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Posted: 16 years ago
thank you guys. you're insight on this is really interesting. let's seee what will happen=]
haha but PYDAK has yo be updated first since i promised i'll go in order.😃
lovee youu alllllllll😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
First of all...I'm sorry for the late comment yaar...I was about to read it when you had updated...but then guests arrived...and I've been catching up with everything else since...
Anyway....the update was great...how sweet of Sharad to scatter the flowers to say 'sorry'...I'm starting to like him again...he did behave like an idiot before...but he's making the effort to sort it out....waiting eagerly for the next update Kalee!! Please update as soon as you can!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
"The weak can never forgive.
Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong."
-Gandhi ji.

Part 40-

Divyanka's P.O.V.

"Divyanka!"

I sighed. Sharad's mom was always on my back, these days. She was back to her nosiness. And honestly, I don't know how I actually thought she was an alright woman. She was different with me, though. The real her was how she acted in front of Mr. Malhotra, quiet and weak. The whole strong and in control attitude was just an act. I release my doorknob, turning to face her.

"Yes?"

"If you don't mind, I need to go to a kitty party today. But there's nothing for dinner so do you think you could take care of it?"

Ugh. "Um, yeah, sure."

"So just follow the recipe I left on your bed."

"Oh, I didn't see it yet. I just came home." I bit my tongue after the last word. I wish I could have taken that back.

Her lips twitched. "Oh, where were you?"

"With Riya, shopping."

She eyed the bag in my hand. "What'd you get?"

You see what I mean? "Just two dresses."

"Can I see them?"

"Uh, sure. I'll show you inside." I know I should just stand up to her and tell her to get off my back. But there wasn't any point I only had to deal with this for a few more days.

We stepped in the room, she following right behind me. Our eyes went straight to the flowerbed on my bed. We both stopped. I looked at Sharad's mom who was already watching me. I knew why she was watching me, to see if my face gave anything away, to see if my explaination would match my expression. I kept a blank face, while my brain was racking for answers.

"Oh, what's this?"

"Um, I…" I saw a sudden movement from the crack of my closet. Sharad. I forced a smile, hoping my eye reflected it. "Woh, it's an inside joke between me and Sharad. Nothing serious." I glanced behind her shoulder at the closet. "You go, I'll show you the dresses later. I want to rest before I get dinner started." She looked at me, seriously before replying. Her eyes searched face-for the truth, probably. Maybe I wasn't such a good liar, but at least I hid the truth.

"Okay," she smiled, watching my face still.

As soon as she left, I stood in front of the closet my arms folded limply at my upper abdominals. "You can come out, now."

With a little banging and sliding, Sharad stumbled out of there. He looked up, grinning weakly. "So you like the…bed?" He attempted a chuckle, but it made an awkward sound.

"Sharad, I'm leaving in a few days. So I don't care. Even if I forgive you, I won't stay. Because I don't know why I'm here. Marriage, real or fake, true love or a compromise, is not for me."

"Fine, you can leave but I need to be forgiven. Truly forgiven. Because…" He paused. Then his lips parted as if they were going to continue but all that came out was a sigh.

"Well, I don't know yet. I'll let you know before I leave."

"Can I at least explain myself?"

I was about to refuse but decided otherwise. "If it'll make you stop annoying me, then yeah."

