FF:Pyaar Ka Ehsaas Upd. Part 10 Page 23- June 23rd - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kirancanada1



yeah i was
i just slipped from my hand!

Well next time be even more careful because I don't want you to get hurt again.

Originally posted by: sv_4eva

Wow Bumika Di!!! A fabulous update!!! Magnificent work!!! I loved it! Keep up the great work....continue soon =)

Thank You Meri sweet si Farhana Darling!!!!! Will update soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww aloo jee, you write such cute and sweet scenes .. You're a total sweetheart !

Hahahaha toh Gina has arrived .. am not liking her .. she should respect her jiju, not ... oh well hihi, great job =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Aww aloo jee, you write such cute and sweet scenes .. You're a total sweetheart !

Hahahaha toh Gina has arrived .. am not liking her .. she should respect her jiju, not ... oh well hihi, great job =)

Thank You Gina!!!!
I know I don't like Gina either, she is the complete opposite of you, you're such a sweety!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww....what a cute update...Amar is just...uff...what do I say..he's too good...heart shaped sandwiches and bowls...aww....and hmm..I wonder what was sooo mesmerising about the couple on tv...hehee...but lagta hain ke Gina kabab mein haddi bannewali hain...haha...please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
I will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: Suha_18

Awww....what a cute update...Amar is just...uff...what do I say..he's too good...heart shaped sandwiches and bowls...aww....and hmm..I wonder what was sooo mesmerising about the couple on tv...hehee...but lagta hain ke Gina kabab mein haddi bannewali hain...haha...please continue soon!!

Well the show that was coming on TV was probably Dulhann because it comes on at 8:00 on Zee TV in India so the couple on TV was probably doing something sexy!!! I know, Gina is such a kabab mein haddi. I will update ASAP.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bhumi please update...its been sooooooooo long man
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bhumika - Terrific Updates - so touching & sweet! 😊
Amar is such a sweetheart - taking care of Divya, showering her with love and affection. Too bad she doesn't understand just how loving he really is with her. Hopefully, she will remember all of it when she is better. 😊
As for Gina - you have done an excellent job conveying her evilness. Really, to say all is fair in love and war - when the man you're going to make a play for is your sister's intended? And your sister is ill. Yikes! That witch is very very cold, calculating and just plain nasty! 🤢
Will be interesting to see how Amar handles the difficult situation with Gina and all her unwanted attention.
Thanks for the update Bhumi (hope it's okay if I call you that)! Looking forward to the next one - whenever you have time of course. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Bhumi please update...its been sooooooooo long man

You're right it's been really long, I didn't notice that it's been this long.... I will try to update this weekend.

Originally posted by: fire_woman

Bhumika - Terrific Updates - so touching & sweet! 😊

Amar is such a sweetheart - taking care of Divya, showering her with love and affection. Too bad she doesn't understand just how loving he really is with her. Hopefully, she will remember all of it when she is better. 😊
As for Gina - you have done an excellent job conveying her evilness. Really, to say all is fair in love and war - when the man you're going to make a play for is your sister's intended? And your sister is ill. Yikes! That witch is very very cold, calculating and just plain nasty! 🤢
Will be interesting to see how Amar handles the difficult situation with Gina and all her unwanted attention.
Thanks for the update Bhumi (hope it's okay if I call you that)! Looking forward to the next one - whenever you have time of course. 😊

