FF: MY IMAGINATION AFTER LEAP 22.7.2012 updtd pg12 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone!!
will try to update soon. I was going to update today but I am not able to walk properly.
so sorry everyone.
hope u all can understand..
Edited by riddhu123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well...nice imagination...but at the same time not gonna happen
Edited by yogeshj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
awesome update... :-)


dear !! health comes first... get well soon & then update... take care... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Riddhu dii...Lovely update...Fantastic...






Thanks for the update...will be waiting for the next one...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: salsaly

awesome update... :-)



dear !! health comes first... get well soon & then update... take care... 😊

thanks dear. I am totally fine now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhu123

thanks dear. I am totally fine now...


thats nyc to hear.. now i want update... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am back with my next update. sorry for updating late.

MEHENDI AND SANGEET is today

KM
All get ready Ram and Priya are wearing what they had worn on their mehendi and sangeet. Kids are also ready. Rishabh is still getting ready. All are in the hall.
Dadi: arre tum dono ne toh voh kapde pehene hai jo tumne apni mehendi or sangeet me pehne the
Ram/Priya: ji dadi.
Dadi: sach me Priya us wakt ram sirf tumhari vajah function me aa paya?
Krishna: matlab ma?
Dadi: vo kya tha ki ram ko us wakt B.P attack aa gaya tha?
Krishna: kya? lekin kaise?
Ram: vo us wakt me sacchai nahi janta tha ma. toh apeksha office me ghus ayi or mera B.P badh
gaya or attack aa gaya. vikram mujhe leke gaya hospital.
Priya: fir mujhe call kiya or pehle jhoot bola ki meeting me hu. us wakt mehendi lagi hui thi mere
hath me. fir vikram ne ram k phone se call kiya or mujhe sachhai batayi. me mehendi nikal
k gayi hospital.
Ram: jo doctors 6 hrs me nahi kar paye vo priya ne 6 minutes me kar diya. mera bp normal ho
gaya. but us wakt toh hum ek dusre se anjan the. shadi se pehle milte but sirf ladai hoti
thi.
Krishna: ma aapne mujhe kyu nahi bataya?
Dadi: mujhe toh tab pata chala jab vo vapas aya. mere or priya ki nani k beech behes ho gayi thi.
Krishna: achha!! us wakt toh priya mujhe janti bhi nahi hogi or na hi apeksha ko. thik kaha na?
Priya: ji ma.

Rishabh comes.

HOTEL
sharma family has reached and Kapoor family reached.
Some girls are puting mehendi on ayesha's hand.
riya/piya: hame bhi lagani hai.
Priya puts on their hand and cleans their hand after sometime.

Now the Sangeet function starts.
dadi and nani dance.
After them kartik n nuts dance.
The kids also dance and then vikram and neha dance n then ram n priya.

MARRIAGE DAY
Ayesha and Rishabh are having their marriage.
They exchande varmala
kanyadan, kathbandan, phere, sindoor and mangalsutra all these finish.
( sorry I dnt know much about marriage as I have never seen live marriage in my life. Just on tv)
They take blessings from elders.

All have food n sweet dish n then bidai comes.
The bidai is done.
Priya and Krishna ji go for preparing graha pravesh.
Then Rishabh and Ayesha come. grah pravesh is over.
Then Priya takes Ayesha with her and makes her sit beside rishabh. The game of finding ring starts. Here Priya is with rishabh and ram with ayesha.
Ayesha wins.
They make them sit down for sometime.
Neha, vikram, priya n ram go and decorate their room.

Then priya takes ayesha with her and make her sit on the bed.
Priya: all the best ayesha!! maze karna mere devar k sath. use tang mat karna.
Ayesha: di me kisi ko tang nahi karti.
Priya: achha!! dekhte hai. chalo me jati hu. or agar dar lage toh rishabh ka hath zor se pakad
lena or agar or dar lage toh usko hug kar dena. thikk hai?
Ayesha: diii!!!!!!!!!!!
ayesha was going to beat her sis but she stood up.
Priya: bye ayesha!!!
in teasing way she told bye.
Rishabh comes and Priya says all the best rishabh!!! and bye.

