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sushfiza

@sushfiza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hrtbreaking moment for priya...
why this had to happen wid her
entire description brought tears to my eyes 😭
priya is living her life widout her soul..somewhere she is lost...u managed to describe it very well...
still m crying...its too emotional
thanks fr d pm...cont soon...

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

very emotional OS, u describe Priya's emotion beautifully,feeling very sad 4 Priya, bt i know Ram take care of her very well,so looking frwd d nxt,pls continue soon,thx 4 PM

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Kajal

@prachimishra85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Just loved this update Thanks for the PM❤️ Prachi

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Thx for the Pm.

Tug and war of silence and emotions.

So priya and ram are committed by social law, the awkwardness of marrying some one whom you know from ur childhood and never had such feeklings for her, just shown beautifully in ram's action and deep thoughts. Priya toh jaise turned to a hard rock, na emotions , na reaction.

But loved the characters here right from , dadi, Krishuji,Shipra n Amar ,sudhir also the siblings karthik , nuts n rishabh and esha everyone is in the mission to cheer up priya and bring her back to normal.

good going.

I must admire ram's character here the most, its he who can handle her, his patience and sensibility, though he knew her from the childhood, but he is her hubby now, he must have thought of something from hi partner.Lets see how it goes, how will ram bring in life back to priya and how fast can priya cope up with it.

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sampa123

@sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

so emotional updt dear..so well wriitten.bas cntinue soon.n thanks for pm

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

omg omg raya got married and ram ka ek past bhi hain😲😲😲😲😲

to be fair my words are less to describe the narration which u gave one word wonderful👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
from beginning with their past of ram priya what all happened and then why priya doesnt call ram bhai(are they were meant to be hubby wife na😆😆😆😆 to bhai kaise banta hahaa )

omg the suhaag raat scene perfect when priya behave the way usually and women behave in such situation and ram handle her as an friend more than hubby and consoled her 👏👏👏👏👏 aise wali ram hamein bade achhe lagte hain😉😉😉😉
now raya off to london waiting for raya ki london story...
sachii yaaar i enjoy ur stories common update fast👏👏👏👏👏👏

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sree0007

@sree0007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Thanks for the PM

wonderful update...very emotional...loved dadi...

eager to know the further journey...

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Mani

@Mani-RK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

He is such a sweet heart i thought he would be upset but he is handling her

new city for the couple

waiting for love to blossom between RaYa

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

wowww I'm liking it. very interesting story.kabhi kabhi kuch logon ka zindagi me yahi haal hotha hai.
loved the consept... So now only these two beautiful humans are going to stay in the big city.
will see what stores for them.

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Wow fab update..
Priya's state nd emotions re beautifully described..very emotional part
So Ram has gone through same in his life nd can feel her pain very well..this is going to connect them with each other..i guess
Loved the way Ram handled Priya..
RaYa in new city...looking forward to how love will blossom btw them now..
Thanx for pm..

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