FF- Meri Gudiya Priya -Part 7 on Page 28

bhakti

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Bhai first sorry 4 late comment . Its to good ,amazing and please continue soon

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: SriB
this should be an FF Kishore, please continue this awesome story.Cant wait to read the next part.please update soon.

Thanks a lot didi...will surely continue writing...glad that you liked it.

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: azk92
Sorry Kishore!
I read it like 3 times and then got distracted by BALH and the episode and ranting that I forgot to come back and comment hahaha 😳

AMAZING BRO! just fabulous! Loved the way you penned down Ram's emotions! Actually made me tear when he slept next to the Gudiya! Awww 😭

Hoping this becomes an FF because I want to see what happens!!
Great job!!! 👏 👏
Keep it up!

Its Ok Amby😊...I can understand your frustration about the episode..this would surely become an FF...am planning to write my next part tomorrow...actually did not have any idea in mind when I wrote this except the scene where Ram shows Priya his doll...when I started writing, somehow it got a shape like this😆...thanks for reading and commenting😃😳...it really means a lot to me.😳

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toshi sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nice OS 😊

but ram is soo stressed please uske stress ko dur kr do

plzz continue...

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: toshisharma
nice OS 😊
but ram is soo stressed please uske stress ko dur kr do
plzz continue...

Yes...will continue writing..don't worry sister...mere FFs me hamesha positive moments hi hota hai...happy that u liked and commented on it😳😳
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Punya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Loved it Kishore.

Much sought after relief from the show..

Thanks sooo much!

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: PunyaS
Loved it Kishore.

Much sought after relief from the show..

Thanks sooo much!

thanx a lot 😳

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: dayabhi
VERY WELL WRITTEN BHAI...

thanx Afu 😃

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salsaly

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Posted: 13 years ago

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superb OS bhai... i'm v touched... so realistic... love the way ram care for his doll gudiya... & love that he still have hope... neha ram talk is marvelous... wat can i say more... !! .. this is totally excellent... thanks for the OS , pm & waiting for my comment... i'm v sorry for v late reply... thanks a lot bhai... lots of hugs for u... love u.. :-)

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A. Kishore

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: salsaly
superb OS bhai... i'm v touched... so realistic... love the way ram care for his doll gudiya... & love that he still have hope... neha ram talk is marvelous... wat can i say more... !! .. this is totally excellent... thanks for the OS , pm & waiting for my comment... i'm v sorry for v late reply... thanks a lot bhai... lots of hugs for u... love u.. :-)

its ok cutie😃...you are my little baby doll😳..how can I be angry with you?😊...love u too...🤗

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