.
Waiting to see more such cute moments 😛

Thanks for liking my ff. I promise u wont have to wait for long.😊
Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago

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