UPDATE RAYA SS : A Simple Wish Part 18 on page 27 *25-03-15*

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Cute_Saakshii12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Lovely update!!!
Continue sooon and thanks 4 pm!!

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MnSakshifan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Beautiful update...
Pls continue soon..
Thanks4 pm...

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AdhwikPriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

superb!!!!!Abb confession to banta hai,thanks fr the PM aman

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aanchal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

So Ram still hesitant towards Priya Aunt and Uncle but all is fine. Priya bought a gift for her special friend Ram. Raya are such a duffer doing everything possible but still not confessing their real feelings. Continue soon and thanx for the pm...

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Suriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

story progressing gud way... Pls cntinue soon.. Wish raya open up their feeling fr each other soon..

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akilagoud2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

nice updates
continue soon
thanks for all pm's

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reshak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Beautiful update.

dono pyar tho krte phir b kehne q drte hai..

waiting for their confession...

Thanks for pm... pls continue...

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Janilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

RECAP :

The day flew by with Ram and Priya..spending all the day in the balcony..either swinging in the swing together...or Ram..swaying slowly it while Priya..kept talking...or both of them sitting at the bridge of the stoned fence..looking at the weherabouts of the morning sun...making its way for east to west...they shared their lunch and tea also at the balcony...
Night was something different..which left Priya pounder more on her relationship with Ram...

PART 14

As the sun dipped into the ocean...giving way to night life...Ram and Priya..walked down the stairs...their little finger entwined against each other...he brushing the back of her palm..genlty...with his thumb..

Priya would..down cast her eyes each time she looked at him...finding his eyes soft eyes at her..it had a different shine in them...against the mildly light grand hall of Kapoor Mansion...

Jeffery laid the last of the cutlery..as they approached the dining table...

All this time Ram did not leave her hands...They ate peacefully...letting their eyes do the talking...Priya flushed each time they meet his gaze...eat was getting difficult for her...and he knew it...his heart was filled with a different kind of emotion...he felt happy..being close to someone again...

"How about a walk..." He asked her...her eyes were still trying to rest on his handsome face..but each time it made her weak inside...and helplessly to hid her sensations that he created on her..she darted them away...

She could only nod in reply...

While moving into the garden...Ram asked Jeffrey if he would get hot chocolate for them there...

The garden was dimly light at places...it had that typical smell of earth...it got back the memories of her home...which and a small front garden...

Sound that filled the air was as if crickets were having symphonies and fireflies were their audiences...

Ram tucked his hands inside the pocket and took a deep breath..as if getting ready to say something...but words failed him...he started to look here and there...trying to break the ice...while Priya wrapped her hands around herself...walking beside him hoping he would say something...

Then it was there...Ram...eyes wondered into the deep night sky...it was glittering with tiny shining stars...

Craning her head towards the direction Ram was looking Priya saw the blanked of stars... shining back at them...

"Look at the stars how they shine for us...every night..they are so...small from here but light up the darkest night...I'm truly awed by them...all I want is to fix my gazed at them and stare up... the shine the belongingness they share with the night..."

He followed the line of stars and his vision rested upon her she was looking at him..straight..there was this urge of longingness...as if her eyes were begging for his belongingness...she wished to tell him...she was also thinking the same...if only the word stars are replaced YOU'...

There was a spark between them...which hand be fighting against the storms filled inside Ram...but now it seemed...he too wanted to shield it...give it time...Tension was building between...which they desired to grow...but...

"yes they are beautiful..."Priya broke the gaze looking back into the direction of the sky...trying to make the situation ease of the tension between them...she playfully stated... "someone is being poetic here...hmmm..." and nudged against his shoulder...

"No..I was just saying..." he smiled a little..

"Well I find that saying' as being poetic..." she continued pulling his leg...and again nudged him...

"Oh come on Priya it was just a line nothing...as you are saying..." he was blushing...

"Oh my...Mr.Poet is blusing..." She again went on to nudge him..but Ram dodged...this time...

He was ready to grab her...this time...

But she was quick enough to escape...She ran past him...into the garden..laughing...at his loss of catching her...

Ram ran behind her...he could have easily grabbed her the next moment...but he liked watching her like that...laughing...running ahead of him...her hair dancing along her move...her dress swaying along with her...he would give up anything for this sight...

"What happened Mr. Poet not good enough to catch me?..." she challenged him...still laughing...

He ran behind her...she dodged behind the bushes and the metallic garden arrangement...it was he who let her escape...he was liking this little fun and game...

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Dhristi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Really lil romantic n cute part hope Raya ll confess soon waiting for next part thanks for pm

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

wow...priya is jiddi. wo apni har jidd ram se puri karva rahi hai. and ram also enjoying this. pl make them confess their love. thanks for pm. pl continue.