FF:Pyaar Ka Ehsaas Upd. Part 10 Page 23- June 23rd - Page 11

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Part 7
Amar makes some sandwiches for and he cuts them in the shape of hearts, and he has made soup which he put in heart shaped bowls, and a chocolate cake with pink icing shaped as a heart for desert and it has I love you Divya written on it.. Amar lights some candles and he dims the lights of the room to set the mood. Meanwhile Divya is watching her serial and the couple on TV is romancing and Divya is mesmerized by their romance on TV.
Amar: Divya, aa jayo dinner ban gaya- (Divya come on I made the sandwiches.)
Divya doesn't hear Amar at first because she is mesmerized by the scene on TV. Amar comes into the room with the TV and he sees Divya mesmerized by the romantic scene.
Amar(thinks): Divya main chahta hoon ki humare beech main bhi aise romance ho per tumhari aisi halat main, yeh sab nahi ho sakta. Main Tumhare ko sabse ache doctor ke paas le ja ke tumhari treatment karwaonga - (Divya, I really want to romance you like that but whne you are in this condition that can't happen. I will take you to the best doctor and get your treatment.)
Amar starts to cry and it's like Divya can feel Amar's tears so she turns around and sees Amar crying. Divya walks over to Amar and she wipes his tears.
Divya: Amar tum ro kyun rahe ho? Agar tumhare aankhon se aasoon atein hain mere aankhon se bhi aansoon atein hain. - (Amar Why are you crying? If there are tears in your eyes then there are tears in my eyes.)
Divya starts to cry too, and Amar wipes Divya's tears and he gives Divya a tight hug and he puts her head on his chest.
Amar: Divya tum meri takat ho agar tum roogi to mera kya hoga. - (Divya you are my strength, if you cry what will happen to me.)
Divya: Amar hum dono ko promise kerna hai ki hum dono kabhi bhi nahi cry karenge. - (Amar we both have to promise that we won't cry.)
Amar: Promise, Ab chalo khana tyaar hai. - (Promise, now come on dinner is ready.)
Divya goes into the dining room when she sees how beautiful Amar has decorated she gets a big smile on her face, Amar pulls out a chair for her and to sit in and she sits down and Amar pushes in her chair.
Amar: Maine aaj apke liye, sandwiches aur soup banaya hai. - (Today I have made sanwiches and soup for you.)
Divya: Amar the sandwiches look so cute, they are cut into the shape of hearts, and the soup is in heart shaped bowls. Amar can you turn on the light I don't like the dark.
Amar: Sure Divya.
Amar(thinks): Maine socha ki candle light dinner hoga, per fully lighted dinner bhi bad nahi hai. - (I thought that we were going to have a candle light dinner, but a fully lighted dinner isn't that bad.)
Divya and Amar are eating their dinner and Amar is staring at Divya, so Divya takes her sandwich.
Divya: Amar kya tume mera sandwich chaiye, isliye tum merko aise dekh rahe ho? - (Amar do you want my sandwich is that why you are staring at me like that?)
Amar: Nahi Divya merko tumhara sandwich nahi chaiye. Chalo main desert lata hoon. - (No Divya I don't want your sandwich. Ok let me bring desert.)
Divya: Amar desert main kya hai? - (Amar what is there for desert?)
Amar brings out the chocolate cake that says, I love you Divya.

