#T2 ARIYA SS JID TERE PYAR KI part 33 on page 103 15/4/2017 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neelpari

part 20[DIV]amazing update[/DIV][DIV]loved it[/DIV][DIV]riya is in dilemma but arjun is hell bent on his jid[/DIV][DIV]ohh god what's this arjun seems traitor[/DIV][DIV]update soon[/DIV]



thanks dear
hmm he is jiddi for her love
letsee
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nitris23

OMG[DIV]What a twist...[/DIV][DIV]Plz continue soon[/DIV][DIV]Thnx 4 pm[/DIV][BR]



thanks dear
will continue soon
you're welcome for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago


will update soon
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part 22



riya inform all team about arjun n they get shocked to know truth ..they are not in state to say something

ri - team we have to make ourself stong..we are officers good dammit

all straight themselves ..n make a plan.

ri - all right team lets go.hume ye kam bahut hoshiyari se karna hoga.

all nod n they put their guns in their holster ..riya lead team ..

scene shift

arjun bring file n some thing in his bag.bani is also with him.khashi gang leader n his son is also present there.

ar - boss kam ho gaya wo file humare pas hai.

leader - lao mujhe do.jaldi

ar mv rathod sir jaldi aaiye isse pehle ye file inke haath lage..mai lad bhi nahi sakta ye log bahut jyada or armed hai..or iske bad in sabko ek sath pakadne ka mauka nahi milega.

arjun is in dilemma to give him file or not.. but he has to give them file.coz he can't afford to let them leave from there..

leader take file from him..he read file n give arjun back

lea - arjun are you sure yahi file hai. kya yahi mumbai police ka security web hai..jise hume todna hai ..

arjun read file

ar mv ohh god ye to koi or hi file hai.matlab shona..wow hone wali mrs arjun aap to humse bhi ek kadam aage nikli..love you.,

ar - boss baani ke saamne maine file churai na..or bani apki beti hai..mujhpar yakeen nahi to isse puch lo..

ba- yaa dad isne mere samne file nikali..or uske bad hum iske ghar gaye file rakhi..or tabse ye mere hi sath hai.

lea - ohhk good..I'm proud of you my boy..mere bad tum teeno ye gang bahut aage le jaoge..kam hote hi mai tumhari shadi announced karunga..

all raised their tossed



here sam reach with his team n riya also with etf at same time.arjun come to know abt both team presence n proud on riya for her courage n presence of mind ..sam shocked to see etf but happy to see them also.he is also feeling proud on riya.

all enter their den..one team is leading by sam n one by riya..here arjun is gathering information against them..whole criminals get shocked to see teams n they are also not ready for this attack..arjun also showing that he is helping gang but he is actually helping his team..

ar - ye sab kya ho gaya hume bhagna hoga.

lead - hmm jaldi karo sab sabut or paise jaldi jaldi bharo

arj mv hmm jaldi bharo par jahan se tum bhagne ka rasta soch rahe ho wahi par tumhari maut khadi hai..or ab humare liye sare sabut tum hi pack karoge..

gang leader son is glaring arjun

son mv agar arjun sabko yaha se safly le gaya to dad ise hi next leader banayenge ..nahi mai ye nahi hone dunga.

they start running ..gang leader n imp drug paddlers enter in arjun's trap room but son change his direction n ask arjun n bani to come..he actually want to finish them. they enter in a room..riya also reach there..baani point gun to shoot her..

ar - nahi bani us par goli mat chalana..

bani glare him n abt to shoot riya but her bro shoot her n point at arjun before he can shoot him riya come between him n bullet..
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Posted: 8 years ago
ar - riya..

n he shoot leader's son..

ar - kaha tha na goli mat chalana us par..

son died..he sit n take her in his lap..

ar - ye kya kiya tumne riya.mere liye ye sab q kiya

ri - maine kaha tha na itna vishwas hai ki agar tuta to mai tut jaungi..mai tut gayi arjun..

ar - shona

ri - par pata nahi q dil kehta hai tumne mujhe cheat nahi kiya..par dimag to un sabuton par baton par vishwas kar raha hai jo maine saamne dekhi hai..mai khud ko bahut majbut karke layi thi arjun ..riya ko markar ek officer ayi thi ek traitor ko pakadne..par tumhe khote dekh us officer par tumhari shona bhari pad gayi..mai nahi janti mera dil sahi hai ya dimag..par jo bhi ho mai pure intjam se aayi hu..tum culprit bhi ho to tumhara jinda rehana jaruri hai..i love you arjun

she kiss on his lips lightly..he is shocked..she put her blood claded hand on his cheek..

ri - par tum nahi bachoge arjun..meri team tumhe nahi chodegi..

she faint in his arms..he cry looking at her in this condition due to him..he shout on his headphone

ar - rathod sir..riya

sam - riya kya hua use

ar - usne mujh par lagne wali goli khud par le li..

sam - what..arjun be strong..use bachana hai..run fast.hum yaha dekh lenge..

ar - sahi kaha aapne i have to save her
he take her almost life less body in his hand n run from there. shree come between them

sh - arjun tumne riya ko mar diya

ar - shree maine nahi ..bad mai batainga mujhe jana hai

sh - nahi tumhe nahi jane dunga..

shree point gun at arjun

sam - shree use jane do..I'll explain later..

shree is shocked to see sam there but nod..arjun run from there..

he sit in a car..n drive fastly..riya is breathing heavily..

ar - riya plz ..I'm sorry.. plz mujhe chod kar mat jana

,he is ranting her name n asking her not to leave him while driving..

they reached hospital n he take her in his arm n run inside hospital ..

ar -dr dr come fast.,plz koi dekho ise..

