ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA PART 8 PG 81 - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

awesome update.. loved ita lot...

finally,Arjun and Kkai reveals the whole truth to Sameer bhai and others...
it was emotional,as well...
aww...
the intro section was also nice...
etf planning to go to Panchgani...
hmm...
great going...
beautifully written and expressed...
precap is amazing...
continue sooonish...
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Emotional...😭😭😭
Arjun & Kaki explain everyone very nicely...😃😃😃
Riya-Sam convo...LOL...bechara Sam embarrassed ho gaya...😆😆😆
Chotu ka size...😆😆😆
Now Riya knows everyone...😃😃😃
I wants to know what vll be Riya's reaction when she vll get fine...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelarya

Awesome
loved it
the way u described everything ...just wonderful
Riya and Sam convo...😆
Riya & Shree convo...😆
Riya & chhotu convo...😆
Hope everything becomes well soon

Precap sounds interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

unres

yay! me first
awesome update di
loved it
beautifully expressed everyone's feelings🤗
arjun explained everything so nicely👏
kaka-kaki also explained them about the marriage👍🏼
loved ri-sam convo..sam ki mooche cute😳😆..bechara sam😉😛
ri-shree 😃 so sweet
ri-chotu ..size 😆 .. pehle bhi yahi kaha tha..history repeats itself😉😆
ri-aisha n liza friends 👏 loved that they bonded so quickly..n then the girly gossips😆
sam said sorry😲😉😆
loved sam-jun n shree's convo👏
so everything will depend on riya after she gets well
interesting precap
continu soon
thankx for pm😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey dear that's so nice update
loved it to the core
aww arjun describe everything so sweetly, loved it
thanks for the pm
cont soon
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry shakti I made u cry 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

hey dear that's so nice update

loved it to the core
aww arjun describe everything so sweetly, loved it
thanks for the pm
cont soon
take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
Bas Abhi de rahi hoon dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 7 A

Here when all went back it was late evening Riya had changed into casual clothes & was talking too sumitra.

Here Arjun was bit gloomy as he knew that all the team members were extremely hurt to see riya in this state they had always seen riya strong firm & smiling but today this riya must have broken their heart he can still remember shocked n pain ful faces of his friends n moreover his marriage with riya all was happening so fast that it was all taking a toll on him.

He looked gloomy, sad & exhausted too with all sudden twists in their lives.

He was also thinking how to proceed further in this matter & how to carry out things now as now all the ETF people know that riya is with him

Sudeenly Riya who was talking to sumitra his gaze fell on arjun who looked sad & gloomy Sumitra said "Riya beta kya hua kya sochne lagi?"

Riya replied "Kaki Ajju ko achanak kya ho gaya hai wo sad kyu lag raha hai aaj to hamari pakki wali friendship hui hai aur aaj hamare saare friends bhi aayethe fir kya hua?"

Sumitra said "Mujhe to pata nahin shayad mujhe batayega bhi nahin par ab tum uski pakki waali friend hona to jaao tum poocho ki wo pareshaan kyu hai?"

riya said "Kya wo mujhe batayega? Wo to mujhe daantta rehta hai"

Sumitra said "Haan wo zarror batayega tum pooch ke to dekho wo tumhari help karta hai na saari cheezo main?"

Riya nodded in yes then after a pause sumitra said with a smile "To fir tumhe bhi uski help karni chahiye na? yadi tum ye pata nahin karrongi ki wo kyu pareshaan hai to help kaise karogi uski?"

Riya said "haan kaki aap sahi keh rahi hoo par kahi wo meri vajah se pareshaan to nahin? Aur mujhpe gussa to nahin karega na?"

Sumitra smiled n said "Nahin karega kyuki tum uski dost ho na accha usne chai nahi pee hai jaao uske liye chai le jaao aur usse poocho ki kya ho gaya hai theek hai"

Riya nodded & sumitra gave her a cup of tea.

Riya came to arjun n holding a cup of tea n said "Ajju kaki ne chai bheji hai loo piyo na"

she placed the cup on the table & arjun trance was broken by this he said "are tum kyu chai leke aayi? Main khud le leta"

Riya said "Accha tum theek se khana to khate nahin fir chai kya piyoge?"

Arjun gave her a light smile n said "Ok Thank you"

Riya said "hum ab pakke wale friends hai na to friends ko sorry aur thankyou nahin kehte samjhe"

Arjun nodded n Riya said "Accha tum sad kyu hoo ajju? Aaj to hamari pakki waali friendship hui hai aur humne celebrate bhi kiya aur hamare friends bhi aaye the fir kya hua kya tum happy nahin hoo ya fir koi aur baat hai?"

