PrAja Ss ~|| HoNgE JuDa Na HuM ||~ Update on pg 20!! - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

Thanks.. Chakri ka toh pata nahi..but CVs abhi nahi sudharenge..😆 romance toh abhi dur hai as u said.. But deewane abhi baaki hai..🤣 pehale topchi aur ab zaheer sakha.,😛 jallu toh hamesha dewaana hi rahega..🤣 par mere story me koi disturbance nahi hoga that I'll make sure..😉



Chalo Ab jaldi update karo na...aisi tang nahi karte apne pyaare pyaare readers ko☺️


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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing ss...plz pm me when u update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -villain-

amazing ss...plz pm me when u update.


thnks for commenting... sure.. will pm u wen I'll upate.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: twilightlover29



Chalo Ab jaldi update karo na...aisi tang nahi karte apne pyaare pyaare readers ko☺️



will update asap.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here comes the next update... Hope u ppl enjoy... Do like n share ur views.😉
Chapter~6

The night went peacefully in each others arms..soon the sun raised to inform them that they had to escort themselves to the pahadi ke phichewali mandhir..
All the preparations were done.. As we all know that the couple wakesup early morning in bramhamahurat..

Pratap n ajabde were all set to reach the temple by taking blessing of their elders before travelling a quite long journey from chittor..

Mid way they halted near a lake which they have to pass by sailing in boat but due to tiredness they decided to rest sometime..

Meanwhile ajabde was changed to a normal clothing as it was night time.. She stood in front of the mirror remembering the moment she spent with her husband on their wedding night.. n blushed a bright shade of crimson red.. She removed all her jwellaries n was trying hard to tie the dori of her choli which was not reaching her hands..but suddenly she felt someone's hands on her back she was about to scream but someone cupped her mouth by his hands...
It was none other than pratap...

Prtp:ajabde hum he pratap

Ajabde was relieved to the presence of him so she stopped struggling... She removed his hand cupping her mouth,

Ajab: kuwar pratap aap iss samay yaha kya kar rahe hai.. Aur aap Hume darana chahatethe kya??

Pratap was still holding her by her waist.. But she didn't realised it yet

Prtp: kya?? Hum bala aap ko kyu darayenge..'hum toh bas yaha aapki sahayta karne aye the,..

Ajab remembered that she was trying to tie her dori of choli .. But no sooner she realised that she was still in pratap's arms as he was holding her by her waist..

Ajab(in blabbering mode..): ah.., w..Woh.. Hum.,Hume der horahi hai... Hume sojana chahiye,, she was abt to go wen prtp suddenly pulled her closer to him .. Such that her back collided with the front of pratap... (Her choli's dori was still untied)

She was getting melted in his arms.. He slowly moved her thick silky hairs to one side,, he bent near her ear n asked in a husky voice..'' Ajab kya hum aap ke kuch madad karde..?? '' at which ajabde gasped nervously... She was not in a state to utter a single word .. So without waiting for her to answer., pratp moved his hands to the dori n slowly tied it taking his own time.. ajabde closed her eyes saviouring the moment.. He was tempted by her bare back..so he slowly untied the dori which he had only tied a few minutes back..which knocked the breath out of ajabde's lungs..

Chapter~7

Ajab: Ku..Kuwar,.,

She was breathing heavy.., his hot breaths were falling on her shoulder..she shivered under his touch.. She wasn't in the state to utter anything..so she decided not to think much but to enjoy this moment..

Here pratap was all lost in her beauty he was trying hard not to go wild on her n scare her but he wasn't able controlled himself...

Their eyes were closed n both r lost completely in each other..
He slowly slides the choli off her shoulder n started to give wet kisses along her neck n shoulder blade.. Both were enjoying each others presence.. After sometime they opened thier eyea..As both were in front of the mirror they had a perfect eye lock through the mirror n both were in their own world.. But a call of dasi outside the tent brought them back to the reality...

Dasi: kamma gadi baujiraj.. Aap se kuch log Milne aaye hai..
Prtp: thik hai.., aap chaliye hum abhi aate hai..

