A ZaYa TS||Consequences and Revelations (Final Part on Page 12!)

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Wow awsm ending

Loved it

Very emotional and beautifully written

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priya arora

@_Butterfly_

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

it was faboulus
really luved it
tysm 4 d pm :)

Edited by jazly_zayafan - 11 years ago

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oriyu

@oriyu24

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Long it was really awesome...
Beautifully written...
Thanks for the pm...

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Shruuu 🤗I LOVE LOVE LOVED it! You write so beautifully. I felt i was a part of the story and experiencing the same emotions and feelings as them. Not many stories make me feel that way LOL. Look forward to reading more xx

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Wow
That was amazing
Thanks for completing this ts
And also thanks for the pm
Amazing ending
I loved the dialogue about the storm and the cloud at the end
Just amazing
And part 2 was quite emotional aswel
When aliya is talking to usman grave and Zain is listening.. I was crying lol
Write lots more on zaya soon
Will look forward to more of or work
And do pm me when u write on zaya next
Once again..thanks for such an amazing ts

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Superb Ts!!!!👏👏
brilliantly written..⭐️
loved it❤️
thanks for pm...

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

SUPERB!
AWESOME!
WONDERFUL!

I am out of words to describe this TS.
This is simply amazing.
And next time you write something, pleaj can you pm me?
Thnks for writing this.

-Tanu...!

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Sruthi

@musicxolover

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: -Aashima-
SRUTHIII Girl that was awesome !!!! I loved how you made it all happen on Usman's graveyard because their relation broke at that place and it mended at that place only. I loved how u made Zain listen to her monologue 😃😃 The best part is that how everything was so connected 😊 As usual you wrote it beautifully and I was able to imagine all the scenes in my head. I loved how Aliya didn't give up easily 😆 Do come up with OS now 😃

Aashi, thank you so much girl 🤗 😳