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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2
Next Day at ETF Riya is coming to work alone. Rathod have some work. Arjun enjyng his cutting chai.
Riya look at watch & then at door. aftersmetime Riya look at watch again, its 12pm. Bt there is no sign of Chotu & Shree. Rathod comes in happily & look at his sister. "Riya un dono ne aah chutti li hai" Rathod inform her, knowing she wait for her buddies. Arjun reads some file & suddenely remebers Riya's bdy , he wish her. Now Riya on cloud nine. Early Mrng Rathod also wish her & feed her fav sweets. But Riya feel so bad because her 2 best buddies not there.
Here in another home situatied in outside of Mumbai two persons hurridly does there work. One person stands outside of big bunglow and clean namplate of bunglow. After cleaing he goes some steps back to check nameplate , "hmm now its shining" and goes inside. Name plate reads " Rathod's" yes Rathod's farmhouse. Shree & Chotu come early mrng to Rathod house when their best frind dozes off. Rathod handed them keys. & both now in Rathod's farmhouse to decorate house for Riya's bdy.
All arrangements are make, Now Shree gets bored & hide himself in his lappy. While Chotu seats on chair . Though Rathod sends event manager there to handle all , but Shree & Chotu take care all small small things & also guide & help them out. Suddenely Shree yells "Chotu come here." Chotu goes there. Shree shows him somthing in his lappy , "Are ye to Ri ka fb account hai" Chotu ans him. "Ha , pata hai , par maine use hack kiya hai , aur ye dekh , kya naam hai iss bande ka ha Arivand , lagta hai koi khaas hai , " Shree inform Chotu while looking at Riya 's profile.
"Are chod de vo sab" Chotu tell him. But Shree is Shree. He does somthing & then look at Chotu devilish smile. Chotu ask him what happened, Shree shows him Riya's status , Chotu see this & shock at core. It shows "Happiest day in my life , Love you Arjun , for entering my life... :) " Chotu hit on Shree's head lightly. "Pagal hai kya , agar Riya aur Arjun Sir ko pata chala na , tu kal teri shokesabha mai aane hoga hame." Chotu says to Shree.
"Are kuch nhi hoga , dekh tu , vo dono aaj kuch na kuch jarurr karnge , ijhaar to hoga hi , kya tune nhi dekha Chotu vo aakho hi aakho mai isshare , vo care , vo pyar . hamesha Ri ke saath rehena" Shree ask him. "Ha re , par tune sher ke muh mai haath daala hai." Chotu inform this & leaves from there to help worker. "Chotu tu dekh aaj us Arivand ko bhi maine bulaya hai , uski baat se to lagta hai ki vo Ri pe fida hai , aa jaayega yaha 1/2 hrs mai , phir dekhte hai bande ko. "Shree mumrmued to himself & close his laptop.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
"Pagal hai kya , agar Riya aur Arjun Sir ko pata chala na , tu kal teri shokesabha mai aane hoga hame." Chotu says to Shree.



this line is awesome yaar...i must say...it really make me laugh

i love the way you portrait everything...
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow.. Manu that's awesome ... Superb start!! Shree.. Yeah kya kiya hain.. Now noone can save him from Sher and sherni..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely Start

Manadi di n Kavs ...Kuch interesting idea sound kar rha hain

Waiting for next part

n how cn i forget Sautan waala hug 🤗 for both of u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maine Abhi Abhi second part read kiya

Shree hcked Ria's FB acct


n OMG kya status update hain...I M ROFLing

Ria to gayi...

uske baad shree ki waat lagne waali hain🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani23

Lovely Start


Manadi di n Kavs ...Kuch interesting idea sound kar rha hain

Waiting for next part

n how cn i forget Sautan waala hug 🤗 for both of u


hey thanks tani...🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one..

loved the cute masti you started off with..

Ria reading file...i just loved that scene..

Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hey..
Awesomw strt!!
Loved the trio masti ;)
Continue soon! 😃

Ps: Kavs, zyada tang matt karna mere bechare shree ko! 😔
Edited by ..Sneha.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Part 2
great update
aww how sweet arjun wished her happy birthday :)
so the birthday party is at rathore's farmhouse :) interesting
shree hacked riya's facebook account 😆
omg what a status update :)
loved chotu's dialogue " pagal hai kya, agar riya aur arjun sir ko pata chala na, tu kal teri shokesabha mai aane hoga hame." 🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start... Trio s cool... now waiting for surprise celebration... update soon...

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