Thank You GG!!! Yup you can call me Bhumi, you can call me anything you want, as long as it's nice.... I will try to continue this weekend.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 8:
Gina: So....Where is my room? I need to freshen up.
Amar: You can go into Divya's room, because now Divya and I share the same room. I will show you which room it is.
Divya: Yea, Di you can sleep in my room and I will sleep with Amar, because whenever I sleep with him I don't feel scared.
Gina(thinking): They are in one room at night alone. If they sleep in one room they will get closer. I have to find some way to get them to sleep in separate rooms. What should I do? I have an idea...
Gina: Amar if you don't mind can I sleep with Divya? We have seen eachother after such a long time and I would like to spend as much time as I can with her.
Divya: But I don't want to sleep with you at night, I want to sleep with Amar, whenever I'm with him I'm not scared, he makes me feel safe. You're not like Amar.
Amar: Divya, the day after tommorow is your birthday right? And we will be getting married Right? And then you will be with me forever, you should spend as much time you can with your sister, because she's going to leave soon....
Gina(thinking): They're still getting married? If I knew that Amar was this cute and sweet in real life, I would have tried to stop their marriage before. I'm breaking up a couple, this feels so wrong. Yet I'm in love with Amar and I can't see my sister with him, and Divya always gets everything good in life because mom and dad love her way more than they have ever loved me so I should atleast get Amar, it's only fair.
Amar: Gina ji what are you thinking?
(Gina snaps out of her thoughts)
Gina: Oh nothing.... So you are getting married, on Divya's birthday? Even after what happend?
Divya: What happend? I want to know....
Amar: Nothing happend Divya... Um isn't your serial on right now? I will show Gina her room while you go watch your serial.....
Divya: OK.... Thanks for reminding me Amar my favorite show is on right now.
(Divya leaves and Amar and Gina walk to Gina's room.)
Gina: So, Amar you still haven't answered my question... are you and Divya still going to get married?
Amar: Why wouldn't we get married? We still love eachother and Divya is the most important person in my life....
Gina(thinking): Oh God it's going to be harder to separate these two then I thought it would be... What can I do to separate these two?
Gina: I know that you love eachother, but don't you think that it changes things now that she's......
Amar: Nothing has changed, and nothing will ever change... because I promised Divya that i would stay with her no matter what and I will stay with her for the rest of my life.... I can never break that promise that I made to her.... She's an angel sent to me by god, and I can never turn away a gift sent to me by God... If you've ever been in love you would know how hard it is to love someone else once you've already fallen in love and I can't ever love anyone more than I love Divya.... This is where you are sleeping...
Amar and Gina are at the room that Gina is sleeping in.
Gina: Thanks.
Amar: If you need something just ask... I am making breakfast do you have any special requests? I am making pancakes for Divya if you want some.
Gina: Sure...
Amar: I'll be done making breakfast in like 30 minutes so get ready, by then and then after we eat breakfast, you should come wedding shopping with us... because you're Divya's sister so you probably know what she likes and doesn't like...and another thing please don't mention the accident that happend infront of Divya.... she's unaware of what happend and I don't want her to ask questions and get stressed out, about what happend.
Gina: Oh sorry about mentioning the accident it just slipped out...
(Amar Leaves)
Gina starts to talk to herself: I can't believe that he loves her so much I thought that he would have given up because she is pagal but he is in serious love with her... I can change that.... I might not be able to get rid of their love but I can get rid of Divya. I really hate Divya she gets everything that she wants and I've hated her since we were children..... Well I better get ready for to go wedding shopping... well there is on point in wedding shopping when the wedding's not going to happen
Gina goes and takes a shower.
Meanwhile Amar and Divya are downstairs. Amar makes heart-shaped pancakes for Divya. Amar brings Divya her breakfast and then kisses her on the cheek. Divya touches her cheek.
Divya: Amar remember the show that I was watching yesterday the guy in that show kissed the girl in the show just like you kissed me today, but he didn't kiss her on the cheek, he kissed her all over her body. Amar why do people that are in love kiss eachother so much?
Amar: Divya did you like it when I kissed you?
Divya: Well I kind of liked it. I got a happy feeling in my tummy.
Amar: Welll you know the happy feeling that you feel in your tummy that's love, and a boy that likes a girl kisses her to make the girl feel good... Just like you felt good when I kissed you...
Divya: Oh...so people kiss eachother to feel happy...
Divya kisses Amar on the cheek... and Amar smiles
Divya: You're right kisses do make people happy just like you got happy when I kissed you... Amar sit with me and eat breakfast I don't want to eat without you....
Amar sits down and he is takes some of Divya's pancake and he's about to feed her, but Divya takes the fork out of his hand.
Amar: Why did you take the fork out of my hand?
Divya: You know how I watch serials... Well in the serials the boy always eats before the girl so I want you to eat first. So will you eat first?
Amar: Ok Divya...
Divya puts a lot of syrup on the pancake.
Amar: Divya that's so much syrup.
Divya: Well I thought that you would like a lot of syrup because you're a sweet person and syrup is sweet so I thought that sweet people like sweet things. Open wide
Amar opens his mouth and Divya starts to feed him, but Syrup drops all over Amar's shirt
Divya: Sorry. I didn't mean to drop that syrup on you. It just fell I'll clean it up for you. Come with me...
Amar: No need to say sorry it can be cleaned in a second.
Divya takes Amar into the bathroom and she starts to clean off the syrup and Amar thinks Divya looks really cute cleaning off the stain so Amar splashes water on Divya. Divya splashes some water on Amar. Amar splashes more water on Divya and they start to have a water fight in the bathroom. Amar fills some water in a small bucket that's in the bathroom and he's about to put it on Divya, but Divya runs away from Amar. Amar runs after Divya and Divya is laughing. She is dripping wet from the water fight.
Divya: Amar you will never be able ot catch.
Amar: I will catch up to you. You are so fast...
Divya runs up the stairs and Amar is out of breath because they've been running for a while now... Amar stops running. Gina comes out of her room and she sees Divya running so she puts her foot infront of Divya so that she would trip. Divya falls and she yells in pain. There is some blood coming out of Divya's head. Gina runs over to Divya to pretend that she cares. Amar comes and sees Divya and the blood coming out Divya's head. Amar starts to cry. Divya is unconcious.
Amar: Divya wake up. Divya stop playing with me. I know that you're just joking Divya come on now please wake up.
Amar takes out his phone and he calls the hospital.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bhumi this s awesome yaar.....after such a long interval......but an awesome one....i loved it....
this Gina na...i hate her....but OMG what will happen to my Divya now?

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