Arjun said "Aisa kuch nahin hai riya bas main kuch sooch raha tha?"

riya said "Accha kya soch rahe the?"

Arjun said smiling "Kuch nahin"

Riya said with a grumpy face "Ajju ye teek nahin hai haan tum aise kuch hide nahin kar sakte true friendship main kabhi kuch hide nahin karte hai"

Arjun said "Nahin main kuch hide nahin kar raha hoon bas ye soch raha tha ki tumhe tumhare dost bahut acche lage ab to tum mujhe bhool jaogi aur sirf apne naye dosto ko yaad karogi isliye main sad ho gaya tha"

riya said with a sad face "Ajju tum mere baare main aisa sochte hoo? Kya main naye friends milne par main tumhe bhool jaaungi? Tum mere sabse pehle friend hoo to main tumko kaise bhool sakti hoon? Tum isliye sad the?"

Arjun said "haan main to isliye sad tha ki ab tum mujhe bhool jaogi"

Riya said " Ab kaha na nahin bhoolungi chalo ab smile karo"

Arjun smiles n sumitra enters with a bowl of kheer.

Riya said Jumping "Wow kaki aapne kheer banaya hai ye mera favorite hai"

Sumitra said "Haan banaya hai aaj tumhari aur arjun ki paaki waali friendship celebrate karne ke liye" riya happily took the bowl & put a spoon in it n was about to have it when sumitra asked "riya tum arjun ko nahin khilaogi kya ?"

Riya looked at arjun face n smiled n said "Sorry kaki aapko pata hai na mujhe kheer bahut pasand hai isliye bhool gayi" riya took some kheer in the spoon & placed in Arjuns mouth & then started eating herself.

She was adimiring the kheer & arjun was admiring her antics n smiling.

Riya sensed that Arjun is gazing her so she said "Ajju aise mat dekho bad manners tumhe aur chahiye to kaki ko bolo wo tumhe bhi kheer dedengi unhone bahut saari banayi hai hai na kaki" Sumitra smiled n nodded in yes.

Here Sameer n ayesha reached home & setteled down after fresh up & changing clothes. Ayesha made 2 cups of coffee n placed it on the table n sat beside sameer n put her head on his shoulders sipping her coffee & said "Sam aapse ek baat poochu?"

sameer smiled n said"haan poocho"

Ayesha said "Main Riya ke baare main soch rahi thi kitna kuch ho gaya uske saath aur ab arjun sir se uski shadi? Pata nahin kya hoga?"

Sameer said "Haan main bhi yahi soch raha tha ki kitna kuch ho gaya riya ke saath is beech aur ab rawte se uski shadi par main ek baat yakeen se keh sakta hoon ki jab tak riya rawte aur kaka kaki ke paas hai wo surakshit hai use ab kuch nahin hoga bas ab wo jaldi se theek ho jaaye bas hum sab apni purani riya ko dekhna chahte hai jo kisi ko bhi muskurana sikha sakti hai, jiski ek muskaan se hum sab ka din achha jaata tha main us riya ko bahut miss kar raha hoon"

Ayesha smiled n said "Hmm aaj jab main usse mili to bahut accha laga aap uski taareef galat nahin karte the par jab riya theek hogi to kya arjun sir ka saath degi ya unhe chod degi? Appko kya lagta hai aap to riya ko acchi tarah se jaante hai shree ne mujhse kahah tha ki riya arjun sir ki bahut respect karti thi ab jab ye shadi achanak hui hai to pata nahin kitna awkward feel karegi wo aur arjun sir bhi"

sameer said "Haan tum theek keh rahi ho ayesha shadi to hogayi par shadi nibhane ke liye pyar ki bahut zarrorat hoti hai aur wahi in dono ke beech nahin hai aur aise rishte ka anjaam kya hota hai hum sab jaante hai main bas ye koshish karoonga ki ye rishta na toote"

Aiyesha said "aap theek keh rahe sameer par shadi sanjoog se hoti hai aur arjun sir aur riya ka rishta bhi sanjog se juda hai aur jo kismath ne joda hai wo koi nahin tod sakta shayad riya ki kismat main arjun sir ka saath likha tha"

Samper sighed n said "Shayad tum theek keh rahi hoo ayesha bas hum prathna kar sakte hai ki jald se jald sab theek ho jaaye"

