ARIYA SS: KAISA YE KHEL HAI..ZINDEGI AUR MAUT KA??link of T2 in pg 103 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: utsha

First of all a VERY VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY to Megha di.


Very nice start harshu. 😊😊

Aur kya bolu??? U know the reason.😉😉 But I have full faith in u to do the justice.😛😛

Perfect point to end the part.👏👏

Hope bday girl appreciates it too dear. 😃😃

Continue soon.


Thanks for wishing me happy birthday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Thank u so much harshu...
Wow...
What a beautiful concept...
Loved it...
Awesome start...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..
And also thanks for this wonderful gift
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
wow..
mindbkowing n intrstng part...
new concept...
wo bhi horror. n thriller .,
Waiting for Riya's entry...
n plz plz do cnt soon se bhi soon...
n thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
nice dear very nice

poora positive character sketch

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Part - 2



Shree : haa chotu yaha ke log ki kehna yeh hai ki Iss shinde ki maut ek aatma ki haat se huyi hai
Chotu : par aatma iss shinde ko kyun maaregi???
Sameer : woh issliye hai ki chotu iss shinde ne uss aatma ko aur uski pita ko maara
Chotu : mujhe kuch b samajh mein nahi aa raha hai
Shree : yaar chotu yeh dekh Yeh hai Mr.Suman Mukherjee aur uski beti Riya Mukherjee aur Yaha gaav ki logon ki kehna yeh hai ki iss shinde kisi ke neeche kaam karta hai Aur woh kon hai Hume pata nhi Par iss ne Mr nd Miss Mukherjee's ko maara tha Tab se log ki kehna yeh hai ki Miss.Mukherjee aatma ban ker yahi ghoom rahi hai Aur shayad ussi ne uski murder ki hai
Chotu : please Arjun sir ek request hai aapse Please aap gaadi ko reverse kijiyeh mujhe waapas jaana hai Mujhe bohot darr lag rahi hai
Tab achanak waha bohot teez se hawa aata hai Uss force ki wajah se aage jaane ki raasta dikhanewali board bohot dhur jaa kar gir padta hai Aur SUV bhi aapne aap rukh jaati hai aut tab tak chotu par hassnewale log nhi achanak iss incident ke wajah se chup hojaate hai
Chotu : hey bhagwaan mein ne bola na please Arjun sir gaadi reverse kijiyeh hum waapas chale jaayenge
But one glare from Arjun chotu shuts his mouth
Chotu : ab hum jaa b kis taraf jaa sakte name plate b nahi hai aur hume pata b nahi ki hume kis taraf jaana hai.
Sameer : get down guys hume ek ek karke ek ek side jaa kar dekhna hoga ki hume kis taraf jaana hai
Chotu : aap sab jaayi yeh mein nhi aavoonga
Arjun : chotu neeche utaro aur jaa ker dekho
Chotu : par Arjun sir aap bhi
But one glare from Arjun is enough for chotu nd he too gets down from SUV till then all goes from there Only he nd Arjun remains there
Arjun : kya ab mein harati de ker tumse kahoon ki waha jaa ker doondo Ab tum kuch samjhe ya samjhaun
By pouting chotu goes from there to one side Tab woh waha ek well ke paas pahunchta hai aur achanak bohot jor se hawa aata hai aur ghoongru ki awaaj sunayi deta hai Tab chotu ko dhur se dk ladki ki roop dikhayi deta hai aur chotu darr kar waha se jaane waala hai par uss ladki chotu ko bulati hai
Ladki : kya chahiyeh aapko???aap kuch doond rahe ho
Chotu MV : arey bohot khoobsurat ladki hai aur ooper se awaj bhi acchi hai bhala yeh kyun bhoot hogi
Chotu : haa ji Rajpur
Ladki : kya?????
Chotu : Matlab Rajpur keliyeh kis taraf jaana hai ji????
Ladki ( Ek taraf apni haat dikhate huyeh ) : uss taraf jaayi yeh
Bolker woh uss taraf dikhati hai aur chotu uss taraf dekhta tha phir woh uss ladki ko thank u bolne keliyeh uss taraf par sar mudta hai par woh ladki kahi nahi dikhti hai
Chotu : abjeeb hai ab tak toh yahi hai par achanak kaha gayi hai
Aapne aap mein baat karte huye chotu waha se waapas aata hai SUV ke paas aur tab tak waha saare log waapas aate hai shree chotu ko dekh ker poochta hai
Shree : arey yaar chotu kaha gaye ho????kuch pata chala kya?????
Chotu : haa pata chala
Aur woh uss ladki dikhayi huyi taraf sab ko dikhate hai aur tab tak ek Arjun gaadi ko thik bhi karta hai aur sab log SUV mein baite hai aur kuch dher baad sab Rajpur pahunchte hai
Shree : arey wah chotu tum toh sahi rasta nikala aakhir tumhe pata kaise chala ki iss taraf jaana hai?????
Chotu : waha mujhe ek ladki mili hai usne batayi hai
Shree : par jab hum dekhne gaye toh waha koi nahi hai chalo chodo uss baat ko chotu yeh ladki ko dekhna kitni beautiful hai
Chotu : nahi shree mujhe address wali ladki bohot acchi lagi hai
Shree : bina yeh photo dekh ke aise mat bolo chotu ek baar iss ladki ko dekh agar iski maut nahi huyi hoti toh jaroor iss se mein shaadi kardiya hota waise bhi yeh bhi Bengali Hi hai
Without any interest chotu sees the pic but he gets shock nd shouts loudly
Here is the pic
Chotu : nahi
With the sudden shout of chotu Arjun applies the break to SUV nd all sees him strangely
Arjun : kya huwa chotu aise kyun chillayi ho???????
Chotu : Arjun sir mujhe address Riya ne batayi hai
Baki sab : kya?????????
Edited by jeharshu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
prt awesome one dii
but yeh rii kaha hai
aur bhoot wala case
bohot mazze ayenge
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
interesting update but to small give big wala
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Interesting update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Nice Dear
Awesome update 😃

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