Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago


What a shocker!😲 Mrs Saxena is a black blot on humanity, on motherhood!😡 What sort of security was she providing Neha? By cold blood murder of her sister? It was a fair decision by Mr Saxena. The property belonged to Pooja's mother.

Poor Pooja! A mother & husband straight from hell!

The sting operation was was very detailed and well written👏

I could visualise ETF storming in and hauling that doctor off to jail.


Ashima-Sameer story was another hsocker! What a tragedy!😭

That hit really really close to home. You try to uphold the trust of your parents, you give up your most precious possession so that their honour remains intact. And then you pay & keep paying for it through your nose all your life!

Colossal waste of life, youth, dreams and a rosy future!

The flashback was superb!

Edit: I was thinking the decent & sanskaari ladka might have been Arjun himself😛

Very well written! It was a true shocker!👏

But all can't be lost because this is a fiction world! People do get second chances here unlike real life😳

A true knight in shining armour waits for Ashima once she peeks out of her empty lonely world..

Waiting for that to happen!
Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome and mind blowing update di..
just loved it..
Mrs. Saxena killed her daughter...😲😡😡 😡😡
Shree...😭😭😭
fb was really faboulous..😃
so sam and ayesha is related to past.
do continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.

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Posted: 11 years ago
@Sarita @skrafty and other silent readers who hit the like button ... Thanks a lot for liking this story and encouraging me 😊
@Zebbie - Still Res 😉
@Sneha... Thanks Dear 😊 ... Awww... love u my dear new stalker ... Payal ko competition 😉
Ayega... Arisha bhi aayega 😉... yes... Ashima - Sam loved each other ... 😊 ... Ab dekho... bechara Sam kya karta hai...
@Annu ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... yes... Mrs Patil ne bhi help ki 😊 ... wo Doc to gaya kaam se... and ye bhi sach hai ki property ko lekar bahut se crimes hotey hain ... hee hee hee... mujhe to laga tha koi na koi to guess kar hi lega Sam-Ashima k barey mein 😆😆😆 ...hmmm... Arisha FB bhi aayega 😉
@Shivani ... Thanks Dear 😊... its OK sweetie ... it happens 😊 ... yes... murder for property... it happens everyday around us
Shree is another broken soul ... and sadly, there are parents who have this kind of mentality ... Khap panchayat kind of mindset is still prevalent ... and I have been through what you are experiencing now ... 😳 relatives are more interested in pur lives and are hell bent on pulling us down 😳 ... Don't worry ... Sam is a sensible guy ... everything will be fine 😊
@AnjuRish... Thanks Dear 😊 ... yes it was sad but don't worry... Sam will set everything right 😊
@Laila1994 ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... hey... I clarified in the beginning ... Sam's lover left him and Arjun - Aisha liking each other 😆😆😆
@Faruheer ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... awww... don't say that 😳 ... don't worry... Sameer will set everything right and they will be together 😊 ... 😲😲😲😲 u didnt get the PM 😕😕😕... it was there in my outbox 😳😳
@Miss_precious ... Thanks Dear 😊 😆😆😆... many people thought that but remember I clarified in the beginning ... Sam's lover left him and Arjun - Aisha liking each other 😉... Arjun's love track will begin soon 😊
@Helna ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... yes... it was painful... but things will change now... 😊 ... and I know ur wish... it will be fulfilled soon 😉
@Riya ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... 😆😆😆 yes... maine to pehle hi bataya tha... Sam has a briken heart and he already snubbed Avantika 😉 ... kya karein... laalach insaan ko andha aur behra bana deta hai ... yes, that doctors case was based on a true story shown in Crime patrol... And don't worry... Ashima will be fine ... uska majnu aa gaya hai 😉
@Goldie ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... well... Ashima had no choice ... that part will come up later 😊
@Piya ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... haan... laalach buri balaa hai... 😳 ... indian society hai hi aisi hum kya karein ... but yaha ab Sameer aa gaya hai... sab theek kar dega...😊
@Payal ... Thanks Dear 😊 ... awwiiieee... meri baby ... ab koshish karungi ki thoda kam rulaun 😳😳
@Zuby ... Thanks Dear 😊 ...well... in this bad world, even blood relations don't matter when it comes to money matters 🤢🤢
Haaye... kaash aisa sting operation show mein dekhne milta ... itne to copied and inspired episodes they... ye bh bana lete... ek social message hota 😳
Well... Ashima's story is the story of almost 75% Indian girls ... some of them are and some of them are not 😳
Haan... mera Sam to ekdum indecent aur bureysankaron wala hai na 😡😡😡 🤢🤢🤢
Kya Zuby... u disappointed me big time 😳😳... I had clarified it in beginning that a girl left Sameer heart broken and Aisha-Arjun have a crush on each other ... ek baar bhi mere Sam ka khayal nahi aaya tumhare dil mein... is he that bad ?
Yes... that is the best part of fiction world... it will end on a note of "Lived happily ever after" 😊 And its will be Sam who will change her world 😊
@Megha ... Thanks Dear 😊... don't worry... things will be changing very soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Here is the part 4A