RAYA ROOM
Priya runs to her room and sees doesn't see ram coming out bumps into him.
Ram: ouch! priya kya kar rahi ho?
Priya: sorry aapko dekha nahi. aap kahan ja rahe hai?
Ram: tumhe hi dhundne nikla.
Priya: achha toh aapko meri itni yaad aa rahi hai? bachhe so gaye kya?
Ram: ha sula diya shaitano ko.
Priya: vaah!! apne sula diya. mujhe toh vishwas nahi ho raha.
Ram: are chup bhi karo!! me itna bhi bura nahi hu. so gaye hai sach me. tumne ab tak yeh
bhari lehenga pehen k rakha hai.
Priya: ha vo abhi karti hu change.

Priya goes to change and comes in her night dress and ram also comes in both lie down cuddling each other.
Priya: aaj me bht khush hu ki meri choti behen ka bhi ghar bas gaya.
Ram: ha priya. tumhari khushi me meri khushi hai. Rish bhi kitna khush dikh raha tha.

they sleep.

RISHABH ROOM
Ayesha: yeh di bhi na?
Rishabh: kya bhabhi? bhabhi k bare me me ek lafz bhi unke khilaf nahi sunna chahta.
Ayesha: par vo mujhe chida k gayi di?
Rish: chalta hai. ye mat bhulo unke vajah se hamari shadi hui.
Aye: i love my di.
rish: or me i love my bhabhi.
they laugh.
rish:tum change karogi pehle?
aye: ha me karti hu.
she goes to change n comes in night dress and keeps her jwellery on dressing table
rish goes to change and both lie down on their bed.
aye: aj me bht khush hu.
rish: me bhi.
they chit chat n sleep.

NEXT MORNING
Priya and ram wake up and freshen up.
Priya: ram aap bacho ko tayar karva dijiye?
ram: thik hai.

ram goes to their room and wake them up.
He touches them and both of them are suffering from high fever. he gets tensed.
he calls the doc.
doc: hello
ram: hello doc shah! me ram kapoor bol raha hu aap pls km aa jaiye. mere bachho ko bht tez
bukhar hai.
doc: ji me abhi pahuchta hu.

he goes to the intercom n calls in the kitchen where priya has already made their tiffins and was coming out the phone rings.
ram: priya jaldi aao bachho k kamre me. dono ko bht tez bukhar hai.
priya: kya?
ram: ha priya jaldi aao.

she runs directly to their room and dadi n krishnaji see this and get tensed. they go behind priya and see them going to the kids room.

ram: priya!!
priya: achanak inhe bukhar kaise ho gaya?
ram: shayad kuch bht thanda kha liya hoga. shayad ice cream. doc ko call kiya hai ate hi honge
priya: ha riya toh ice cream khati thi toh bukhar chad jata tha.
ram: or piya bhi aise ho jati thi bimar.
priya and ram are trying to wake them up but they are not getting up.

dadi and krishnaji enter and ask what happened.
ram: ma inhe bht tez bukhar ho gaya hai. or uth bhi nahi rahe.
priya is crying seeing them.
Krishnaji is consolling her but she starts crying more.

RISHABH ROOM
aye: good morning rishi
rishi: good morning
they both freshen up.
they come out and they hear crying noise from kids room.
rishi: rone ki awaz kyu aa rahi hai?
aye: dekhte hai.
they go there and see doc checking the kids and priya is crying terribly. ram is trying to console her but she doesnt stop crying.
aye: di kya hua? aap ro kyu rahe hai or doc?
krishnaji: vo bacho ko bht tez bukar ho gaya hai or ankhen bhi nahi khol rahe. toh isliye bht ro
rahi hai kab se. hum me se koi ise chup nahi karva pa raha. tum koshish karo.
aye: ji ma.
she goes to priya.
aye: di pls chup ho jao. vo uth jayenge. dont worry di.
priya: jab tu ma banegi tab tujhe pata chalega. she cries even more.

