SS:'Tumhe Yad Ho Ke Na Yad ho' part 6B pg 20 LAST - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
awesome update
poor riya,so arjun knows riya loves him
cant wait for next part
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
omg this is awesome...i just imagining ...everything is like dream...

wow i really dont have words to express my feelings after reading this


please add me in your pm list...i really want to read more ...

update soon and send pm to me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
fantastic update :) loved it
oh god poor riya had a nervous breakdown :( feeling so bad for her
loved whole team's concern for riya :)
finally arjun knows that riya loves him only :) so happy
eagerly waiting to read next part
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Lovely update...
Finally arjun knws riya loves him only...
Waiting for arjun to confess his towards riya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
well thanku guyz for such beautiful replies i will try to update next part soon...😊
diya😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
great part!! really loved the diary part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

awsum update...
lvd it..finally arjun came to knw dat riya lvs him...
hope riya is fine...
cant wait fr d nxt part...
continue soon...
plz pm me wenevr u update...
thx...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
okiii frndzz this is a bit of emotional part 😭but it is needed for making story i want to wind it up but also wanted to make a perfect criteria...so plzz dnt get bored...enjoy it leave for me your cute comments...so tht i may enjoy them...
the next parts will be beautiful i can bet this so...this is for today enjoy it... and forgive me for spelling mistakes😉
diya😳





PART 4B
"LET ME GIVE LOVE AND LIFE A SECOND CHANCE"

"Sometimes people put up walls, not to keep others out, but to see who cares enough to break them down."


He read the diary and was in tears by reading it...he had the diary in his hands and with a heavy heart turned the page

25/may/2012
Dear diary
pata hai mene riya mukherji ne shooting karna seekh liya hai...would you believe this mein jo aj tk gun ko chala bhi nhi paati thi shoot karti hun ab criminals ko or ye himmat mjhe srf or srf arjun sir se mili...wo meri inspiration..unho ne mujhe himmat di ye karne pe me keh sakti hun majboor kardiya...abhi bhi sochti hun to bas kaanp jaati hun...unhe us waqt gun point pe dekh kar meri to saansein hi ruk gayi thi...agr wo wahan na hote to shaed me shoot na kar pati...par wo the mjhe unki jan bachani thi ksi bhi keemat pe or mene us insan ko shoot kardiya...
Diary pata hai mene unhe to bacha liya...par us admi ko shoot karne ke bad mujhe pata nhi kia hogaya tha...mere hathon me or chehre par uska khoon lag gaya me jitna saaf karti nhi hota mujh me or unme koi farq nhi raha...par jab arjun sir mere pas aye unke seene pe sar rakh kar rote huye laga me apne saare ghumon ke liye roo chuki hun...man kiya ye pal bas yehi tham jaye or meri zindagi yunhi beet gaye...unho ne mujhe samjhaya or ise achi tarah shaed mjhe kabhi koi bat samajh aayi ho...Sir ap mere liye bhut special hain...apki life bachane ke liye mjhe apni life se jana para...to bhi hanste huye ap pe Qurabn kardun gi...



Now just he was filled up he closed the diary and moved towards her...he set beside her on bed and took her hand in his and kissed it...he then kissed her forhead and a lone tear dropped from his eyes...he looked at her and by holding her hand he spoke

"Kyun riya kese kar sakti ho mjh jese insan se itni mohabbat me to laik hi nhi hun tumhare itna pyar mjhse kese karsati ho tum...janti ho bhut koshish ki tumhe khud se door rakhne ki nhi rakh paya...janta tha mere sath tumhe srf dard mile ga par tum...tum ne tab bhi mujhse pyar karna nhi chora..."

He cupped her hand in his hands...and spoke

"Riya tum janti ho roshni ke jane ke bad mere pas to kuch nhi bacha...me bikhra hua tha...tum ayi mjhe sametne...mene bhut chaha tumhe aesa karne se rok sakun par na rok paya...tum atal rhi riya mere jese insan ke liye...tum mujhe jeetna chahti thi...Par tum to mjhe pehle se hi jeet chuki ho riya..."