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Few Hours back.
Sameer and Aisha too leave for their place by taxi.
At Sameer's place.
Aisha makes coffee for him, Daadu and herself after she freshens up. Sameer too joins them.
Sameer is humming a tune. It is of the Bengali song "Jodi tor daak shune keu naa se tobe ekla cholo re"
Daadu: aaj bahut dino baad ye gaana gunguna rahey ho...
Sameer: Haan Daadu!!! bas aise hi yaad aa gaya ye gaana...
Aisha: Ashima gaati thi na ye gaana?
Sameer: Haan...(goes into a trance thinking about
her) bahut pyara gaati thi ...gaane k poore shabd to mujhe yaad nahi ... par matlab yaad hai... usne samjhaya tha... Chal akela rey... chahey kaisa bhi waqt ho... koi saath de ya na dey... apne kadam kabhi peechhe nahi hatana chahiye... raaste mein mushkilein bhi aayengi... chot bhi khani padegi... par fir bhi agey hi badhtey rehna chahiye ... akele hi sahi ... hum apni kismat se nahi lad saktey ... lekin... iska matlab ye nahi ki hum kismat ka rona rote huye baith jayein... waqt bura hua to kya hua... ye bhi tal jayega...
Aisha was deeply touched by this song and its meaning and she could relate it to her.
Aisha: par sabse zyada takleef tab hoti hai jab... apne hi humein akela kar dete hain ... (controls her tears which were ready to spill out) par waise bhi ... kuch ladaiya insaan ko akele hi ladni padti hain ...
Sameer comes out of his trance when he sees Aisha in tears. Daadu too opened up relating this song with his life.
Daadu: aur ... ye baat mujhse behtar kaun jaan sakta hai ... tumhari Daadi, mera jawaan beta aur bahu sab chaley gaye... kismat ne unko mujse chheen liya ... aur meri baahon mein reh gaya 8 saal ka chhota sa Sameer ... us waqt mai bhi apni kismat se nahi lad paya ... mai bhi akela mehsoos karta tha ... par maine tay kiya ... ki ab nahi rukna hai ... zindagi ka koi bharosa nahi isliye... ab pani zindagi jeeni hai ... aagey badhna hai ... akele hi sahi... par ab rukna nahi hai...

Daadu didnt stop the tears in his eyes. He let them flow. He never showed it to anyone how he had struggled emotionally for all these years.

