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cloud121

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: _CandyCream_
Part 4 -
Aww lovely part!! The class wala love is so cute! <3
Vik-Oey gadhe band pen ka kya karega? 🤣 Loved that dialogue!
Thanks a lot for the PM! Can't wait for th next part!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Oneandall
Thanks for the PM... I did get a chance to read all of them. How sweet and an interesting concept... Interested in seeing the game wala love.. so please update soon!! Great job dear.👏

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cloud121

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: pinky2606
Wonderful SS read all d 4 parts love ur SS
vikram saying oye ghade 😆
next game wala love cant wait update soon
waiting

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leena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

part 3
awesome update Ram n Vikk want to sit on 3rd banch of 3rd row for sleep awww but Ram ki neend hi udd gayi white angle ko jo dekh liya haayyy kya baat... aur Priya ne Ram se help mangi wah wah... moving to read next awesome update yaar...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

part 4
awesome part loved the pen wala love so Priya also have feelings for Ram awesome... they were missing each other n got each other in next moment wowoowo loved it boy n Ram's remark was same... "how we can play alone... r u mad?"...*lol* waiting for next do update soon...

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cloud121

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Maya166
Waiting...waiting...waiting

Thanks...sure update soon..

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cloud121

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Part-5
Priya-Okay to m ja rhi hu.
Ram-Humare saath khelo na
Priya thought refuse but inner feeling did'nt allow so she is readt to play hied n seek.Game begain n kid tied cloth arround his eye n searching both player.
Ram Priya bhagte bhagte takrakar ek dusre par gir jate h aur ek dusre ko dekhte rhte h
kid-Di n bhaiya kha ho?
Priya-Ouch..
Ram-kya hua?chot lag gyi kya?
Priya-Tum uthoge tbhi to bataugi naRam-Sorry,jayada to nhi lagi na?Priya-Tum kisi k upr giroge to kisi ko jada chot n lage aisa kaise ho skta h
Ram- Hey!!!tumne mujhe mota kha
Priya-Nahi to
Ram-M tume accha nhi lagta esliye abhi tak reply bhi nhi diya.
Priya-maine aisa kab kha ki tum mote ho,tum to bht cute ho n pull Ram chicks.
Ram to Priya ko dekhta rhta h.kyuki uske man m to ladoo fut rahe hote h.
Priya- Shyly Why do u keep looking at me?
Ram-I don't know?
Priya-Is their something on my face?
Ram-no
Priya-Then wht is it?phir kyu ghur rhai ho
Ram-Its just that...u look so beautiful today
Priya-shutup u r crazy
Ram-no really.Its like i'm looking u at the vry 1st time.Time stop every time I look into ur eye I cud stare million of year at a timePriya blushing,
Small kid caught Ram n he got out for the nxt round.Now Ram tie the eye with the cloth.The cloth is nothing but just a handkerchief that priya had.Ram forgot all the thing arround the world n got dissolve in luv.His round extended around 15 min n he was still searching.Priya's dad got readt for home so he called Priya.
Priya got into the car n biding bye to everyone her eye searched for Ram n she find him. she bid bye to him to waving her hand with reddish tearful eye.
Ram also waving bye.The car disappear n the crowd began to move one by one but not Ram.He still stand with handkerchief in his hand for swapping his tear.
Precap-Bus wala love...

Edited by Alya1991 - 13 years ago