OS:Ek Nayi Zindagi(Epilogue-B in pg7) *COMPLETED* - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Aww... Beautiful story zebbie dii!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
that was such a lovely epilogue :) loved it
riya back in ETF :) great
awww she was saying arjun's dialogue :)
loved arjun and rathore's conversation
wow ariya getting married
continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nice update..
So Ariya getting married...waiting for it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awesome update.. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wow riya back with full attitude
ariya going to get married
lovely updates
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awesome update dear.
And thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wow , awesome epilouge di.
Loved it so much.
Riya is back in etf..
Tears in arjun's eyes...
Very rare... Loved it... So shadi kar rahe hai ..and puri team bilkul shocked ho gayi..he he he...

Ankia behosh ho jayegi...lol.
Waiting fr epilouge B.
And thanks fr pm di.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Last Part: Epilogue-B.

Two weeks later.

Location:Rathod Mansion.

The whole mansion was decoration with red and golden fairy lights.The main hall of the mansion was filled with people,running here and there for checking the last minute preparations.Shree and Chotu,checking the security arrangements,while,Ankita was checking the arrangements for the Vidhis'.Rathod's mom was busy checking the food arrangements,while,Sameer and Sr.Rathod was busy with the guests.

Liza was busy with helping Riya getting dressed up.

Riya got up and looked herself in the mirror.She was looking really very beautiful and gorgeous.Dressed like a traditional Rajputi Bride.She blushed as she looked herself in the mirror.

Liza(sensing Riya's blush): Aye Haaye... Koi bohut sharma rahi hai?Good... Itna mat sharmao... Arjun sir ke samne jaake bohut sharmana.

Riya(smacking Liza's arm,lightly): Dhattt...

After a while,Riya spoke up.

''Janti ho,Liza. Main bohut khushnaseeb hu ki mere Life mein Arjun hai.Mujhe vishwas hi nahi horaha hai,aaj mera sapna pura hone wala hai,jo maine socha tha.Uss hadse ke baad...''

Liza stopped her from talking furthermore.

''Riya,beeti baato ko bhul jau.Apne aaj aur aane wale kal ke baarei mein socho.Arjun sir ke saath apni puri zindagi bitaogi,uske baarein mein socho.Aaj maine jana hai,ki,sacche pyaar mein bohut takat hoti hai,aur bohut pyaari bhi.Tabhi toh,Specky ka pyaar ka anokha rang mujhpe charh gaya.Aur,waise bhi,Arjun sir is very lucky to have you.Kitna pyaar karte hai tumse.Accha chalo... Just be happy and always keep smiling.Nazar na lage tumhe.'', Liza said.

Liza applied a black dot behind Riya's ear.

Riya smiled at this and both of them hugged each other.

Suddenly,there was a knock on the door.It was Naina and Alina.

Liza opened the door and asked Naina and Alina to step inside. Liza excused herself from Riya and Naina and went downstairs to help the others.

Alina ran towards her Maasi and hugged her tight.

''Yay... Aaj meli Maasi ki shaadi hai.I love you,Maasi...'' an ecstatic Alina said.

''Aaley mera shona baccha... I love you too,'' Riya said while pecking her forehead.

Naina was so happy to see Alina and Riya happy and smiling.She was feeling happy for Riya.She had tears of joy brimming in her eyes.

Riya,sensing the importance of situation,asked Alina to go downstairs and play with the kids,to which Alina sweetly obeyed.

Naina moved towards her Di and hugged her tightly and cried.Riya hugged her and stroked her forehead.

''Di,aapke bina main kaise rahungi?Mere nakhre kaun sahega? Main aapko bohut miss karungi.Maa,Papa,Rohan aur Main,khaas kar,Alina,aapko bohut zyada miss karegi.Aap humesha bohut khush rehna aur humesha smile karti rehna,'' a teary-eyed Naina said.

Riya smiled and nodded.

''Naina,agar tu abhi itni royegi,toh,meri Bidaai ke waqt kya hoga?Mujhe khushi khushi vidaa karna.Ro ke vidaa mat karna.Sabko haste huye dekhke jana chahti hu,rote huye nahi,samjhi ya samjhau?'' Riya said.

Naina wiped her tears and nodded.

''Di,aaj aap behat khubsurat lagrahi ho.Ghani phhooti lagrahi ho.Kisi ki nazar na lage aapko,'' Naina praised Riya about her dress up,while she applied a black dot behind her ear.

They shared some time,while,Ankita,Naina's mother and Mrs.Rathod came to check on her.

They all blessed Riya for her married life and praised her about her beauty.

Someone came up and said, ''Baraat aagayi hai.''

The ladies' went downstairs to welcome Arjun.Liza stayed back with Riya.

Naina's mother did the Aarti of Arjun and brought him inside.He was directly taken inside for the mandap.Meanwhile,the guests' also settled down.

Arjun was sitting on the mandap,waiting impatiently for Riya to come down.

Panditji asked Naina to bring Riya down.

After some minutes,lights went off and the spotlight fell on the stairs.
Naina,accompanied by Liza,was holding Riya's hands' and was bringing her down.

Everybody was looking at her.She was looking so beautiful.The golden and red lehenga,the sparkle of the lehenga,was adding more to her beauty.

She was brought down.Naina and Liza helped Riya,sit beside Arjun.Both of them looked at each other,praising each other silently through their eyes'.A sweet eyelock took place.

''Bohut khubsurat lag rahi ho,Riya Arjun Rawte,'' Arjun said,with a smileplaying on his lips.

Riya blushed at that and said, ''Aap bohut zyada handsome dikh rahe hai,Arjun.I Love You..''