Aisha and Sameer quickly got up and went close to Daadu and they got into a big family hug and part after a few seconds Sameer wipes Aisha and Daadu's tears and they
smile.
Sameer breaks into singing the song to cheer them up.
Jodi tor daak shune keu naa se tobe ekla cholo re
Tobe ekla cholo, ekla cholo, ekla cholo, ekla cholo re
Daadu and Aisha clap for him.
Sameer: Aaj mai aur Aisha jaldi aa gaye hai to kyun na kahi baahar jaayein?
Aisha: mai bahut thak gayi hoon... aur kal us criminal ko pakadne k liye bhagtey huye thoda pair mein sprain aa gaya hai ... mai ghar par hi rehti hoon ... aap dono bahar jake aaiye
Daadu(frowns): tumhe chot lagi hai aur tum ab bata rahi ho...(glares at Sameer) Sameer! tumhe to pata tha na? tumne nahibataya mujhe? (Sameer gives him an apologetic look and looks at Aisha)... chalo doctor k paas
Aisha: Daadu... chot nahi hai... thoda sa sprain hai... theek ho jayega... aap dono jaiye...
Though Sameer and Daadu didnt want to leave Aisha alone, she still forces them to go out.
Daadu and Sameer go to a nearby joggers park and chit chat for sometime and go back.
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Aisha was alone at home so she started preparing for dinner.
The door bell rang.
Aisha (thinking): Sameer aur Daadu itni jaldi aa gaye?
She opens the door and a bit startled to see Arjun. Arjun too felt a little awkward. A little while back his thoughts wandered to her. The moment when he saw her for the first was still fresh in his mind. He got the same tickling sensation in his heart which he got when he saw her for the first time.
Aisha: Sir ... aap?
Arjun(lost in Aisha's eyes): Haan... wo... Chabi..
Aisha: Chabi?
Arjun: Sameer ki
Aisha(confused): Sameer ki chabi?
Arjun(snaps out): mera matlab gadi ki chabi... wo aaj mai uski gadi le gaya tha na...
Aisha: ohh... haan... dijiye..
Arjun gives her the keys she takes them.
Aisha: Andar aaiye na sir... (she moves aside and Arjun enters in)
Aisha gets a glass of water for him as he sits on the couch again thinking about Ashima and Sameer. He thanks her and she goes to make tea for him.
She returns with a cup of tea and founds him lost in thoughts.
Aisha(giving him the cup): Sameer aur Daadu bahar gaye hain... wo abhi thodi der mein aa jayenge... mai bhi jane wali thi par pair k dard ki wajah se nahi jaa payi...aaj bahut dino baad Saturday evening ka thoda free time mila na... isliye...
Arjun nods and passes a faint smile acknowledging what she said and takes the cup.
Arjun: pair kaisa hai tumhara ab?
Aisha: ab theek hai... bas thoda sa dard hai...
Arjun is lost in his thoughts. He knew he can talk to Aisha about Ashima as he knows Aisha was like a family to Sameer and she has been a supporting pillar to Sameer after Ashima left. He always felt Aisha had a special place in Sameer's life. May be she could be the perfect life partner for Sameer, but he never saw any such feelings in their eyes for each other. Sameer was madly in love with Ashima and there was no feeling of being jealous in Aisha's eyes. It was always the concern and care. And Sameer to was very protective of her. They shared a sibling kind of a bond. This he had experienced in the few months when Aisha was staying in their neighbouring apartment.
Aisha senses that something is wrong with him.
Aisha: Sir... aap kuch pareshan lag rahey hain... koi problem hai kya?
Arjun: Haan Aisha... bahut badi problem hai...
Aisha: Kya baat hai?
Arjun: Aisha... mujhe Ashima k barey mein kuch pata chala hai
There is a twinkle in Aisha's eyes.
Aisha(excited): Ashima!!! kaha hai wo ? kaisi hai?
Arjun closes his eyes and takes a deep breath before breaking the news to Aisha.
Arjun: Ashima Shree ki badi behen hai...
Aisha was shocked and was at loss of words. Shree's sister who was in mental hospital was none other than Sameer's Ashima.
Both are quiet for a few moments. Tears well up in Aisha's eyes.
Arjun: Sameer ko batana hoga...
Aisha: par kaise... wo pata nahi kaise react karenge... kya beetegi un par..meri to kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hai...
Arjun: janta hoon... par uska ye baat jaan-na bahut zaroori hai...
Aisha holds her head in her palms trying to control her tears. Aisha bombards him with questions.
Aisha: Par ye sab ... kaise ho gaya? Shree ko pata hai ye baat? aap gaye they Shree ke saath hospital mein usey dekhne? Wo Ashima hi hai?
Arjun: Nahi... Shree ko nahi pata... aur maine usko nahi dekha... Shree ko drop karne uske ghar gaya tha to waha mujhe Ashima ki diary dikhi... uske barey mein poochha to Shree ne bataya ki wo uski behen ki diary hai aur us diary mein Ashima ka photo bhi tha...