ram: ayesha kuch toh kar pls isse chup karana hoga.
aye: ek kaam karte hai jiju papa ko bulate hai vo papa ki baat kabhi nahi talti. thik hai.
ram calls sudhir ji and tells him the situation.

doc finishes the check up.
ram: kya hua doc? unhe hosh kyu nahi aa raha.?
doc: unko bht tez bukhar hai. mene unhe hosh me lane k liye injection diya hai or ye medicines
agar 2 hrs me hosh me nahi aye toh mujhe bata dijiyega.
ram: ji thik hai.

priya cant see them in this state she runs to her room n lies on the bed n still crying.
aye:di pls roiye mat.
priya: mujhe thodi der k liye akela chod de pls.
aye: par di.
priya: pls ja..
ram goes to the room. Ram trying to console her but not able to.

Sharma family come and sudhir ji and shipra come.
they see the kids and asks about Priya.

Sudhirji and shipra see their daughter crying bitterly.
sud: lagta hai priya ko shock lag gaya hai dono ko bimar dekhe.
ship: ha tum thik keh rahe ho. tum jao vo tumhari ladli hai.
sud: priya beta! pls chup ho jao. dekho tumhare papa aye hai.
priya: papa!!
sud: chup ho ja pls apne papa k liye sahi bachhe jab uthenge vo nahi chahenge ki tum aise ro.
priya: m sorry papa.
sudhirji wipes her tears just then ayesha comes.
aye: bachho ko hosh aa gaya.
as priya listens this she directly runs to their room
ram: thank u papa.
sud: your welcome beta. aisa vo karti hai kabhi kabhi.

KIDS ROOM
priya is sitting with their head on her lap.
riya: ma time kya hua? hame school jana hai?
priya: tumhe bht tez bukhar hai. chup chap leto. me tumhare liye soup lati hu. khake so jao.

ram informs doc and soc says all is fine now.
ram gets a call from their teacher.
teacher: mr kapoor aj apke bache nahi aye? aaj unka oral exam hai? pls unhe bhejiye jaldi.
ram: mam hum kuch din unhe bhej nahi sakte dono ko bht tez bukhar hai. abhi just unhe hosh aya jab doc ne unhe injection diya.
mam: m so sorry. aap unka khaya rakhiya. jab vo thik ho jayenge fir unka oral le lenge
ram: thank u mam

priya makes soup and comes and makes them drink soup and give them medicine and they sleep.

ship: chal tu bhi thoda aram kar. subah se ro ro kar kya haal bana diya?
priya: ma me kahan zyada royi.
aye: zyada? aap toh bht zyada royi ho.
priya: sorry ma dadi meri vajah se apko taklif hui.
dadi: koi baat nahi beta. hum samaj sakte hai.

BREAKFAST
All eat breakfast except priya.
dadi: tu bhi kha na priya puttar?
priya: nahi dadi mujhe bhook nahi hai.
she goes upstairs and while she is going upstairs she is just going to colide and ram sees this and runs to hold her. he takes her to the room.
ram: kya kar rahi ho priya? bachhe ab thik ho jayenge? pls tum apna khayal rakho. abhi gir jati to?
priya: m sorry ram. par mujhe bhook nahi hai.

sudhirji know that unless he tell she wont eat. he goes with breakfast and makes her eat.
she eats from her dads hand.
he make her sleep.
ram: papa thank u again. ye toh meri baat sun hi nahi rahi.
sud: ur welcome beta. ek bar bache thik ho jayenge yeh bhi normal ho jayegi. chalo tum kha lo
apna breakfast.
ram: ji papa.

sorry its too long.
hope u all liked it.






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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Vry nice update.. Waiting fr more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
so priya is not listening to ram also ..
only her papa ..that was cute ...
thanks for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Hey that was a cute update...😊

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