Dasi left the tent by once again joining her hands to the kuwar n kuwarani.. Pratap once again took a glance of his dear wifey with smile plastered on his face n adjusted her chili n tied her dori.. But this he was successful in controlling his desires..n marched out of the tent to visit the guests..
Ajabde sat there reminishing the moment they had just spent together n shyly looked down..
Outside the tent pratap was having a serious discussion with some of the bhills n their bhill sardar... n the news he heard made him anger as well as worried.. After a while he returned to his tent only to find his beloved wife fast asleep.. Seeing her he forgot all abt his tensions.. N that's why he loved her to the core.. & slept while admiring her beautiful lady love..
Next morning,,

Pratap was still in deep sleep coz of the stressful last day that caused due to travelling..but ajabde was all awake at bramhamurath.. She finished her daily chores early n now she had returned from her pooja in nearby mandhir.. Her hair was still wet, she had no jewelleries wairing ...

Still simple n gorgeous she applied her sindhoor n took complete look of herself in the mirror n shyly smiled remembering her all sweet moments with her husband.. & as she turned she saw her husband..

The great kuwar pratap Singh who used to wake up daily too early was still asleep in bed.. She signed a little how cute he looked while sleeping..but mischief took control over her mind.. She sat on the edgeside of bed near pratap.. She took some strands of her wet hairs n sprinkled some water dripping from it on pratap's face..

Chapter~8

But she got no response from his side,. So she tried again the same trick but instead this time suddenly pratap caught her hand n pulled her on top him.. She gasped at the sudden jerk...

Prtp: kya baat hai patni ji.. ?! Subha subha kya karne ka erada hai..?!! Hmm??

Ajabde was blushing profusely.. By getting caught red handed..

Ajab: Wo..Woh.. Kuwar pratap.. Kya hai na ki.. aap roz subha shigra hi.. Utjaate hai na,. Toh kahi aapko der na ho.. Issiliye Hum .. Hum prayas kar rahe the ki a..aap ko samay se utha de,.. Toh..

Prtp: achha..?!

& they had an long eye lock..

Till now he was in teasing mode.. But as he pulled her more closer.. Desire took over his mind.. She felt herself drowned into his eyes.. She let out a small moan as one of his hands slowly encircled around her bare waist along her dupatta.. He shifted his gaze from her eyes to her lips.. & started to move towards her slowly.,

*clang*

a harsh sound as of something has fallen down..which made them to separate from each other suddenly..
They hurriedly stood up n adjusted their dresses.. & soon looked around only to find no one.. Now this was something which caught their attention,... Now pratap was sure that some one was keeping an eye on them.. Pratap decided that now he has to tell ajabde which he was worried from last meeting with the bhill sardar..

Pratap decided that now he has to tell ajabde which he was worried from last meeting with the bhill sardar..

Prtp: haan.. Yehi sahi rahega.(self thought)

Ajab: kuwar pratap.. Koi baat hai Jo aap humse kehna charahe hai...? Hum kal se dekh rahe hai.. Aap Hume kuch khoye hoye lag rahe hai..

Prtp: thik keha rahi hai aap ajabde.. Hum aap se kuch kehna toh chah rahe hai.. Kintu..( he signed a little )

Ajabde came in front of him n took his hand in hers..

Ajab: kuwar pratap.. Kya aapko hum par vishwas hai.??!

Prtp: apne aap se bhi jyada..

Finally completed.. Next update will be after a weak or two.. Coz I have my exams on from tomorrow.. 😡So will be back after my exams with updates.. Hope u guys understand. 🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Nice one waiting to see what happened with bhil sardar
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Oh meri amazing Apeksha All The very Best for the exams 👍🏼🤓
I know you will do really well in them...

I will be a good baccha and wait for 2 weeks pakka😃

Anyways what an amazing update - full of romantic moments totally enjoyed it, though am intrigued by the mystery Pratap will tell Ajabde...

Go Girl...un exams ki band baja dena 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all really sry for late rply was busy making vm 😊
Nw cuming to ur ss 😉
Amazing Ss Apkesha 😳
Haye Praja ka toh pta nahi bt mera haal bura ho raha tha 🤪 😆
I think Ajab se jayada toh m hi blush kar rahi thi padthe padthe 😛 😆
Loved chakri wala pt 😉 Sach m chakri ka kuch nahi ho saktha 😆
In All Loved it 😊
Thnks For Pm 😃
And All the bst for ur examz 🤗
Edited by HinaAdoresPraja - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Very cute and romantic. We will wait for your update. Studies come first.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

Nice one waiting to see what happened with bhil sardar


thnks.. 😊 the next update(s) will reveal the plots.. keep reading.. 😉

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