Aisha closes her eyes and remembers how happy Sameer was few hours back remembering Ashima, humming her favourite song. He always had a smiling image of Ashima in his eyes. She was worried for Sameer now.
The door bell rings again and Aisha and Arjun are distracted. Aisha wipes her tears and opens the door. Sameer and Daadu enter inside and Aisha passes a fake smile.
Arjun comes forward and bends down to touch Daadu's feet. Daadu blesses him and hugs him.
Sameer: Shree mil ke aaya apni behen se? kaisi hai wo? kuch bataya usne?
Aisha and Arjun look at each other and look back at Sameer.
Arjun: haan... wo theek hai...
Daadu: Shree ki behen? usey kya hua?
Sameer: Mental hospital mein hai wo... uske pati ne usko bahut torture kiya tha... domestic violence ki shikar ... 3 baar abortions kyunki beti hone wali
thi... aur mata - pita ne uski baat nahi maani... unhe lagta tha ki uska pati jo kar raha hai ... wohi sahi hai... aur uske pati ko poora haq hai uski zindagi ke
faisle lene ka...
Daadu feels bad for SHree and Ashima. Aisha clenches her fists trying to calm herself down. Arjun too looks at Sameer with sympathy.
Sameer(continues talking about her intently without a hint that its his love): kitni ajeeb baat hai na daadu... pehle uski zindagi ke faisle uske mata-pita ne kiye fir uske pati ne... aur un sab galat faislon ka nateeja us bechari ko bhugatna pad raha hai... kya dosh tha us bechari ka? ab wo log kuch nahi kar saktey uska dard kam karne k liye...Aur karenge bhi kyun? wohi to zimmedar hain uski is haalat ke... Aur is sab mein Shree bhi pis raha hai... pata nahi kyun... par shuru se usey dekh ke lagta tha ki ... wo normal youngsters jaisa nahi hai... wo khul ke hasta nahi hai... chupchap rehta hai... apne laptop, Tablet mein poori tarah se involved... pehle kaga ki bahut studious type ka bachcha hai... par kabhi socha nahi tha ki wo apne andar itna bada bojh liye jee raha hai... is ummed aur intezar mein ki uski
behen kisi din zaroor theek hogi... uski aankhon mei wo dard dikhta hai ki wo apni behen k liye kuch nahi kar paya ...
Aisha pursed her lips controlling her sob and Arjun fixed his gaze on Sameer.
Sameer(continues): uski zindagi mein Rahat ki ummed kam hi hai... bas yehi dua hai ki... uska dard aur na badhey... uski behen ka future to nahi pata ... bas wo ek normal zindagi mein wapas aa jaye...
He looks at Arjun and Aisha and observes that they are intently looking at him.
Sameer: kya hua? aise kya dekh rahe ho?
Aisha: kuch nahi ... mai khana lagati hoon...
Daadu: haan bhai... bahut bhookh lag rahi hai... aur aaj bahut dino baad saath mein khana khayenge...
Aisha goes to set up the table and Arjun follows her as he knew that she might be affected by what Sameer said.
Sameer's phone rings and he gets busy with the call. Daadu was quick to notice that Aisha was disturbed and Arjun followed her.
Near the dining table.
Aisha(while setting up the table): Sir... kaise batayenge Sameer ko... ki wo unki Ashima hai...
Arjun(helping her): batana to padega Aisha...
Aisha closes her eyes keeping her palm on the table. Arjun puts his palm on Aisha's hand and presses it lightly. Aisha opens her eyes with a jerk and finds Arjun looking at her intently.
Arjun: bharosa rakho... sab theek ho jayega..
Aisha passes a faint smile. Arjun's palm is still on Aisha's palm on the table and they were looking into each others eyes. Aisha felt relieved listening to him.
A Little while back.
Daadu noticed that there is something wrong with Aisha and Arjun. Later when he saw Arjun keeping his palm on Aisha's hand and bothe of them looking intently at each other, he smiled to himself.
Sameer came back after finishing his call and was moving towards dining table when Daadu called in a very low voice not audible to Arjun and Aisha.
Sameer turned and looked at Daadu with a question mark on his face.
Daadu signalled towards Aisha - Arjun. Sameer looks at them with a raised eye-brow in bewilderment.
Daadu: kafi dino se tumse ye baat kehna chahta tha ... ye Aisha aur Arjun ki jodi kaisi rahegi? Dono saath mein kitne achchhe lag rahey hain...aur shayad ek dusre ko pasand bhi kartey hain... bhai mujhe to inki jodi bahut pasand aayi... tum batao...
Sameer was shocked at first but very soon there was a mischievious smile on his face.
Sameer: They are a perfect made for each other couple...maine to kabhi socha hi nahi...
Daadu: kaise dost ho tum...
Sameer: koi baat nahi... waise abhi chaliye dinner karne... nahi to ye love birds k romance ke chakkar mein hume khana nahi milega...
Both of them chuckle and move towards the dining table.
Sameer makes a little sound while clearing his throat to catch Arjun-Aisha's attention. They snap out and are embarrassed. Sameer and Daadu supress their chuckle.

