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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello friends,sorry for late update,

Here is next part,excuses if any mistakes..



Original writer Soumya

Part 11:

Ram:tum vusse angry nahi Ho.. matlab,agar vo tumse shadi karna chahiye tho tum vuse accept karoongi?

Priya:nahi Ram,vo kabhi mere jindangi me part nahi bansakthe.that was a blind mistake of me that day...but this time,it will never happens. meri life sirf aarav keliye.

The room filled with silence for a while.no cry,no angry...

They both are stood like statues.

Priya said all her feelings about that unwanted person.Ram got all his answers.

It was a clean sky after a heavy rain.

Suddenly priya phone rings.

Priya:hello, aarav.

Aarav:hello,mamma,aap friend ko milne gayi thina?

Priya:mai vuse bath kar rahi thi.

Priya gives mobile to Ram...

Aarav:friend aapse,mujse naraz hai kya?

Ram:tumhara friend tumse kabhi naaraz Ho sakta hai kya?

Aarav:friend ,aap abhi tak aayi kyo nahi?i missed you.

Ram:I missed you too.maine nikalne vaala tha,lekin tumhara mamma ne ghar dekhrayi thi,tumne sab kuch tumhara choice arrange kiya na!tumhara mamma sub cheeez criticize kar rahi thi,ye aisa kyo,yaha kyo,...?

Priya drags her phone from Ram.

Aarav:I know,she is old model.vo sab vunke pasand nahi aathi..

Priya:accha?mai ghar aake bathavungi mai kya model hoon!

Aarav:mamma aap?he cuts the phone..

Ram and Priya both smiles and leaves.

They both in the car.

Priya:opens window and watches outside.

Ram:watches her.(st).i know priya,ab tak jo kuch huva mai vuse badal nahi karsakthi,lekin ab se mai vadha Karta hu,tumhe aur aarav ko mai kabhi nahi choodungi,tum dono ko mai har kushi doonga..

He stops the car at icecream parlour and brings aaravs favourite one.

Ram drives the car with left hand.priya observes him.

Priya:kya huva Ram,tum left hand se drive kar rahi thi,any problem?

Ram:kuch nahi priya,bus right hand thoda pain hai.

Priya:tho mai karoongi na!

Ram: no problem,I can.

They reaches home and enters.aarav sees them and pretends he is sleeping.

Ram identifies his acting,and signs to Priya...

Ram:oh priya,aarav so Gaya hai,maine vuske liya icecream laya hu...,koi bath nahi,hum dono kaa lenge...they both returns.

Aarav:nahi nahi mai soyi nahi..aarav getsup from the bed.

Priya:holds his ear,ab bathav mai old model hoon?

Aarav:sorry mamma,looks at Ram and winks.

Ram:chodo priya,vo tho sach hi keh diyana.?

Priya:tum bhi Ram..?

Aarav:chodo na mamma,nahi tho aapke gusse se icecream melt hojayegi.

Priya angrily leaves from there with icecream.

Ram and aarav smiles with a hi-fi. Ram hugs aarav tightly.i am sorry aarav,I am really very very sorry and kisses him.

Aarav:kya huva friend?aap ithne senti kyo?

Ram:kuch nahi aarav,do din se tumne milne se nahi aaya na?i missed you a lot.

Aarav:tho,aap promise karo,mom ne aapse gussa bina ,aap kabhi mujse bath karna bandh nahi karoongi..

Ram:promise aarav, tumhara mamma chahe ya nachahe, mai tumse baath karrahoongi.

Priya watches them,mai kab aaya tum dono ki beech me?she comes with icecream bowls.

Aarav:tum tho scene starting me se thina?

She gives the bowls to both.Ram suddenly drops the bowl.

Priya:kya huva Ram?

Ram:kuch nahi,maine kaha na, thoda pain hai hand me!

Priya:thoda pain?tum ek bowl bhi teekse pakad nahi karsakthi?show me once?

She drags his hand and folds his shirt hand collor.

Ram:I am fine priya,vus din accident ki vajah se thodasa wrist pain hai.

Priya:ye thodasa hai ram?,your hand turns to green colour.tumne x-ray kiya?kuch fracture?

Ram:ha kiya fracture nahi hai?lekin pain...

Priya brings her medical kit and starts folding red banded around his wrist.

Priya:tum bhi na Ram,koi aise careless hothe hai kya?bacche hai kya?

Ram watches her silently.

Priya doing her work and aarav feeds his icecream at another side

Ram:oh madam!mai bacche nahi hoon,aap aise kyo daant rahi thi.aap dono kamal hai,ek tho nonstop daandt dherayithi,aur ek icecream derayithi...what a combination?

