FF: Yeh Pyar Kya Hai?...[Part 40-Pg. 43] 8/14!

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Manusha

@Manusha_Divz

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#271

Sharad really is messed up man...he needs someone to help him..i think Divz will...that was an awesome update....poor Divz😒 do continue soon..or i will make u on FB😆

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kmishra

@kmishra

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#272

thankooo:]

i'll update soon though. i'm getting back in the groove. and finally have fixed ideas. i'll have to pdate the others and then i'll do this one. i'll start today and PROMISE not to get lazy.

and if i do, i know you'll make me update on FB.

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Manusha

@Manusha_Divz

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#273

I hope i wont need to make the FB move😆

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#274

oh wowee!! first, thanks soo much for updating kalee di!! ireally missed this ff!! second, luv the update!! someone better get sharad straight.im glad nothing much happened to divz though,,,,,,,,,,,i feel soo bad though.sharad was kinda sweet though how he just ran and felt soo bad.but im still mad at him😡

thanks di, it was fab!! can't wait til the next update to see what you have up your sleeve

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TTT

@Tariii

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#275

i dont know why and HOW i missed part 16 and 17 ...

but finally caught up and must say.. once again, AMAZINGLY WELL WRITTEN AS ALWAYSSS.....

i just love the emotion and passion in the story... when you write, as i read it i felt as though i was watching a clip/movie. it was awesome. CONTINUE SOON. it cant get any better then this. ITS AWESOME!! Kalleee, once again am highly impressed by your writting. We DO have extreme talented writters in this FORUM... you should totally become a writer... I WILL SURELY BUY ALL YOUR BOOKS 😉

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kmishra

@kmishra

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#276

Radhikaaa--thanks for the comment..=] it was sweet in a way. but of course not enough to make divyanka forgive him. i'll update as soon as i update PDAK.

Mushii---hahaha thankss loveee. your comemnt really made me smilee. i love hearing it especially from a brilliant writer like you.

loveisreal222--tell me about it.something's definitely wrong with that BOY.

thankoo everyoneee<3

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: kmishra
Radhikaaa--thanks for the comment..=] it was sweet in a way. but of course not enough to make divyanka forgive him. i'll update as soon as i update PDAK.---what does that mean??😕
youre welcome!! yeah, i wouldn't forgive yet either.........kewl!

Mushii---hahaha thankss loveee. your comemnt really made me smilee. i love hearing it especially from a brilliant writer like you.

loveisreal222--tell me about it.something's definitely wrong with that BOY.

thankoo everyoneee<3

Edited by bmtdluver - 16 years ago

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kmishra

@kmishra

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#278

hahah it means..Pyaar Dosti Aur Kya :]

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#279

Kalee! You have such amazing talent! Your writing is so vivid. Your portrayal of each charater so clear, their emotions so deep and defined.

I hate to admit I had forgotten about this FF. 😳

But now that I am caught up again - literaly and figuratively speaking - I remember why I loved it so much! 😊

Poor Divz, her poor opinion of men is only strengthened by what she sees, hears and feels from Sharad. Hopefully, she will see that even a boy like Sharad can eventually change, become a caring man, who thinks of others before himself. As he did, briefly, when he took care of her after she was attacked by Kunal.

And hopefully, seeing how he hurt Divz, will finally bring Sharad around. Get him to stop feeling so sorry for himself. Mature into a man, instead of trying to stay a boy who drowns himself in drink, self-pity and poor choices! To take a good look at himself and recognize what he needs to do - fast!

Okay enough of my going on and on. Sorry about that - I know get way too chatty! 😳

Looking forward to more & more of your updates!