Divya: Amar kitna sundar cake hai. I love you too!! - (Amar the cake is so pretty. I love you too!)
Divya takes a piece of the cake and she feeds Amar, and then she puts some icing on his face. Amar takes a piece of cake and feeds it to Divya and then puts some icing on her face too. Divya takes some more icing from the cake and rubs it all over Amar's face. Amar brings out the whole box of icing and he rubs some on Diyva's face. Divya takes a lot of icing in both hand and she rubs it all over Amar's cheeks.
Divya: Amar you look funny with icing all over your face.
Amar: Divya you look too sweet!!
Divya: Kitna maaza aya Amar. - (That was fun Amar.)
Amar takes his finger and he takes some of the icing from Divya's face and he licks his finger.
Amar: Divya you're as sweet as you look.
Divya takes her finger and she takes some of the icing from amar's face and she licks her finger.
Divya: Amar, you look as sweet as you taste too. Amar cake swad tha, you're a good cook. - (Amar, you looks as sweet as you taste too. Amar the cake was good, you're a good cook.)
Amar: Merko pata hai ki main good cook hoon. Ab hum dono kapre badlein. - (I know I'm a good cook. Should we both go change our clothes now.)
Divya: Chalo, phir hum dono so saktein hain. - (Let's go, and then we can both go to sleep.)
Amar and Divya get ready to go to bed and they put on their clothes. Divya goes to her bed, and lays down, but she can't go to sleep she's scared to be her room alone. So Divya goes to Amar's room.
Divya: Amar...Tum so to nahi gaye? - (Amar... You aren't asleep right?)
Amar: Nahi main abhi nahi soya. Kya hua Divya? - (No I haven't fallen asleep yet. What happend Divya?)
Divya: Amar merko neend nahi aa rahi main tumhare saath so sakti hoon? - (Amar I can't go to sleep, can I sleep with you?)
Amar gets a smile on his face hearing that him and Divya will sleep in the same room.
Amar: Of course Divya, this room is as much yours as it is mine.
Amar moves over a little to give Divya some room and Divya lays down in the bed, and she snuggles with Amar. Amar smiles. Amar and Divya fall asleep.
*Morning*
Amar and Divya are woken up by the sound of someone knocking on the door. Divya gets closer to Amar because she's afraid of who's at the door this early in the morning. Amar kisses Divya on the forehead, and then they go to the door.
Amar opens up the door and the wind starts to blow really hard, at girl is at the door and her hair is blowing in her face. Divya goes up to the girl and she hugs her, but all the girl stares at is Amar.
Divya: Gina Didi aap aa gayi! - (Gina Didi you are here!)
Gina stays quiet she just stares at Amar.
Gina(thinks): I didn't know that Amar was this hot. Is it wrong to like my sister's husband-to-be? Well they're not married yet so it's not wrong to like Amar.
Amar goes over to Gina and he shakes her hand.
Amar: Hi Gina, Main Amar hoon.
Gina just keeps staring at Amar, and Amar waves his hand infront of Gina.
Amar: Gina kya hua tum kya dekh rahi ho. - (Gina what happend, what are you looking at.)
Gina: Kuch nahi sorry main bas kuch soch rahi thi. - (Nothing, I was just thinking about something.)
Gina(thinks): Merko lagta hai ki merko Amar se pyaar ho gaya hai. Per theek nahi hai Divya ka pati hai. Per everything is fair in love and war. - (I think that I am in love with Amar. But that wrong because he's Divya's husband. But everything is fair in love and war.)
Divya: Gina didi mere saath chalo hum dono khelte hain. Maine apko miss kiya tha- (Gina didi come with me, we can play. I missed you.)
Gina: Theek hai Divya. Abhi baas thodi dare merko fresh hone do phir main ati hoon. - (Ok Divya. Just wait a little while and I will come after I'm fresh.)
Sorry for any mistakes.
Edited by *xoxo* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bhumi its short but too cute yaar.............i really love AD's sweet cute n innocent romance.....seriously i love it.....upadte soon dear..
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg wonderful update
but wasn't gina amars consin
oh well
lets see what gina is going to do
get amar and divya married soon!
and obviously continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *xoxo*

Yup Gina is our don so I decided to make her the villian because she already has a villianous background.

Thank You!!!!!
OMG how did you cut your finger?????
you know, a little knife accident

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow wonderful update it was great, update soon😊
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Arr the Devil had arrive.....fab update...please update fast..
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Originally posted by: titly

Bhumi its short but too cute yaar.............i really love AD's sweet cute n innocent romance.....seriously i love it.....upadte soon dear..

Thank You Titly sweetheart!!! I know it's short I thought it would be longer though.

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

omg wonderful update
but wasn't gina amars consin
oh well
lets see what gina is going to do
get amar and divya married soon!
and obviously continue soon!

Thank You Kiran!!
Gina was Divya's sister not Amar's cousin.
I will continue ASAP

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

Awwww.... Are you OK??? You have to be more careful with knifes Kiran.

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Originally posted by: kookie_29

Wow wonderful update it was great, update soon😊

Thank You Yashika!!! i will update ASAP.

Originally posted by: Manusha_LuvSD

Arr the Devil had arrive.....fab update...please update fast..

I know she is a devil, she is the opposite of our Gina. Our Gina is a sweetheart!!!!
Thank You Manusha!!!!
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Originally posted by: kirancanada1

Awwww.... Are you OK??? You have to be more careful with knifes Kiran.


yeah i was
i just slipped from my hand!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow Bumika Di!!! A fabulous update!!! Magnificent work!!! I loved it! Keep up the great work....continue soon =)

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