Priya:bacche ya bado mai aise hi dandootnga,meri marje..

She leaves from there for dinner preparations.priya from kitchen..

Priya:ram tumko dinner me kya pasand hai?

Ram:nahi priya,mai ab nikalta hu.

Priya:tum kaise jasakthe hai,you forgot you have pain?i don't allow you in this position?just stay here this night,kal chale jana.this is final.

Ram:no priya,I have to leave..

Aarav:friend tum jaanthe nahi,mom salman khan ki sister hai,ek bar commitment karthi,uske baad kudd ko bhi nahi sunthi..

Aarav and Ram laughs and they both starts playing video game.

Priya:tunme bola nahi,tume kya pasand hai?

Aarav:mamma,muje jo pasand hai,friend ka bhi vahi hai.

Priya:accha?aisi tho veg food banavungi.

Aarav and Ram gets shocked.

Aarav:vo nahi hai,deadly hai,mai nahi ,muje aaloo poori chahiye.

Priya:tum hi tho kaha na mai salman ka sister hoon!mai vahi karoonga!

Priya preapares aarav ka pasand poori and veg food n salad for herself also.they did their dinner and ram slepts with aarav in his room and priya's in her room.

Today Ram sleeps with his own son peacefully waiting for a new beautiful morning...

Next day morning Ram leaves before aarav wakes up.

Priya drops aarav at his school,because he is some much better now. And she goes to MAWF to meet megha.when she came back to india,she didn't meet megha,because of aarav illness.

Priya:hello sharath,how r u?

Sharath:hai priya,how is aarav now.?

Priya:he is fine now,he starts going to school.btw how is megha now?i want to meet her.

Sharath:Ram ne tume bathaya nahi?

Priya:kya?kisi bare me?

Sharath: megha US gayi treatment keliye.Ram ne megha ki health condition keliye enquiry kiya,and he got details for her treatment,kisi doctor ka! he immediately arrangements kiya megha jane keliye.muje laga tum janthi ho is bar me,mai sochthi thi shayad aarav ki vajah se tum muje contact nahi kar rayi thi ithne dino se..

Priya:ram ne muje kuch nahi bathaya.vuska condition kaise hai ab?

Sharad:now she is fine.she is responding with treatment.she has to stay there a month under observation.every three months she has to attend doctors for improving treatment.after 4 or 5 cycles she will be fine for ever.

Priya:thank god,I wish she will be fine.

Sharath:thank god nahi,thanks to Ram...hum sab ne hopes choddiya,par ram ki vajah se ye sab kuch huva.

Priya:you are right sharath.

She leaves from there and went to her clinic.she thinks about ram,how he cares about aarav,sirf aarav ko nahi,sab ka dyan kartha hai.she calls to him to say thanks.

Ram:hello aarav mamma,good morning.

Priya:thanks Ram...

Ram:thanks kyon?tumhare ghass phuss kane keliye!

Priya:tumne muje bathaya kyo nahi megha ki bare me?

Ram:tho vuske bare me tum thanks kehrayi thi,vaise maine kya kiya,vo mera duty hai.maine bolna chahthi hoon,lekin tumne pehle bathi nahi kiya,aur baad me aarav hai vaha,isiliye nahi bathaya.

Priya:phir bhi,thankyou so much Ram,your are great.

Ram:ye sab taarif kyo?vo meri angle haina!lekin aarav ko bathav math,vo muje maroongi.vuski girls ko mai line mar Ra tha..

Priya:vaise ghass phuss kane keliye bhi thanks..

They both laughs and cuts the call.

Ram (st):mai tum dono ka smile keliye kuch bhi karsaktha hoon priya..



How is it friends.

Next part will be soon,

thankyou all...if u like it or not,comments boolna math..


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Edited by dhristikpd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very well written with good humour.
Hope Priya understands Ram and gives him place in her and Aarav's life.

Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice part
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey its very well written..👏
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aarav is sweet but naughty kid
having fun with Ram at Priya expense
Seems she has forgot the person unknown to her that Ram is that person who left her but seems she is not ready to accept him in her life back.
But Priya was so moved by Ram concern towards Megha and for Aarav and her he is doing all this things to make them happy. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update.
Waiting for next one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...like the bonding between ram and aarav...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update. But still yeh dil maange more! Please can we have some personal moments of RAYA? Also want to see Priya falling for Ram. Please make it possible soon!!!!! Thanks a ton for a wonderful update yet again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update waiting for next part
Plzz continue soon

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