FF - Aastha... ek nahi kahaani

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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is the first time I am writing a ff so please do reply and give me you feedback!
Plot:

This story of this ff is that therre are four families - The Malhotra's, The Chopra's, The Gupta's, and The Malik's. All these families are sending their children to become interns at "Aastha" - a very well known hospital in Delhi. The story revolves through love, friendship, happiness, and sadness and how they help each other throughout their lives. Read on to know more...
Introduction:

The Malhotra's:

Mr. Malhotra: Head of the Malhotra household and is the owner of a very well known business. Loves his family alot, especiall his sons.
Mrs. Malhotra: Housewife who is very proud of her sons and wants them to become doctors.
Sharad Malhotra: 20 years old and is starting his internship at Aastha.
Karan Malhotra: 20 years old and is starting his internship at Aastha.
(Sharad & Karan are twins but don't look like each other)
The Chopra's:

Mr. Chopra: Head of the Chopra household and is the owner of a very well known business. Loves his family a lot, especially his daughters.
Mrs. Chopra: Housewife who is very proud of her daughters and wants them to become doctors.
Divyanka Chopra: Likes to be called Divya. 20 years old and is starting her internship at Aastha.
Prachi Chopra: 20 years old and is starting her internship at Aastha.
The Gupta's:

Dr. Shashank Gupta: Head doctor of Aastha and loves his daughter a lot.
Riddhima Gupta: 20 years old and is starting her internship at Aastha.
The Malik's:

Mr. Malik: A very big business owner who lives in America and has sent his son to start his internship at Aastha.
Armaan Malik: 20 years old and is starting his internship at Aastha.
Thats the plot and introduction, please tell me if you like it, then I will give you all an update! Thanks.😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey aditi!

great start.. ! sounds really interesting... medical life ... Aastha...

loved the characters and intro.. update soon pls😉

-shobby😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Aditi !
This is Vidya !
Wonderful Start!!
Another ff added to my list !! Once again we'll get to see doctors!!
Interesting !!👏👏
All the very best!!
Vidya
Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW!! love it already!! update soon!!
-Priya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you so much! I will try my best to update it as soon as possible.
-Aditi 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another FF kool,update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

Divya…

Rrrinng. Divya Chopra woke up right away. She couldn't get late on her first day. Divya turned off her alarm clock and went to her dresser.

She carefully brushed each strand of hair to look perfect for her first day as an intern at Aastha.

Since the age of 6, Divya had already announced to her parents that when she grew up, she would become a doctor, the best doctor in the world.

Divya was always ambitious. She always knew what she would do and would do anything to accomplish that and I mean anything.

She then went to the bathroom and got ready. Around 15 minutes later, Divya was all ready and went to her sister's room to wake her up before they would get late.

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Prachi…

Prachi Chopra was still asleep. She couldn't get any sleep the day before because all she could think about was how much fun she would have the next day when it would be her first day at Aastha – the best hospital in the world (well, at least to Prachi). Around 2 in the morning, she actually went to sleep and now wouldn't get up.

It was all up to Divya now; Prachi would've never gotten up if it weren't to Divya.

Divya silently went to the bathroom and filled a jug full of cold water and then went to Prachi's bed and dumped the whole jug on her.

Prachi screamed and kicked Divya. "Divya, how could you do this to me?" Prachi shouted even more as Divya just started laughing. "Prachi, you better go get ready before we get late." Divya said as she took Prachi's best clothes out for her first day at Aastha.

Even though Prachi and Divya were twin sisters who didn't look alike, Divya was always the elder sister to Prachi.

Prachi was the bubbly one who would always make anyone laugh no matter what mood that person was in while Divya was the serious one who made sure everything was all right.

Nothing was a secret between Divya and Prachi. They always shared whatever they wanted to say.

Finally, 30 minutes later, Prachi came out and asked Divya how she looked. "Prachi, you always look awesome, no matter what!" Divya said.

Prachi and Divya were all ready and were now getting ready to go downstairs for breakfast with their parents and then leave for Aastha.

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Sharad…

Sharad Malhotra…the hottest guy in town. Sharad was an all-rounder. All types of people – his parents, his teachers, his friends, and not to forget girls loved him! He was the most responsible as well as the smartest with all straight A's. He was good at everything – just name it.

He would finish everything on time even before it was due. All the boys in school wondered what was wrong with them but Sharad was just Sharad – simply awesome!

Even awesome would be a plain word to define Sharad Malhotra. He was one of a kind.

Obviously, Sharad was the first up in his whole family. He always was. Sharad had everything all ready from the day before. All he had to do was get ready and wake up Karan. Karan…

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Karan…

Karan Malhotra…the total opposite of Sharad. Karan was poles apart from Sharad but still looked up to him. He was smart and everything but had this special attitude towards everything. He had his share with girls but isn't that much into girls because he knows how they are – boring.

Karan loved his brother, but still didn't understand what he himself lacked. Mom and Dad would always think about Sharad before Karan probably because he was more responsible but that didn't mean anything to Karan. All he knew was that his brother was the best.

Karan's problem was that he couldn't leave his iPod even for a second. His iPod helped him sleep at night, which is why he still has his headphones on till the morning, which is why he doesn't hear his alarm clock, which doesn't help him because then Sharad has to wake him up every morning.

