T2: Adhuri Kahani (Part 60 & epilogue: page 94) 16/8

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Wow di...

Mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Until I get the next update

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Awsumm Update Heli Di..😊😊 What an action packed, thrilling update! Sha is enjoying every bit of Sam's sangeet! And enjoy karna toh banta hai its his bhai's and yaar's shaadi..!! Aww..Sha's toast for Sameer was..❤️❤️ He really made Sam Bhai emotional! But Shaa is right Bidaai Ayesha ki hai..Sameer ki nhi..!! 😆😆 And Shaina! Gayab! WhY I feel ki she has left wid Karan?? All are facing the torture, but still are forced to smile!! And Zaid.. What to sayy about him?? He plannned well! Its soo good to see that Sha still trusts his family..Despite Arjun poisoning his ears.. Finally the day of wedding! Roshni avoiding Sha and he even got hyper but Roshni got him calm! I loved their cute scene..❤️❤️ There was Arjun peeping in but Roshni handled him. And finally Arjun came!! What an entry!! Bolna nhi chahiye! But still..😛 He even tried to hurt sha but thanxx to Zaid's men and Roshni, He is under control! Finally Dr. Has arrived! He is right, Zaid has to save a family! Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soonz.

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Fabulous update👏 High points for me in this one were scenes between Sam & Shaleen & Roshni & Shaleen. Only and only pure & unadulterated love can bring this man back from the brink of total destruction.😳

Dr Khan seems to be going to knock some sense into the bull headed ACP Zaid. Makes sense too. He is a learned professional with no attachment to Shaleen. Zaid was not totally wrong in disregarding Sam's & the family's pleas as they are emotionally connected to Sha.But I am thinking he just might relent to what Dr Khan is asking him to do.

Waiting for the next one.😃

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Awesome update...

Maya went somewhere...😲😲😲

Sha was enjoying every bit of Sam's marriage...😃😃😃

Sha really loves Sam alot...😃😃😃

Dr Khan had convo with Zaid...😃😃😃

Arjun is overpowering Sha's mind...

Marriage happened smoothly...😃😃😃

Roshni tried to avoid Sha...

Sha felt bad seeing Roshni crying...😃😃😃

Roshni's promise was 😃

Masa was very scared & sad...

Ab sabne Sha ko as Arjun dekh liya...

Arjun is very dangerous to Sha...😭😭😭

Hope Sha becames well soon...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

dont know what to say... Speechless !! 😭😭😭

outstanding part Helna 👏

simply brilliant 👏

I am now scared about the next part... Scared for Sha... scared for Arjun & scared for all the people related to Sha & Arjun !

dont know what to say.

this was the much awaited part of this ff. & u have written it exceptionally well.

Superb 👍🏼

waiting for the next part !

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Got next page😳

Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Hello all...

Thanks again for the review of the last part. Here comes the next. Before I start may I have a word.

The entire plot was decided by me long back, only the portion left was to add details. If you find the story not going as you expected, then I am sorry. But this is a dream work for me. I have done many background search for this story. From websites to medical publications, to fictions to movies.But still you may find it not as you have heard. n such cases please forgive me and take it as a fictional error.

I am not from any medical background. So errors are natural.

Sorry I am not giving individual replies. Thanks for all your support.

Hence forth, you may see both Arjun and Shaleen together. to identify them, I will use this format.

Shaleen will be in normal blue italics. While Arjun in bold purple italics.

Any doubt feel free to ask.

Kunchu

Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago