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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

awsome update
and continue soon
thanks for pm

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nivanthi2

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

omg!!!!!!!! i'm going crazy!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 realy realy nice update dear!!!!!!!!!

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

You had me at

"Thats where you are wrong Miss Riya, i own you and you belong only to me!" he said calmly though she could see that he was still very angry from his eyes.

And you had me on my knees at

She was surprised to see him smiling and was even more shocked at his words, "And you actually think that you can go from here away from me!"

And I was down on the ground, begging, and fussing, for more at

"Get ready, we'll leave for work in five minutes, i'll be waiting for you outside in the SUV," he said and went out whistling a romantic tune.

Awesome!

Looking forward to the next update, and hoping you update soon!!

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pravallika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

can't stop reading it want it to never end...plz update soon...it was just rocking..

when will they confess

Edited by prava55663 - 13 years ago

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

@ haruhi26 mujhe bhi kamra kiraye pe chahiye aur wo bhi arjun ke bajoo wala...🤣

agar aisa landlord ho to kya baat hai/...love it...

bechari riya arjun to use bolane ke lyak hi nahi chodata...kya confidence hai direct said he owned her...wow

dear...agar arjun aise hi riya ko kiss karta rahega to mein ek din jaroor hell pahoch jaungi...😆

hot hot update...agar riya ka towel gir jata to arjun ki kya halat hoti...😳

i know ki tum kya soch rahi ho...wo kahawat to suni hogi...khali dimag shaitan ka ghar...😈

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Ek bata do jara ,,, sacchi sacchi batana ...

tum kya hum sab ko mar dalna chati ho kya... are agar aise likhti rehogi to hum sab mar hi jaaynge dear..

Riya is in towel...😊😊😊😊

bechara Arjun , sare scene meri eyes ke saamne aa gye..

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

yipppeee... He confessed!! Must say, kya style hai, ACP Rawte ka, na karne ki koi gunjaish hi nahi chodi!

haaye, and the towel scene.. 😉

Brilliant work dear! Can't wait to read more of it.. Waiting anxiously for Riya's reaction..

Thanks for the PM! 😊

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

You know what buddy ..i loved it...so romantic...arjun kissed her again and ...can't wait to read more...pls update soon

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neelima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

towel ki jai ho!!!

n yea temme one thing...hw many more kisses r coming up...apne dil ko sambhalna hai...warna ek aur kiss di to aagey ki kisses nahi dekh paoongi...!!!

yaar...kaise likhte ho yaar...i feel jealous...!!!

it was jst awesome...!!!

pls update soon!!!

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

I really love this Arjun ...

The last bit was just amazing ...

I specially like the way Arjun showed his right on Riya and the change in his moods ...

Great part ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

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