Ayesha said "Haan aap theek keh rahe par aapko pata hai shree ne kaha tha ki arjun sir ko yadi koi muskurana sikha sakta hai to wo riya hai us din jab usne riya ke baare main ye kaha tha to mujhe laga tha ki aise hi kaha hai par aaj jab maine arjun sir ko dekha riya ke saath wo jis tarah se riya ki care kar rahe the use samjha rahe the mujhe laga ki shree ne sach hi kahah hai maine arjun sir ke chehre pe bahut sukoon dekha sikander ko mare hue 8 mahine ho gaye par arjun sir ko maine chain se kaam karte kabhi nahin dekha unki zindigi ka khalipan humsab mehsoos kar sakte hai aur shayad bhagwaan ne yahi khalipan bharne ke liye ye rishta joda ho"

Sameer said "Haan ayesha mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai jo hua theek hi hua rawte ka bhi koi nahin hai aur riya wo bhi akeli hai shayad ye rishta dono ka khalipan door karne ke liye juda hoo" aisha nodded & went to prepare dinner




SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 7 B 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 7 B

Next morning Arjun got up & was sipping his tea in the hall of his house when he got a call.

He answered the call saying "Hello ACP Arjun rawte" a voice replied on the other hand "Arjun ji main Dr Karan Jain bol raha hoon"

Arjun wished him saying "Good morning Dr Jain aap kaise hai aur itni subah subah kaise yaad kiya?"

Dr jain replied "Bas kuch khaas nahin riya ke baare main jaanne ke liye call kiya hai wo pareshaan to nahin karti hai na"

Arjun said "not at all doctor bas kabhi kabhi thodi zid karti hai"

Dr jain smiled n said "Koi baat nahin waise riya ki next therepy ki date 1 hafte baad hai aap aayenge na use leke?"

Arjun said "Sure doctor main zarror aaunga aur poori ETF bhi aayegi yadi koi problem na ho to"

Dr jain replied "Of course not Arjun ji u all are most welcome"

Arjun said "Aur aapka hospital kaisa chal raha hai?"

Dr jain replied "Bilkul theek chal raha hai main riya ko bahut miss kar raha hoon yaha par lekin kush hoon ki wo ab aapke saath hai"

Arjun said "Wo bhi aap sabko yaad karti hai"

Suddenly Arjun heard riyas voice saying "Good morning ajju kisse baat kar rahe hoo?"

Arjun smiled & said "tumhare Doctor bhaiya se Baat karogi"

Riya sprag in joy & said "Kya doctor bhaiya ka phone hai do mujhe bhi baat karni hai"

she snatched the phone from arjun n started speaking to doctor jain saying "doctor bhaiya kaise hoo aapne to phone bhi nahin kiya pata hai main aap sabko bahut miss karti hoon aur mere saare friends ko bhi par yaha mere naye friends ban gaye hai aur sab bahut acche hai"

Dr Jain said "Ye to bahut accha hai to tum apne purane friends se milna nahin chahogi?"

riya said "haan mujhe bhi milna hai par-"

Dr Jain said "Maine is liye to call kiya hai ki tumhare naye friends tumhe tumhare purane waale friends se milwaane laaye aur tumhare ajju ko bol diya hai wo tumhe saath main leta aayega"

Hearing this riya exclaimed with joy & said "thank you doctor Bhaiya aap bahut acche ho pata hai ab to ajju se meri pakki waali friendship ho gayi hai kal hamne celebrate bhi kiya tha aur sign bhi kiya tha"

Dr Jain got bit confused to hear this n Arjun said "Riya jaao jaake ready ho jao phir breakfast karte hai fir mujhe office bhi jaana hai"

Riya said "Bye Doctor bhaiya main ready hone jaa rahi hoon" She handed over the call to arjun & went inside.

Arjun said "riya bahut kush thi aapse baat karke"

Dr Jain said" haan par wo kya keh rahi thi ye celebration sign pakki wali friendship ye sab kya hai?"

Arjun said "Riya hamari shadi ke baare main baat kar rahi thi Doctor"

dr Jain was shaocked n said "Arjun ji ye shadi achanak aur wo bhi aise?"