They have dinner and Daadu insists Arjun to stay at their place in the night.
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Part 4 B

Be careful, this part is very filmy and dramatic. Don't look for any logic 😉
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In the night.
Sameer was in his room looking at Ashima's only photo that he had, the one clicked by Arjun that he always kept in his wallet. He glided his fingers on it looked at it with love and was lost in
Jhonka Hawa Ka Aaj Bhi, zulfein Udaata Hoga Na,
Tera Dupatta Aaj Bhi Tere, Sar Se Sarakta Hoga Na,
Baalon Mein Tere Aaj Bhi, Phool Koi Sajta Hoga Na,
He gets up from the bed and moves towards the window to get the some fresh air. He looks outside and smiles looking at the full moon.
Thandi Hawayein Raaton Mein Tujhko, Thapkiyaan Deti Hongi Na
Chaand Ki Thandak Kwabon Mein Tujhko, Le Ke Toh Jaati Hogi Na,
Ashima was sleeping peacefully under the effect of medicines that were given to her to keep her calm. The window of her room was open. The cool breeze was playing with the looses strands of her hair and her face was glowing in the moon light falling on her face.
Sameer keeps the photo back in his wallet and drifts to sleep.
In the morning
Ashima's sleep is disturbed by the sun rays entering through the windows and she opens her eyes. She looks around in bewilderment. She was improving but was reluctant to show. for last few weeks she was recognizing Shree but was hurt to see him in tears and felt helpless and weak. She tried to speak but couldn't find any words.
Sooraj Ki Kirnen Subah Ko Teri Needien Udaati Hogi Na,
Mere Khayalon Mein Sanam, Khud Se hi Baatein Karti Hogi Na,
Main Dekhta Hoon Chup Chup Ke Tumko, Mehasoos Karti Hogi Na,
Jhonka Hawa Aaj Bhi Julfein Udaata Hoga Na

Sameer's face flashed in front of her eyes. A soft whisper left her lips "Sameer"
Sameer woke up with a jolt and felt as if someone called him. He looked around and realised it must be a dream. He freshen up and goes out. Aisha, Daadu and Arjun were waiting for him for breakfast.
Arjun spends whole day at Sameer's place.
After lunch.
The newspaper guy comes to collect his newspaper bill and Sameer opens his wallet to give him money and Arjun happens to see that photo in Sameer's wallet. Sameer notices this and smiles at Arjun.
Sameer(smiles): Aise kya dekh raha hai? yehi ki ye photo ab tak maine sambhal k rakhi hai (chuckles and then takes a deep sigh)... bas yehi to baki reh gaya hai mere paas uski yaad k naam par ... bas dua kar sakta hoon uske liye ki wo jahan bhi ho khush ho ...(smiles again) 5 saal se zyada ho gaye ... Khush to hogi hi wo ... apna ghar-parivar... bachche... hai na?
Arjun: Sam... mujhe kuch baat karni hai tujhse ...
Sameer(snaps out): to bol na... itna soch kya raha hai...
Arjun looks at Aisha and she nods assuringly to go ahead.
Arjun: kal mujhe ek baat pata chali hai jiska sambandh tumse hai... aur mujhe lagta hai ki tumhara is baat ko jaan-na bahut zaruri hai... meri baat bahut dhyaan se aur thande dimag se sun-na
Sameer has a puzzled look on his face.
Arjun: Tum jantey ho Shree kaun hai?
Sameer chuckles.
Sameer: Rawte... tujhe ye baat karni thi ki Shree kaun hai? ridiculous... tumse mujhe ye ummeed nahi thi... Shree humara technical expert hai. ETF ka ek aham...
Arjun (cuts him short... in a very calm tone): Wo Ashima ka bhai hai ...
Sameer is dumbstruck. He could not just believe what Arjun said.
Daadu too was shocked.
Sameer could not just believe Arjun just took Ashima's name. He is blankly looking into Arjun's eyes.
Arjun: sahi sun rahey ho tum... Ashima hi Shree ki wo behen hai jo mental asylum mein hai...
Sameer is shocked. He is thinking about what he heard from Liza about Shree's sister and connecting with his love.
He felt a lump in his throat. He found it difficult to breathe. He was suffocated. Ashima's smiling face flashed in front of his eyes.
Sameer(controlling his sob): Mujhe Ashima k paas jana hai... usey meri zarurat hai ... wo mujhe bula rahi hai... mujhe abhi uske paas jana hai Arjun...
Daadu: Arjun beta... kya abhi tum Ashima ko dekhne ja saktey ho?
Arjun: theek hai... hum chaltey hain...
Daadu: haan beta...aur mujhe lagta hai tumhein Shree ko bhi bula lena chahiye...
Aisha: mai aur Daadu ghar pe ruktey hain..
Arjun nods.
Sameer(anxious): jaisa tum theek samjho Arjun... par mujhe jald se jald Ashima k paas pahunchna hai... bas...
Arjun calls Shree.
Shree: hello sir... boliye
Arjun: Shree tum kahan ho is waqt?
Shree: Thane mein hoon sir
Arjun: Kya tum GK mental asylum pahunch saktey ho Shree?
Shree: haan sir mai aadhe ghantey mein pahunchta hoon... par baat kya hai?
Arjun: abhi batane ka waqt nahi hai... milkar batata hoon...
call disconnected.
Shree is confused but takes a taxi for GK mental asylum.
Arjun and Sameer too start for GK mental asylum.
Daadu and Aisha pray for Ashima and Sameer.
Arjun and Sameer reach there, park the car and go inside.