wardboys take stacher he put her on that but never leave her hand.

dr - kya hua hi ise

ar - goli lagi hai..,,

dr - ye to police case hai..we have to

he didn't complete his sentence n arjun shout

ar - I'm police god damit ..

he show his id..

ar -.ab aap jaldi karenge plz..

dr nod n take her immediately in ot..arjun is waiting for dr to come out..

here etf arrest all the criminals n seal their place.they gathered all proof . it take long time..after that all left for hospital
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scene shift

hospital

arjun is sitting on bench ..hiding his face in his palms..remembering all their moments together . her smile her anger her cute antics..her caring nature..all flashes infront of him..he feard after her bleeding form flash infront of his eyes..he shiver..he see his own reflection in steel door..her blood is still on his face n dress..

he remember her saying he broke her completely .he can feel her love n pain..her love is so strong that inspite of all proffs her heart believe his innocence ..he is lucky to have her in his life..he can't loose her like this..

he get up n go to temple of hospital ..he sit on his knees n join his hand infont of bappa idol..he close his eye..tears start flowing from his eyes.

ar - plz bappa meri shona ko bacha lena.mai use kho kar jee nahi paunga..or agar apko bulana hai to hum dono ko bula lena...aap use mujhse cheen nahi sakte..plz use lauta do..

he is praying n cryying..nurse come n put hand on his shoulder

nu - beta bhagwan ne aapki sun li..aapki shona ko kuch nahi hua..wo bilkul thik hai..

arjun standup happily n ask nurse

ar - aap sach keh rahi hai na..sach mai wo thik hai na


she nod happily n arjun run toward ot..dr is instructing abt ri to nurses

ar - dr shona

dr - she is out of danger now..actully goli ne body ko jyada harm nahi kiya..she will be fine soon..blood loss hua hai thodi care ki jarurat hai..bas..

arjun hugdr in excitement n dr smile n hug him back

ar - thanku dr

dr - its my work my boy..all the best..

he pat his bach n leave

riya is shifted to icu arjun look at her sleeping form n smile..

ar - meri shona mujhe chod kar nahi gayi..usne mujh par se vishwas tutne nahi diya .

ryt than etf reach there.

sam - arjun

arjun hug sam tightly ..sam too hug him back

ar - shona theek hai meri shona ko kuch nahi hua.

sam - hota bhi kaise uska arjun jo uske saath tha..arjun ke pyar ko to shona ko wapas le hi ana tha.


ar - hmm..par mera pyar uske pyar k samne bahut chota hai.

sam -hmm usne sabit kar diya..

till than team also reach

sak - riya kaisi hai,,

sh - tumne use q mara arjun

sam - arjun ne us par goli nahi chalai..he was on under cover mission

all look at him shocked n he smile..

ar - chotu or aisha mam kahan hai

sam - wo dono unki interrogation kar rahe hai..,,

ar -ok .

sam - shree ,sakshi lisa tum bhi jakar aisha or chotu ki help karo mai yahi rukta hu arjun k sath..or security bhi arrange karta hu,,

all nod n leave from there..sam pat arjun's back n smile to assure him..arjun look at sam nervously ..

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riya gain conscious n look at arjun who is sleeping beside her..

ri try to getup..but it make her shout in pain

ri - ahh

arjun also get up hearing her cry

ar - shona are you all right..kuch hua kya..dr dr

ri - mai thik hu..tum yaha..

ar - I'm sorry riya tumse bahut kuch chupaya hai par believe me tumhara vishwas nahi toda hai..tum dil sahi tha riya..

ri look at him with so much emotions ..he too seeing her n lost in her eyes
sam enter n cough

sam - riya kaisi ho ab

ri - thik hu sir..,

sam - riya arjun ek undercover par tha

ri - i know sir ..sorry arjun

ar - its ok riya..tum galat nahi thi..or tumhe kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi..

just than etf enter ..

ar- hello all

aisha look at sam

ai - sir leader ne apne sare gunah kubul kar liye..par hume pata chala hai ki dcp sir par jo humla hua tha usme arjun ka bhi haath hai..

sh - kuch or sabut bhi mile hai arjun k khilaf..

ai - to humne iski details nikali .pehle to sab thik laga but we are shocked to know ki koi arjun ne kabhi delhi branch mai kaam hi nahi kiya..

ch - kaun ho tum

riya is listening all this shockingly

li - sir delhi branch k dcp aa rahe hai ..

they are not giving any chance to let samjun say anything ..just than dcp shriraj enter..

arjun get up looking at him .dcp shriraj look at arjun n salute him..
all get shocked to see a dcp is saluting an inspector ..

sh - sir ap arjun ko salute q kar rahe hai

ar - haa shriraj sir y are you saluting your junior

dcp - shree I'm not saluting arjun ..i am saluting dcp parth shakti..

n he look at arjun

dcp - or itne bade mission ko successfully handle karne k bad tum mere senior ho gaye ho parth...I'm proud on you my boy...isiliye to tumhe personally wish karne aya hu.

he hug arjun n arjun too hug him back..

dcp - really parth you're truly an inspiration.itni kam umar mai jo tumn achieve kiya hai its really commendable

all are numbly listening them n watching them..he is not inspector arjun but the etf chief dcp parth shakti..

they are not in condition to understand anything..

tbc...

precap - arjun reval his secret ..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved Riyas love for arjun and vice Versa
Omg arjun is dcp parth Shakthi
Waiting for the secret to reveal
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Wow arjuna is parth sakthi... Etf chief...
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Posted: 8 years ago
wowww awesome update..
love it..
sub miss understanding clear..
like it .
continue soon..

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