He gestured to the couch. I rolled my eyes, looking at him wearily. I walked to the crouch shaking my head lazily. He sat down on the love seat, leaning on the edge. Trying to be closer to me without being too close.
"Well," he looked at his fumbling hands, "I know I suck. And the thing is I know I hurt girls emotionally. But, Divyanka, I would never ever ever hurt a girl physically. I've never hit girl and you don't have to tell me that I screwed up with you. I just want you to know that wasn't me. Most of it wasn't. I feel like crap ever since. And I need you to forgive me. And I...I need to know you're okay. My past with my parents just gets to me. Especially, with my dad. I know it doesn't concern you at all. But what I mean..." He sighed, moving back now to rest his head on the edge. "Just forgive me. Please. I'll do anything to prove I'm sorry."
Maybe I was being too harsh. Maybe too unfair. I knew he was sorry, but I couldn't bring my self to say it. Just like how sometimes people hate admitting they're wrong. I looked into his eyes. The gleam in his dark brown eyes pleaded me. Finally, I decided to play around a little.
"You'll do anything?"
He hesitated, taken aback by the sudden muschief in my eyes. I tried to hide my coy smile. "A-anything."
"Cook dinner." I scooted back on the couch, leaning back, and crossed my arms across my chest, satisfied.
He raised his eye brows for a brief second. He was confused, as if think he didn't hear me correctly. "Cook dinner?"
"Yes, the recipe should have been on the bed. Just use that."
"Uh. Okay," he said, unsure.
"And if it's good, you're forgiven." I started to get up, going to the closet.
Sharad followed me, "But how does that prove anything?"
I took a towel out of my suitcase and turn to face him. "Fine, then you're not forgiven."
He sighed, defeated. I smiled walking away from him to the bathroom. With my back still facing him, I said, "And don't forget to boil the onions, thoroughly before you blend them..."
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Showered and refreshed, I decided to check out Sharad's progress on dinner. When I reached the kitchen, his back was facing me. He was doing something at the counter by the stove. There was an unfamiliar song playing lightly from the kitchen radio. Wlaking up slowly behind him, "So, how's it going?" I asked.
He turned around startled. Then, relaxed, seeing it was me. He rolled his eyes, and turn back. I went next to him to see he was mixing chicken with the mixture. His hnds were covered with the mixture. Nice and red. "Good job. It smells good."
He didn't look up. "It's not even cooked yet."
"Well, believe it or not, if the mixture is perfect, the chicken will be too." He didn't say anything. "Sharad, what's that?"
He looked up. "What?"
I touched my forhead, rubbing it lightly. "I think there's something on your forehead." I kept my cheek cleanched to keep from smiling.
As I had hoped, he mimicked me, rubbing his forehead roughly. My lips immediately broke into a smile. And a look of awareness crossed his face. I started laughing, his forehead was now covered with the mix. He smiled in oh-so-you-think-that's-funny? way.
"Divyanka, I think you have a little something write here." He rubbed his hand into my cheek. I bit my lip shaking my head. It was his turn to laugh. Oh, he was a goner. I took a hand ful of yogurt and threw it at his face. He wiped his mouth. Our smiles were daring each other. He looked around and just as he spotted the ginger-gralic paste, I ran...But it was of no use. He threw it right into my hair. Within minutes, we were covered with random things from the fridge to all the ingrendiants for the chicken. He had ghee in his hands, and was chasing after me. Right then, I slipped. Sharad burtsted into laughter.
"Shut up," I said, starting to laugh myself. "At least, help me." He walked over, hysterically cracking up. He came and offered me his hand, having hard time to stifle his laugh. Instead, with one pull on his leg, I managed to make him fall on the ground as well.
"Wow, the kitchen looks like a real mess from down here."
I looked around me. Everything was covered with food. "Oh, yikes. Um, how about we order out for dinner?"
"Good idea."
I got up to clean up the mess. "Wait, Divyanka, did you forgive me?" I looked down at him.
"Obviously."
Sharad beamed, jumping to his feet. "Thanks," he said, his voice low.
I smiled. "Now come on, help me clean up."
Were we friends? I don't think so. Did this mean I wasn't leaving? No. Should I have clarified that with him? Maybe, I don't know. Did I? No.
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sorry, no chance to edit. hopefully my mistakes can be forgiven. sorry for anyhting else. if i don't post it now, i won't be able to until later on.
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Posted: 16 years ago

ATB <3 u!!!!!!

Shobby : once again u had to leave us in surprise.. I guess i would b figuring out whats on Divz mind.. .the rose petals on the bed.. I was expecting for more drama n romantic one on that part... anyways.. I just loved it so much.. they forgotten everything... n looks like i can smell something good... it's time for the love chapter.... =)

U re an awesome writer Kalee.. =)

luv😃,

Shobby

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Posted: 16 years ago
It was a wonderful update!
I'm glad she forgave him N the food fight was funny LoL
The update was nice N I didn't see any mistakes so dun worry about it...
AwwWww they still aren't friends... This reminds me of our SV from our FF but look at em now LoL
Well I hope you continue soon =] Once again the update was fantastic =D
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Posted: 16 years ago
No mistakes at all...great update...Food fight was so cute....i was expecting a little kiss or something😆..o well continue soon......and they still aren't friends..hmm..u r a awesome writer Kalee
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah!! fab updat edi!! glad you updated!! it was aawesome!! what a nosy soon to be maybe saas!! lol.the kitchen food fight seemed like fun!! thnx for the update..im glad she forgave him.....i wouldn't have..but................anyways!! luved it!! thnx sooo much!
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was GREAT, just loved it. continue reallly sooooooon. im like so impatient ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow.....I just loved that food fight between them....and I'm glad she forgave him...but yaar...what an irritating saas...sheesh...a bit nosy na?? Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahahaaa, thanks guys.
i'm sort of excited for this FF, right now. will continue soon.
i love your comments guys.
:]<3

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