Ariya FF : kaisa yeh isq ajab sa risk- update part 4 pg 17 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice prologue ..but i want u 2 cmplte many of ur strs...not inended 2 hurt...just an rqst 2 updt strs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
hey guys i will update my work in the weekend.pliz dont get angry as i wrote this via fone n i dint pm any one and megah di pliz sorry maafi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Very interesting concept. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
awesome concept diiiand
its kkk we will wait

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
concept de kar where u lost dear?😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Hi so so sorry dear. I am back now. Bas update abhi he kar rahi hu..
Der sahi durust ayi lol. Wait for few more hours
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

sorry guys woh kal busy hogayi thi isi liye de nahi payi .. 😭😭😭

maaffi please 😊😉😊
part 1
Rathod angrily entered the ETF office with shree , chotu and karan following him with sad faces.
the girls saw the boys and their chief in bad mood
rathod: dammit
Ayesha: kiya huwa sir , koi problem hai kiya
sakshi: aur arjun aur riya ka kuch pata chala , i mean unki koi khabar
shree ,chotu and karan looked at each other and then their chief .
Ayesha: kiya huwa aap log kuch bol kiwu nahi rahe ho .kiya arjun sir aur riya thik hai
rathod: nahi Ayesha woh donoo ... he heard tears in his eyes
shree saw this so he continued with broken voice
'' woh hum commissioner sir ke office se aarahe hai , woh waha jaa kar pata chala ke arjun sir aur riya , waha sikander aur lala se larte huwe niche khae mei apne van ke saath gir gaye aur lala mara gaya par sikander bach gaya
sakshi shouted '' no aesa nahi ho sakta , yeh jhuth hai ''
Ayesha crying ; no arjun sir aur riya ...no no ... woh ..no ...
liza numbed stood up and went to shree : shree kiya sach me hamari riya ', they both hugged each other and cried
Ayesha: par yeh baath batae kisne ke woh dono ...
karan: waha unke saath kuch aur officers under cover thee , un mei se doo ki jaan arjun ne bachae , ussi ne commissioner sir ko bataya .. par ...
sakshi: par kiya karan ...
karan: par woh dono unko talash karne gaye but car blast ho chukka tha isi liye riya aur arjun ka body ...
rathod ek jhatke se chair par gir jata hai , all team looked at him and understand his concern for arjun n riya but what they don't no is that Sameer n arjun were once very close
Ayesha goes to Sameer and hugs him '' sir arjun sir aur riya ko kuch nahi hoga , bhagwaan aesa nahi kar sakta . woh zaroor ayenge ''
rathod : nahi Ayesha ajj meine apna wada nahi nibha paya
all looked at him shocked
choree: wada?
sakshi: kaisa wada Sameer
rathod looked at his team and then down ; woh arjun sirf mera team mate yah dusman nahi tha woh kabhi mera jija huwa karta tha
all shocked shouted: kiyyyaaa??
rathod: ha roshni meri choti bahen thi
karan; toh matlab app dono ...
rathod nodded his head.
shree: par sir app dono toh hamesha larthe rahte thee
rathod: ha roshni ke jaane ke baad mei hamesha se arjun ko he unki mauth ka zimidar manta tha aur iski waja se hamari ristadaari aur dosti dono tuth gayi .
chotu and Ayesha: dosti ?
rathod: tum log yakeen nahi karo ge shayad but mei aur arjun donoo ki das saal ki dosti thi
all shocked again : whaaat?
rathod sadly nodded : ha hum training ke waqt se sath thee ,bahut best friend thee lekin ek he pal ne roshni ke mauth ke baad hum alag ho gaye jaise dusman
Ayesha: toh app dono phir yaha
rathod: haa mei jab bhi arjun koo dekhta mujhe roshni ki yaad ati isi liye mei hamesha us par gussa karta tha par woh hamesha mujhe sorry kahna chahata tha par mei ... meine kabhi use yeh mauka nahi diya , ajj mei haar gaya '', rathod cried harder
all the members were sad and didn't know what to do , riya aur arjun ki mauth ,they could not take it ..
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Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cont :
rathod: no mei yeh nahi maanta jab tak mei khub undono ko nahi dekh leta mei nahi maanta
shree:par sir haame commisioner sir ka order hai ke hum waha nahi jaa sakte abhi
karan: ha sameer , shree thik kahe raha hai
rathod: toh kiya mei comissioner ki baath maan kar riya aur arjun ko bhul jao , unki ... unki laash ko bhi ...
sakshi: kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai
ayesha: ha rathod sir jab baaki ke officer ne kaha ke woh dono khae mei gir gaye toh bachna muskil hai aur abhi thori din rahene dijiye ,hum baad mei jab sab thunder ho jayega toh hum sab waha jaa kar investigate karenge
rathod looked up at ayesha and team and was about to say something when he got a call .
everyone were looking at him so he said '' woh kal hame riya aur arjun aur baki officer ke samaan ke liye jana hai
tears were flowwing in everyones eyes .
tabhi simran entered ,dorti huwi woh team ke paas akar
'' sir woh news mei , sir tell me riya and arjun sir are ok nah ''
she saw all memebers in tears and looked at them for some good news but ..
karan: no simran woh dono ... they are dead
simran: what nooo
rathod: ha simran mei bhi nahi maanta par we will investigate this aur apne riya aur arjun ko dhund nikalenge ...
chalo ab apna kaam karo aur kal sidha head office par milte hai ...
he turned and left for his office ,thinking the last meeting of him with riya and arjun ..
precap: some flash back
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res3 unres3 now ..
tell me how u guys liked it
Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
OMG hell shocking update dr...😃
Riya n Arjun fall down in the valley n everybody thought that they r dead...!!!!! 😲
I don't think so n I m sure they r vry much alive...!!!!!
Yayyy Pathan Lala is dead but that b*****d Sik again flew away... 😡 😡
Awww their team members n friends were hell shocked coz of this news...!!!!!
OMG Rosh was Sam's sis n Arjun is his BIL but after his sis death he broke all ties with Arjun...so sad...!!!!!
Poor guy is so broken now... n even his team members are not better...!!!!!
Precap looks interesting...!!!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! continue soon...!!!!
Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago

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