PrAja Ss ~|| HoNgE JuDa Na HuM ||~ Update on pg 20!!

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Apeksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: pari0706
lovely prologue please continue soon

thanks.. will try to update soon..

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ash41900

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

👏 looks promising ... do continue writing 😊 will b eager to read more!!

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Apeksha

@ApekshaM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ash41900
👏 looks promising ... do continue writing 😊 will b eager to read more!!

thanks for commenting.. yep will continue soon.. hope u guys will like it..

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Divi.C

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Aaahhaaa finally some thing romantic...
M eager to read further...

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Apeksha

@ApekshaM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Ok.. first of all thnks for all ur support guys.. i know I'm not much experienced in it.. but trying something for first time.. so plzz bear my writing.. 😛 if u all got bored with it then plz inform I'll windup by making it an Os or in Two shots... whatever it is., do share ur views..Here u go with the 1st chapter... Hope u guys enjoy reading..😉

Chapter~1

''Ajabde...'' He once again called which broke her train of thoughts..

Ajab: huh?! Kuwar pratap.. Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai??

Pratap chuckled a bit at his wife's question... Why the hell is she asking this question..'controlling his laughter he came near her

Prtp: ha hum... Ab ajabde,, agar hum apne kaksh mein nahi aayenge..toh phir kaha jaayenge? Aur waise bhi aaj toh humari pehli raat hai na AAP ke saath!!?

Ajabde blushed a deep shade of red at his remark

Ajab: a..aap bhi na kuwar pratap kuch bhi bolte hai... Hum jaante hai ki aap ko bohot aanad aata hai hume sathakar.. Kintu ye bhi koi Baat hui kya bhala..

She went on blabbering.. But stopped abruptly as she realised pratap was slowly heading close to her..

Damn he loved her the most,, n today she was not looking less than any angel.. He couldn't control but just admire her beauty... & he himself didn't realised when he started taking steps closer to her..

Ajab: Ku..kuwar Pratap.. Ye aap kya kar rahe hai.. kya H..Hum.. Humne kuch galat boldiya...kuwar pratap aap chup kyu hai.. Kuch toh boliye..

All the time pratap was coming a step closer to her n she was heading a step backward., the reason wasn't that she didn't want to be close to him but of new feelings that was tingling in her stomach..

She was hell nervous.. as this type of sensation was new to her..

He slowly grabbed her by her waist n cupped her faceBoth were too close to each other that they can feel each others breath..

Ajab: kuwar pratap aap...

Pratap silence her by keeping his finger on her lips..

Prtp: shhh... Kuch mat boliye ajabde.. Bas iss kshan ka aanad uthayiye..

Ajabde was breathing heavy due to their close proximity.. & he lightly kissed her fore head..then Her cheeks.,

n now he was moving towards her lips.. Both were breathing fast,, ajab closed her eyes in anticipation knowing what was coming next... 😉😳

that's it for the 1st part...I know this part is short but will give longer updates further... I'll continue if I got gud response.. 😊

Edited by ApekshaM - 11 years ago

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Divi.C

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Superb... So u r going to kill us with this slow romamce?? 😉

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Garima

@twilightlover29

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Woman you left us hanging just like those bure CVs 😔

Anyways nice chapter and I want to read a full story from you - yeh OS or TS baad mein likhna - yeh toh puri story honi chahiye (I'm a demanding thing aren't I 😎)

ab hume intezaar hoga ki kab woh kiss hoga
Update soon

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Pari

@pari0706

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Lovely please continue we need this

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Apeksha

@ApekshaM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Superb... So u r going to kill us with this slow romamce?? 😉

Kind of.. 😛 well try to update soon..😉

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Apeksha

@ApekshaM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: twilightlover29
Woman you left us hanging just like those bure CVs 😔

Anyways nice chapter and I want to read a full story from you - yeh OS or TS baad mein likhna - yeh toh puri story honi chahiye (I'm a demanding thing aren't I 😎)

ab hume intezaar hoga ki kab woh kiss hoga
Update soon

Intezaar karna hoga... Kyuki sabar ka phal meetha hoga hai..😆😛 will surely try to update soon,... Keep waiting😉 thanks for commenting..