SS 'kai bar main teri bahon me..magar'UPDT ON PG13 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
⭐️In donon ka yehi prob hai,jab ek seedha hotha hai tho doosra teda ho jaatha hai.WOW as that is the RaYa we all love.
IN each and every part of your os or ff you never deviate from the asli charac of Ram and Priya, which the CVs never bother.Well- Done Veenadi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
ur ss is based on balh episode but in a different way, Im waiting when u r updated kahi dher na ho jaye
but u r bang on time kya likti ho .superb
Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
ayesha thi 😡 wse ram ne isko sahi jawab diye 👏
priya talli avatr luved her alwayz😃
superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Veenu... loved your update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update Veena, continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Priya...hum kahan ja rhe hain???


Ram...room me


priya...haww..mr.kapoor room me???


Ram...shut up..apni halat dekho...kya ho rhi h


priya...kya ho rhi h???...theek to hu..achhi nhi lag rhi hu kya??


Ram...uff..


Priya...boliye na


ram..kyaaa???


Priya...yhi...ki..kaisi lag rhi hu...


Ram...wooo


priya...u know what mr.kapooor..sorry...jyada khinch diya...u know mr. Kapoor aap na kabhi meri tareef nhi krte hain...boliye na kaisi lag rhi hu


ram..priyaaa tum


priya...u know what mr.kapoor..apse sahi to wo apka dost h ...km se km apni biwi ki tareef to krta h ..boliye na kaisi lag rhi hu main


ram...aisi koi bat


priya...u know what mr.kapoor mujhe lagta h...aap...aap jo hain na...darte hain meri tareef krne se...egooo..wo hurt ho jayega apka...h na...boliye na...kaisi lag rhi hu main...


Dono baten krte karte kamre me pahonch jate hain ram darwaza band kr deta h..aur mudhta priya abhi bol hi rhi thi..


Ram...ssshhh...tum chup hogi tab to main bolunga...


Priya...oohh..okkk...ssshhh...chup...but mr.kapoor tareef karna...chup...aap boliye


ram...u know what priya(ram priya k bht kareeb rhta h)


priya...hhmm


ram..tum...tum bilkul ullu ho


priya..kya??? Ullu mtlb???


Ram...ullu mtlb...ullu mtlb priya


priya...are wo nhi..ye tareef hai???


Ram...ha tareef h


priya..okk..to mujhe bhi tareef krna h


ram...kiski???


Priya...apki...apko pta h aap bhi bade ullu lagte hain...


Ram...hahaha...ho gya???...ab to happy ho


priya...hmmm..bht


ram...to ab so jao


priya...so jau???..lekin kyun???


Ram...qki...tumhe neend aa rhi h


priya...oh...ok...but mr.kapoor...akele so jau???


Ram...nhi ...main ghrwaalo ko bula k lata hu unke sath sona...


Priya...ok aap bula k laiye tak tak m soti hu...gudnight


ram...hahaha...gudnight in day...kamal ki ladki h..pta nhi peeti kyun h jb handle nhi kr paati h..pr jo bhi h iski inhi adao pr to pyar ata h..sorry priya mne tumhari tareef nhi ki..but karunga zarur wait for that..


Ram priya ko sula k jane lagta h to priya use pakad leti h...aur apne pas khinchti h...nashe me enrgy jyada ho gyi h..lol..aur ram k chik pr kiss krti h smile krti h aur so jati h...ram use dekhta hi rh jata h...



Thodi der bad @mrrg time


priya neend se jagti h to khud ko kamre me akela pati h...use bht ajeeb lagta h ki wo is time so kyun rhi h aur wo kamre me kab aayi???..aur wo to mr.kapoor ko dhundh rhi thi sorry bolne k liye...phir use pyas lagi usne waitr se juice manga..phir...priya ka sar dukhne lagta h sochte sochte...wo uth k bahar aati h..bahar shaadi k liye mandap taiyar ho rha tha sabhi ne bhagmbhag macha rakhi thi...priya charo taraf dekhti h sabhi dikh rhe hote hain siway mr.kapoor k...priya ki nazre idhr udhr mr.kapoor ko dhundhti h pr wo kahin nhi dikhte hain...wo vikram k pas jati h...


