PrAja Ss ~|| HoNgE JuDa Na HuM ||~ Update on pg 20!! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heya ppls... Back with next chapter(s) But This time its with longer updates... Hope u'll enjoy...😉 dont forget to share ur views.. 😊 appreciation.., criticism.., all r welcomed..😃😛

Chapter~3

As soon as praja reached their room they saw that all the diyas that had litted was blown out may be due to the strong wind had blewen when they r out to meet Jb..

Ajab: kuwar pratap... Ye.. Saare diye aise kaise bhuj gaye..

Prtp : haan ajabde.. Sambhavata.. Hawa se saare diya bhujgaye honge ..
But as they entered inside.. Someone closed the door n locked from outside.. Pratap banged the door n called loudly..

Prtp: kon hai..!!! Dwaar kholiye..

Chakri: kshama kare baujiraji... Par hum dwaar nahi kholenge.. Kyuki Humare kaaran aap logon ko saath rehne ka avasar nahi mil paya that.. Issiliye ab hume uss baat keliye bharpaayi toh karni padegi na.. Ab ye dwar subha hi khulega..

Prtp: Chakrapani.. Ab ye kya naya swaang hai.. Dwaar kholiye..
Before he could continue.. Chakrapani had signed off them by wishing them good night..

Chakri: Shub ratri baujiraji.. Shub ratri baisa..

Prtp: chakrapani.. (He signed listening to the sounds of foot steps get vanishing) ye chakrapani bhi na.,

Ajab: kuwar pratap.. Ab hum kal ki taiyaari kaise sampann karenge..?? Kitna andhera hai yaha.. Hume toh kuch dekhayi bhi nahi de raha hai.,
*bang*
As she takes a step forward but collides with something.. N looses her balance..

Ajab: aah..!! (She screems.. As she was abt to fall but was protected with a strong pair of hands.. She knew it was none other than her husband pratap)

Prtp: ajab.. !! Aap thik toh hai.. Aap ko kahi lagi toh nahi..?!
Ajabde was overwhelmed by her husbands care.. She knew that he had cared for her since they met but caring as a husband was a different feeling that felt very gud..

Ajab: haan kuwar pratap.. Hum thik hai..

Prtp: ajabde.. Chaliye waha uss ore chadani ka prakash hai.. Toh hum wahi kuch der vishram karte hai.. Jaise hi yaha koi aayega.. Toh hum daasi se kehakar saare diya phir se jala denge.. Thik??

Ajab: (nodded in yes) thik hai chaliye..

They however slowly reached the window where the moon's light was emerging inside the room,, as soon as the light of the moon hit the face of ajab,, pratap stood as if he had frozen in the beauty of his wife... Ajabde was staring at beautiful moon so she couldn't see his reactions.. She slowly rubbed her hands as it was quiet cold wind was blowing..

Chapter~4

Ajab: kitna sundar hai.. Haina kuwar pratap..?? (Talking abt the moon)

Prtp: haan.. Wakai me.. Ati sundar hai..(talking abt ajab)

Ajab: pata hai kuwar pratap..?? She wanted to tell him something but as she turned at his side to have a look and found he staring at her ,. She forgot every single word which she wanted to say..oh god.. His eyes filled with love, passion n desire.. Both had a perfect eye lock..pratap came a little forward without breaking the eye lock..

Prtp: kahiye ajab.. Hum sun rahe hai..

Ajab: ku..kuwar pratap... Hum kehna chahrahe the ki..

Prtp(coming lil closer): ki..!!?

Ajab: (she swallowed a big lump formed in her throat..) Kuwar.. Kuwar pratap..

She was now blocked between pratap n window edge..
Pratap attached his fore head to her n closed his eyes.. Even she closed her eyes in anticipation as if surrendering herself to him..

Prtp(in husky voice): kahiye na ajabde... Kya keh rahi thi aap..

He was making it difficult for her,, not Able to controlled his sweet tortures.. Unknowingly she moaned his name..

Ajab: pratap..!!

pratap opened his eyes hearing his name from her.. Indeed he felt soo gud hearing his name from her but he then thought to tease her.. He suddenly parted from her..

Prtp: kya kaha aapne..?? (In fake anger tone)

Ajabde who was shocked at first.. But soon realised what a big mistake she had comitted..

Ajab: Woh.. Woh kuwar pratp.. Humara aisa karne koi martavya nahi tha.. Woh.. Galti se.. Hu..hume kshama kardijiye.. Hum aage se dhyan rakhenge.. Ksh..kshama.. Kardiji..ye.. ( she was hell afraid of his anger so she fumbled like anything)

Prtp: nahi ajabde.. Aisa nahi chalega.. Hum aapko isskeliye dhand bhi desakte hai..

Ajab: dhand??! A..achha..?! Toh thik hai.., bataayiye.. Kya dhand hai..

Pratap again pushed himself onto her.. Such that she was again sandwitched between pratap n wall..( all in angry young man mood)


Chapter~5

Ajab: kya huwa kuwar pratap... hum kehrahe hai na.. Kshama kardijiye Hume..

Pratap slightly bent towards her ears.. N whispered there..

Prtp: hum aapko aisa dhand denge ajabde.. Ki aap kabhi nahi bhool paayengi..

saying that he lightly kissed her earlobe.. To which ajabde gasped little.. She wanted to go away from there but nothing helped.. it was like she lost all her senses of moving..n frozen like a statue..

Pratap continued his ministrations on her giving her feather kisses to her eyes..,forehead.., cheeks n then shifted his gaze to her lips which sent shiver dpwn her spine...He lightly pecked her lips first.. But no sooner the kiss got deeper n passionate he started to kiss her harder whereas his another hand was caressing her bare waist...ajbde's slowly entangled her finger in his hair...she was moaning in pleasure.. She felt very gud,, very sweet.. She never knew this type of pleasure ever existed..this type of excitement was new to her.. Here pratap was no less.. He was not close to any girl as much as ajabde.. She always made him forgot the world around him... And that's the reason he loved her to the core..

Both were breathing fast.. N their heart was beating louder that seemed to come out off their body.. They were completely lost in the world of unknown pleasure...

Pratap stopped for a min n took a look at ajabde.. She had her eyes closed her..she can feel her cheeks burning due to shyness.. She was blushing profusely.. & her lips were somewhat swollen due to his kisses... She was totally flustered..

Pratap knew that this was too much for her to take in.. therefore he controlled his desires n didn't continued further coz he didn't want her to get scared of her feeling that r alien to her..

He slowly called her name.. Making her to return back to reality
prtp: ajabde..!!

She opened her eyes.. n without able to meet his eyes due to shyness she immediately hugged him tightly..

Ajab: hum aapse bohot prem karte hai kuwar pratap..

Prtp: hum bhi aapse bohot prem karte hai ajabde..

They spent their whole night talking, laughing whole heartedly.. & after sometime they dozed off in each others arm..

Phew..!!! Finally Completed.. I know it is so boring... But plzz bear me with this crap.. Ignore if any spelling mistakes..😛 next update will be lil late.. So gave this long updates...😉 do like and comment ur views.. Enjoy..😊
Edited by ApekshaM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Don't sell yourself short. Its not crap at all. Its very nice and romantic in fact.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: pari0706

Awww cute please continue soon


thanks ,,. will continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: coderlady

Don't sell yourself short. Its not crap at all. Its very nice and romantic in fact.


thanks yaar... I'm new in writing fan fictions.. so I'm lil nervous ... glad u liked...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc..loved it...
Waiting if something likes this happens in the show...
Anyway keep writing more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshalpraja

Nyc..loved it...

Waiting if something likes this happens in the show...
Anyway keep writing more...

Thanks.. 😊 well I don't whether this happens in the show..😕 these CVs r just🤬 ...they r boring their viewers by showing dheer bai.. & jagmal crap..😡 so dont know wen it happens in show..😲well I'm happy that writer in forum r avoiding these devils..😛 Yup.. Will continue soon.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally mere ko meetha meetha fruit mila 😊 amazing updates, beautifully written, chakri ko toh koi nahi sudhaar sakta😛

loved the way the kiss build up and took place...haye bas ab show mein bhi thoda romantic mood aa jaye Praja ke beech☺️

Par nahi CVs toh hume keval Dhoom 3 ki parody aur Pratap ke deewano se milwane mein lage hain😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

finally mere ko meetha meetha fruit mila 😊 amazing updates, beautifully written, chakri ko toh koi nahi sudhaar sakta😛

loved the way the kiss build up and took place...haye bas ab show mein bhi thoda romantic mood aa jaye Praja ke beech☺️

Par nahi CVs toh hume keval Dhoom 3 ki parody aur Pratap ke deewano se milwane mein lage hain😆

Thanks.. Chakri ka toh pata nahi..but CVs abhi nahi sudharenge..😆 romance toh abhi dur hai as u said.. But deewane abhi baaki hai..🤣 pehale topchi aur ab zaheer sakha.,😛 jallu toh hamesha dewaana hi rahega..🤣 par mere story me koi disturbance nahi hoga that I'll make sure..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I would love to read more without those distractions. Just Praja I think all of us would like that please please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

I would love to read more without those distractions. Just Praja I think all of us would like that please please continue soon


yup will continue soon... 😉thanks for commenting.. 😊

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