At the reception.
Arjun: Ms Ashima Sen kaunse room mein hain?
Receptionist (checks the records): room number 33.
Arjun: Thank you.
Sameer and Arjun run towards room no. 33.
They reach the room and Sameer opens the door with trembling hands.
They enter the room and see Ashima sleeping on the bed. Sameer goes and sits on a chair near her and takes her hand in his hands and gets lost in thoughts.
Shree comes and calls Arjun.
Arjun: haan Shree... kahan ho tum?
Shree: sir mai aa gaya hoon... aap kahan hai?
Arjun: Ashima k room mein aa jao Shree
Shree is confused that why Arjun has come to meet Ashima.
He goes in her room and sees Sameer holding Ashima's hand and is confused.
Arjun takes Shree in a corner.
Shree(confused): Sir, Rathod sir... Tinu di...
Arjun: Shree... tumhari didi ne apni diary mein jis ladke ke bare mein likha tha... ki wo ussey pyar karta hai aur wo usey pyar karti hai... uska naam likha tha diary mein?
Shree: haan... uska naam "Sam___" ... (stops before completing the name, shocked at the thought that the person named Sameer, referred in Ashima's diary, is actually his boss, ETF chief Sameer Rathod))
Arjun completes it.
Arjun: Sameer... Sameer Rathod... wohi hai... jo tab bhi ussey pyar karta tha aur aaj bhi karta hai... aur usko aaj tak bhool nahi paya hai... aur usi ki khatir aaj tak usney shadi bhi nahi ki... kisi aur ladki ko wo us nazar se dekh hi nahi paya... uski aankhon mein sirf ek chehra tha... Ashima ka...
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So... how was it?
No pre-cap... my episode bank finished... have to write next part. 😉 and its my cousins wedding next week so will b busy till 7th Feb. Next update of this story and my other stories after 7th Feb. But will see if in between I find time, will try to update RNP
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Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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unres...me again first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update...
Actually I have no words to describe that how much I liked the song sequence...👏👏👏
Arjun lost in Aisha's eyes...😉😉😉...itni tension mein bhi romance sujh raha hai...😆😆😆
Dadu & Sam caught Arisha...😆😆😆 😉😉😉
Loved the filmy sequence...😃😃😃
Feeling bad for Sameer & Ashima...😭😭😭 😭😭😭
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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read Part A
waiting for the second
feeling very bad for Sam.
kya hoga jab usse sab patha chalega?
hope he would hold him back to see her
at least Sree ke sath koi tho hogi.
whole scene was just picture perfect
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchu

read Part A
waiting for the second
feeling very bad for Sam.
kya hoga jab usse sab patha chalega?
hope he would hold him back to see her
at least Sree ke sath koi tho hogi.
whole scene was just picture perfect

Refresh 😉
BTW ... how was that little Arisha ????
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Posted: 11 years ago
refreshed and I am so happy with the Arisha
great part too
Great to know that Sam is still in love with Ashima.
that scene was so touching.
great going dear
come back soon.
we are waiting
and will miss you

PS: and by this comment I become an IF Dazzler.
Edited by kunchu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res, thnx aaj update karne k liye;

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