Priya...vikram


vikram...priya tum???..ab kaisa lag rha h??? Thik to ho...


Priya...haaa main to theek hi hu...mujhe kya hua tha???


Vikram...are kuchh nhi tumhe kuchh nhi hua tha


priya...nhi kuchh to hua tha mera sir bhi dard kr rha h???bolo na kya hua tha...


Vikram ...ye tumhe mr.kapoor bttr btayenge..hehehe


priya...are unhe hi to dhundh rhi hu mil hi nhi rhe hain...tumne dekha h ??


Vikram...nhi mne to nhi dekha ...dekho yhi kahin hoga


vikram chala jata h..priya neha k pas jati h...


Priya...neha


neha...are priya tum???...tum theek to ho??


Priya...are m to theek hi hu sab kyun yhi puchh rhe hain???..


Neha...hahaha...kuchh nhi


priya...are bolo na


neha...mr.kapooor se puchh lo


priya...ufff unhe hi to dhundh rhi hu..mil hi nhi rhe h tumne dekha kya???


Neha...nhi...kahin hoga dekh lo


tabse nuts aur dadi aa jati h


dadi...priya puttr tu theek to h


priya...ufff..are m to theek hi hu...mujhe kya hua h???


Nuts...kyun mr.kapooor ne nhi btaya???


Priya...milenge tab to btayenge..aur ye tumlog mr.kapoor k naam ko itna khinch kyun rhe ho


dadi...achha wo sb chhodo aur jake tum taiyar ho jao...muhurat ka samay hone wala h...


priya apne kamre me chali jati h aur taiyar hone lagti h...pr pura time wo yhi soch rhi thi...ki kya hua hoga...mr.kapoor gye to gye kaha???...kahin sachhi me jyada naraz to nhi ho gye..please god ye ho kya rha h...i cnt tolrate this...please mr.kapoor aap hain kahan ??..jha bhi hain ek bar bs mere samne aa jaiye...please...ufff ye earing bhi nhi band ho rhi h...mujhe nhi taiyar hona h...kiske liye taiyar houn...priya hath me saadi leke baithi rhti h...tabhi bahar se neha awaz deti h ..priya darwaza kholti h


neha...are ye kya h?? tum abhi tak taiyar nhi hu


priya...nehaaa...mujhe bht tension ho rhi h


neha...baby tumhari shaadi nhi h meri shaadi h


priya...ohhoo...please neha yar


neha...are kya hua yar


priya...mr.kapoor...kahan h wo??..i am worried about him


neha...ohhoo...hoga yhi kahin aa jayega...koi chhota sa bachha thode hi h...tum taiyar ho jao...m bhi taiyar hone ja rhi hu...cmon fast...


priya darwaza laga k taiyar hone to chali jati h pr abhi bhi use neha ki baten cnvnce nhi kr paa rhi thi...use pta nhi kyun lag rha tha ki kuchh der pehle kuchh to hua tha...shayad lagta h mr.kapoor usi se aur bhadak gye honge...lekin hua kya tha????


priya change krk aati h aur apna huk band krne ki koshis krti rhti h...tabhi...


ram...nutasha wo cake pihu ko khila dena..