Sharad would always wake up Karan every morning, which is what he did today too. Sharad carefully opened Karan's door and pulled out Karan's headphones and screamed in his ear. "Karan." Karan woke up at once. "Kya bhai, mujhe kyun uta diya?" Karan said while Sharad just laughed. "Don't you have something special today?" Sharad said while Karan started thinking. "Oh yeah, today is our first day at Aastha." Karan said excitedly. "You didn't forget, pretty good." Sharad said sarcastically.

After that, Karan was all ready to leave with Sharad for his first day at Aastha.

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Riddhima…

Riddhima Gupta was all ready for her first day at Aastha. She had worn a delicate and simple salwaar kameez for her first day. She couldn't have been any more excited to be working as an intern in her father's hospital.

Riddhima was always very simple and sweet. She would always get the best grades and would always make her father proud in all ways.

Riddhima had always wanted to be like her father and wanted to help people in need especially the elderly. She loved kids and would always babysit for her cousins and relatives kids.

Riddhima wanted everything perfect and made sure everything was in order. She would bring a smile on everyone's face whoever she met.

Riddhima had eaten breakfast and was all ready for her first day at Aastha and to leave with her father.

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Armaan…

Armaan Malik…one of a kind. Armaan was the sweetest and cutest of all. Armaan loved life and believed that everyone should be happy no matter what.

His favorite hobby was listening to his iPod and to play basketball. Basketball was Armaan's life. Without basketball – there was no Armaan.

Armaan would wake up every morning at 4 at and start practicing while he listened to his iPod. It was the same this morning too – Armaan had already waken up and started playing basketball as usual.

Around 6 o'clock, Armaan went and got ready for his first day at Aastha, which was going to be so much fun.

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That's it guys, hope you like it. Thanks so much for the encouragement. Have fun and please do reply. 😊 -Aditi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Aditi !

That was indeed a great start !
Loved all the characters ! All are soo adorable!
I am sure , will have a great time reading this ff!
All The Very Best !
Thanks for the update !
Vidya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Aditi! Great Start!

please read my 1st ff too call "Tere Bina"!
Aniway wow!!!
A mix of Bmtd Dmg Ks and......(i dont remember!...sorry)
Please continue soon i cant wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Divya and Prachi…

Divya and Prachi were all ready for their first day at Aastha. They were extremely happy and excited, especially Prachi, who was jumping up and down in joy. "Will there be cute boys, di." Prachi asked Divya excitedly. "Prachi, we're going as interns to become doctors, not to think about boys." Divya said in a serious voice. "Oh, yeah, how did I forget?" Prachi replied back in a sarcastic tone.

Mr. Chopra was all ready to leave his daughters at the hospital for their first day and then leave straight for his office. Mr. Chopra was a very successful business owner who was very proud of his daughters for who they were. Mr. Chopra always wanted to see his daughters happy and made sure that no one would hurt them in any way. He was very protective about them.

Before leaving, Mrs. Chopra gave her daughters a special sweet, yogurt and sugar. Mrs. Chopra believed that eating yogurt and sugar mixed together was a good omen for a good day. Divya and Prachi ate it happily to make their mother feel happy. After saying their final goodbyes, Divya and Prachi left with their dad.

About 15 minutes later, Divya and Prachi had reached Aastha for their first day as an intern.

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Sharad and Karan…

Sharad and Karan were almost ready. Right when they were about to step out, Karan remembered something. "Bhai, wait a sec." Karan said as he ran back inside. "Karan, now what." Sharad shouted. Karan quickly came back with an iPod in his hand. "Now I'm ready, let's leave." Karan said quickly. Sharad just sighed out loudly.

Sharad quickly reached inside his pocket to get out his keys for his shiny silver Volvo. Once he found them, Sharad got inside but was still waiting for Karan who was apparently daydreaming. "Karan, what's wrong? Why don't you get inside quickly?" Sharad said.

Karan, who had his headphones in his ear, couldn't hear anything. "Karan." Sharad shouted on top of his lungs. Karan finally heard and asked Sharad what took him so long to find the keys. "It wasn't me, it was you, who couldn't hear anything." Sharad replied back. "Sorry, anyways let's leave." Karan said with his crooked smile.

Both boys finally reached Aastha after Sharad parked and were just about to step in…

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Riddhima…

Riddhima was all ready and was just waiting for her dad to come and then leave. Riddhima still couldn't believe today would be her first day where she would work as an intern at her dad's very own hospital – Aastha.

Riddhima was still looking in the mirror to see if she looked okay just when Dr. Gupta told Riddhima he was all ready to leave.

Dr. Shashank Gupta and his daughter were already seated and were on their way to Aastha.

Once her father had parked, Riddhima was all ready for her day to meet new friends and help people in need.

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Armaan…

"Armaan Malik, how do you look?" Armaan asked himself again and again. Armaan wanted to look perfect for his first day when he would fulfill his mother's dream to become a doctor.

Armaan had to look perfect when all the girls would look at him and ask, who's that?

Armaan was finally ready to leave as he locked his house and opened his shiny black BMW.

About 10 minutes later, Armaan had reached Aastha for his first day as an intern.

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That's it. I'm sorry if it was boring. Please do tell me, I will appreciate it. Thanks for all of your support! ...Aditi 😊

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