Today he was speaking his heart to her but she was unconcious but he was speaking as if he want to tell her every single thing...

sun zara, soniye sun zara
aaj khamoshiyon se
aa rahi hai sadaa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai...

He looked at her caressed her face bend down and lightly kissed her both cheeks...

"Janti ho riya... Bhut mehnat lagi tumhe khud se door rakhne me par tumhari mohabbat meri saari khoshishon pe bhari rhi... najane kab par mjhe tumhari in bachkani harkaton ki adat ho gayi subha tumhari muskurahat dekhta to yaqeen ho chalta din bhi kahin acha guzre ga mera... tumhari har bat aj bhi yad hai riya me nhi bhoola kuch na kuch aesa hai tumhare bare me jo mujhse choota ho"

beete lamhon ke saaye to
bas yahin tham gaye hain
yaad mujhe aaye teri baatein
palkon ki surkh chaadar pe
ashq bhi jam gaye hain
teri aankhon se na hat thi aankhein
bebasi ka hai alam
kya karoon main bataa
dhadkane hai deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai...

He again spoke up as if believing that she is hearing every thing

"Bas riya ab bas theek hojao... mere sath zindagi jeene ke liye khush rehne ke liye bas wapas aajao... tumhe mjhe jeetna hai na wada hai mera pura moka dunga is bar tumhe me jeetna mjhe...tumhen wo saari khushiyan me laake dunga riya ye mera Waada hai tumse...tumhare honton se ab ye hansi kabhi door nhi jae gi... tum mjhe kabhi bhool hi nhi pao gyi mjhe sametne me mein tumhe itna ghum kardun ga ke tum mjhe bhoolna bhool jao gi riya... Bas uth jao theek hojao..."

He bend down again but this time he crushed lightly his forehead on hers and spoke...

"Mein shaed Khuda ke aage kabhi na Jhukta...Par ab pata chala wo mera kitna khayal Karta hai...riya roshni ko meri zindagi se jaana hi tha kyun ke tumhe jo meri zindagi me ana tha riya...ab utho riya utho meri ankhon me dekho tumhari mohabbat sansein le rhi hai... Mujhe dekho aj jhuka hua hun tumse tumhe mang raha hun...uth jao"

choom ke apne honthon se
tere ghum ko churaa loon
laake tujhe de doon, khushiyan saari
apne har beqraari ko
seene mein hi chuupa loon
meri chaatein jaayen, tujhpe waari
sehmi sehmi labon mein
gul gayi hai dua
dhadkane hain deewani
dil bhi kuch kahe raha hai
sun zara, soniye sun zara

He kissed her both eyes and hid his face in her neck as if she will just understand his heart and wake up for him...he himself did'nt know when tears fall from his eyes...He felt his heart becoming light... he felt life again in himself...

He pulled himself stood up and seated himself on the chair beside her bed and hold her hand...

"Mein tumse kahi door jaa hi nhi pata mera to har rasta tumhari taraf mudta hai riya or dekhna aj ke bad tum bhi mujhse kahin door jaa hi nhi pao gi jahan jao gi mujhe pao gi or meri taraf hi aaogi...tumhari mohabbat mjhe wapas insan bana sakti hai mjhe zinda karsakti hai meri pathar aankho mein aansoo la sakti hai riya... Socho jo me mohabbat karne pe aya to yad rakhna tumhari zindagi mein in aanso'on ka rasta hi rok dunga... Or ab bas mohabbat khile gi mohabbat rahe gi... tumhe me yad hon ya na hon... Par phr bhi tumhe mein apni taraf laa kar hi rahun ga...Is bar tum apni manzil pao gi...tum mjhe jeeto gi riya apne liye...humare liye...PYAR KE LIYE..."

He put his head on her hands and was slowly drifting into sleep when unconsious riya in her unconsiousness put her other hand on his head lightly... and the night passed...

Love happens whether you like it or not...so why not arjun gives his love and life a 2nd chance...
Edited by dia121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
ah it ws awesome... loved the way Arjun confessed his feelings to Riya... waiting for Riya to gain conciousness nd deir love story to begin... update soon... Thnx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome update dear :) loved it
the way arjun confessed his feelings to riya was just amazing...
hope riya gains consciousness soon...
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon

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