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bolte hue ram andr aata h aur darwaza band kr deta h...priya ram ki awaz sunti h aur relax hoke ankhe band kar leti h...wo apna huk dono hatho se pakde rhti h...tabhii ram aake uske huk ko band krne k liye hath badhata h aur uske kandhe ko touch krte hue uske bal ek side me krta h...priya waise hi sanse rok k khadi rhti h...phir ram dheere dheere hath neeche le aata h aur priya k dono hatho ko pakdta h...priya hath hata leti h aur ram uske huk ko band krta h aur hatho ko neeche le jate hue uski kamar me touch krta h...she feels like smthing vry romantic...she dsnt want to open her eyes...are agar sapna hoga to ankhe khulte hi tut jayega na...but this is true...ram is there & kiss on her neck...she push him back & try to free herself from his presence but its really vry defficult for her...priya jane lagti h to ram uska hath pakad leta h...dono ka face ekdusre k apposit side me rhta h...


ram...kya hua???


priya...kuchh nhi


ram...tum dhundh rhi thi??


priya...hmmm


ram...kyun???


priya...wo mujhe apko sorry bolna tha


ram...kyun???


priya...mne apse bht rudly bat ki isliye


ram...its ok...aur??


priya...aur kuchh nhi...chhodiye mujhe


ram hath chhod deta h priya jane lagti h...ram sochta h..ki ruk jaye priya...priya sochti h ram rok le...but dono hi kuchh nhi bolte hain...priya jati hi rhti h..phir achanak rukti hai dono mudhte hain...paas aate hain ...


ram...i love u priya...


priya...i love u too m.kapoor


dono gale mil jate hain...ekdusre ki baho me aake thodi der k liye sabkuchh bhul gye...bas kewal ekdusre ka ehsas baki rha samjhane ko ekdusre ka pyar baki rha jatane ko ekdusre ka sath baki rha pane ko..


thodi der bad


ram...priya


priya...hmmm


ram...tum keh rhi thi na ki main tumhari tareef nhi krta


priya...mne kab kaha???


ram...hahaha...abhi kuchh der pehle jb tumne pee rakhi thi


priya...what???...again??


ram...yes again


priya...oh i am sooo sorry...i didnt mean it...aur mne khud nhi pee thi...dnt know ye sb kaise hua...please ...i am sooo sorry...aap please bura mt maniyega...mujhe to kuchh yad bhi nhi h...apko bht tang kiya na...


ram...ssshhh...ssshhh..(ram put his finger on her lips)...ha tang to kiya...pr shayad m bhi tang hona chahta tha...bht taras gya tha priya tumhare is roop ko dekhne k liye...aur sabkuchh to tum bakwas kar rhi thi...pr ek bat tumne sach kahi...m waqai tumhari kabhi tareef nhi krta hu...


priya...nhi mr.kapoor aisi baat nhi h...aap jaise bhi h mere liye sabse khas hain qki ...


ram...shhh...pr mujhe tumhari tareef krni h...aur tum chupchap sunogi...


dono ekdusre ki ankho me dekhte hain aur ram bolna shuru krta h with action...


ram...ha priya mne kabhi nhi kaha ki tumhare bal bht khubsurat h...(he kiss her hair)...mne kabhi nhi kaha ki tumhari ankhe bht nashili h...tumhe peene se nasha hota h mujhe inhe dekhne se nasha ho jata h(he kisses on her eyes)...mne kabhi nhi kaha ki tumhare chehre ki sadgi aur muskan dekh kr apne sare gum bhul jata hu..(he kiss on her cheeks)...ha mne kabhi nhi kaha ki priya tum bht pretty ho...( he try to kiss on her lips but priya krne nhi deti h...)


priya khadi hoke muskurati h aur itrati h ki ambabu ne tareef to ki...tabhi ram aata h aur use utha k le jata h...udhar neha vikrm ki shadi shuru ho gyi...idhr rampriya ki suhagrat...


to b continue...

Edited by veena23 - 12 years ago
simlavidhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Good going...hope to see something like that. Nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
So beautifully romantic Veenaji. I love the way you express their feelings in Hindi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow di all the parts were superb 😊 plz continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
are veena itna jaldi update, kair tum kitna bhi update karo muje kam hi lagta hai
likti jo itna badiya ho. dil kush ho gaya
thanx and update soon

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