Arjun said"Dr Jain jab riya yaha aayi thi tab yaha ke logo ne riya ki mental condition ko bahana bana ke use bahar bejne ko kahah uske baad riya par hamla bhi hua wo to main sahi waqt pe paunch gaya warna""

Arjun words trailed off after that n Doctor jain said "Disgusting kya ghatiya sooch hai logo ki sahara to de nahin sakte par fayda sabse pehle uthane ki koshish karte hai par aapne jo kiya bilkul theek kiya hai main samajh raha hoon aapke paas aur koi chara bhi nahin hoga accha hai ki riya ab legally aap ke paas secure rahegi aur use koi problem nahin hogi par jab riya theek hogi to shayad mujhse behtar aap jaante hai kiwo kaise react karegi"

Arjun said "wahi cheez mujhe bhi pareshaan kar rahi hai doctor jain ki aage kya hoga filhaal bas abhi to main yahi chahta hoon ki riya theek ho jaaye"

Dr Jain said "Haan riya ke case to leke meri baat ek senior Doctor se hui hai aap riya ko leke aayiye yadi riya unki meditations & therapy pe positive response karti hai to hum use jald theek kar paayenge"

Arjun with a happy voice said "Thanks Dr Jain aap Riya ke liye bahut kuch kar rahe hai main jald aaunga riya ko leke thanks & take care" & line went dead after that.

Arjun got ready for his daily office in a happy mood & he was thinking that riya will get well soon now. Arjuns trance was broke by voice of sumitra who was there with breakfast.

She said "Arjun chlao nashta tayyiyaar hai kuch khaloo"

Arjun smiled n said "Haan kaki aata hoon" he came out n sumitra noticed that arjun is really happy

she asked "Arjun kya baat hai aaj tu bahut kush lag raha hai kya hua ?"

Arjun said "Kaki bahut acchi khabar hai meri doctor Jain se baat hui aaj jo Riya ka treatment kar rahe hai unhone riya ka case ko apne senior Doctor se discuss kiya hai unka kehna hai ki riya theek ho sakti hai par uski therapy main laspse nahin hona chahiye unhone agle hafte riya ko session ke liye bulaya hai yadi riya session pe positive response karti hai to Riya bahut jald theek ho jaayegi"

Sumitra was really happy & said "ye to bahut hi acchi baat hai ambe maa se main prathna karoongi ki riya jaldi se acchi ho jaaye"

Arjun said "Haan kaki aleast hame koi ummed to dikhai di bas ab sab jald theek ho jaaye"

Sumitra said "Mayus nahin hote beta wo sab theek karega chalo jaldi nashta kar loo phir tumhe office bhi to jaana hai" Arjun finished his breakfast & went to ETF early leaving riya with sumitra n jayantilal.

Arjun entered the premises of ETF & as soon as he entered he saw Shree indulged in his laptop & as soon as he entered the conference room shree wished him saying "good morning Sir"

Arjun said calmly "good morning Shree"

Shree said "Sir Riya kaise hai aap use bhi le aate"

Arjun smiled & Said "wo theek hai shree aur main nahin laaya kyuki wo abhi is condition main nahin hai ki office aa sake use theek hone do main le aaunga use"

Shree smiled at arjun & asked "Sir aapse ek baat poochu Riya ka treatment -" before he could complete Sameer,ayesha & chotu entered the conference room & wished eachother.

Sameer said "Rawte main bhi tumse poochne waala tha Riya ke treatment ki next sitting kab hai aur tumne kisis se second openion liya hai kya ?"

Arjun said "Rathod Riya ka treatment Dr jain hi kar rahe the or main bhi unhi ke paas riya ko dekha raha tha aur maine pata kiya hai wo kaafi jaane mane doctor hai aur bahut acche insaan hai unhone aaj mujhe phone kiya tha unhone riya ka case discuss kiya hai apne senior doctor se & kuch treatments bhi suggest kiye hai riya ko agle hafte hospital bulaya hai sitting ke liye yadi unka treatment kaam karta hai to wo bahut jald theek ho jaayegi"

All were happy hearing this good news & sameer said "ye to bahut acchi khabar hai rawte I just hope ki riya bilkul theek ho jaaye aur wo bhi jald aur hum sab bhi doctor jain se milkar unhe thanks kehna chahte hai"

Arjun said "Rathod maine unse baat kar lee hai hum sab next week panchgani jaayenge riya ke saath aur shree please tum arrange karwa dena sab taki kisis ko koi problem na hoo"

Shree nodded & started to arrange for the trip & after the arrangements were done he informed Arjun about the same. All got busy in the daily work routine of ETF & were mentally waiting for the trip to panchgani .





P-RECAP: Trip to puchgani & some very unexpected happening there so guys stay tuned or trip & much more 😉😉😉

So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

EDIT CREDIT : Pravalika 😊 Good work dear 😃

Regards Goldie

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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