''I Love You,too,Riya..'', Arjun said.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
its realy beautiful written..just like my zebbie's di work as always
loved it dil se..


i realy feeling feeling sad for her in first part..


i cried for my riya..



opss.. arjun's riya..




lv naina n riya bonding..




finaly she meet arjun..



arjun proposed her so sweet..



agar riya hoti toh story kuch ese hi hoti..




choree moments and that nagasaki and hiroshima wala



dialogue was too good..



waiting for epilogue update soon...



please pm karna...dnt want to miss this beautiful story..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation from Epilogue-B.

The couple stood,facing other for the ''Jaimala''.It was Arjun's turn to put the Jaimala around Riya's neck.Arjun was trying to put the garland around her neck,but failed,because,Shree and Chotu had lifted Riya up.

''Main bhi ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte hu.Main toh Riya ke gale mein har dalke hi rahunga.'' adetermined Arjun said in his mind.

With that,Rathod and some of Arjun's cousins' lifted Arjun up to Riya's height.With that,Arjun placed the Mala around Riya's neck.Riya also did the same thing.

Everybody clapped for Arjun and Riya and showered them with flower petals.

The Panditji asked them to sit down and started to chant the mantras'.They offered some offering to the Fire and folded their hands and prayed to Bhagwan,so that,they can lead a happy,blissful married Life.

Naina's mother and father were called for doing the Kanyadaan.It was a heart-touching moment,when,they kept Riya's hand on Arjun's hand.

Next,Naina did the ''GatBandhan'' and the Panditji asked the couple to start the ''Pheras''. Arjun and held Riya's hand in his hand,tightly,and started to take 7 rounds around the Fire.

As the Panditji started to recite mantras',Arjun and Riya were circumambulating around the Fire.The guests' and everyone else were showering the couple with flower petals.

As Arjun and Riya finished taking their Pheras,both of them sat down.

''Beta,apni patni ki maang mein sindoor bhardo,'' Panditji asked Arjun.

Naina got up on the mandap and moved the maangtika of Riya,a bit,so that Arjun can apply sindoor on Riya's forehead. Arjun took a pinch of Sindoor and applied it on Riya's forehead.Riya closed her eyes' to savour the moment.Everybody clapped for Arjun and Riya.

''Beta,ab aap apni patni ko mangalsutra pehnaiye,'' Panditji asked Arjun.

Arjun smiled and took the Mangulsutra from the Thali and turned towards Riya.He leaned down towars Riya's neck and tied the Mangalsutra.Everybody clapped for them and showered them with flower petals.

Riya grazed her hands lightly on her forehead and on her neck,to feel the the sindoor and mangalsutra of her Arjun's name.
She was really happy.Tears of joys were coming out from her eyes.

''Yeh shaadi sampann hui.Aajse,Arjun ar Riya pati patni.Ab aap dono aapne baare buzurg ka aashirwaad lijiye.''

Arjun and Riya got down from the Mandap and took Blessing from the elders'.

Naina's mother went towards Arjun's daijaan(Arjun's legal guardian,alive) and said, ''Aaj mein aapko apni beti soph rahi hu.Usse koi bhi galti hojaye,toh,beti samajhkar maaf kardijiga.''

''Aap chinta mat kariye,Samdhan ji.Riya,humari ghar ki bahu nahi,beti hai.Bohut khush rahegi woh humare saath.Aur rahi baat galti ki,Riya se galti ki koi gunjaish nahi hai.Riya bohut samajhdar bacchi hai.Main bohut lucky hu,balki,main aur Arjun bohut lucky hai,ki,Riya humare ghar mein aarahi hai.Main aur Arjun,khas kar,Arjun humesha Riya ke saath rahega.Mera vadaa hai aapse...'', Arjun's Daijaan promised Naina's mother.

After all the pleasantries,Shree said, ''Shaadi toh hogayi,ab kuch tasveerein kheechi jaaye?''

Rathod: Neki aur Puch Puch.. Shree,call the photographer.

Shree called the photographer and everybody tok photos with the newly-married couple,in different poses.

The photographer made Arjun and Riya take two photos,in which,Riya is sitting on the sofa,and,Arjun is standing behind her(like the Maharaja and Maharani type),and,one,where,Arjun is tightly hugging Riya from the back,and both are smiling.

After the photography session,the most heart wrenching moment came.

The Bidaai moment came...

With each step she took,she threw a ahndful of Rice,which fell on the aanchals' of Naina,Naina's mother,Mrs.Rathod and Ankita.

When Riya reached the doorstep,she ran back and hugged Naina and their Mother,tightly,and cried a lot.Naina's mother broke the hug and wiped Riya's tears' and pecked her forehead.Riya went to Rathod and Ankita and hugged them also.Rathod also blessed Riya for a happy,married Life. Both Arjun and Riya took blessing from all the elders.
Shree,Chotu and Liza hugged them.

As Riya was leaving,Alina tugged Riya's dupatta.She turned back to see the Angel crying.She slumped down and hugged Alina tightly.Alina was also crying.

''Chup ho jao,baccha.Maasi ayegi kal aapke paas.Rote nahi.Aap toh mere strong baccha ho na.Dont cry,dear,'' Riya said,while she patted Alina's back and pecked her hair.

Riya broke the hug and stood up to leave with Arjun.

Naina helped Riya to sit in the car.Arjun bid Goodbye to all and also sat in the car.Riya,looked at them,from the window and waved them GoodBye.Arjun held her hands and assured her,to be with her and support her in each step of their Life.

Soon,they left the Rathod Mansion premises to start their beautiful,
''Ek Nayi Zindagi''.

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THE END.
Hope you all liked it.

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