Akya SS: Baarish(last part-page8) *complete* - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch5.

Ananya is still in the hospital as her fever hasnt subsided yet.Aakash used to visit Ananya daily whenever she was asleep due to heavy doses of medicines.Mahima used to keep him updated about Ananya's health,everytime.

Aakash is at home,thinking about how to manaofy his Ananya,because he broke her heart and made her upset big time. This time he needs to do something very big.

Suddenly,he feels that his ears were being twitched by someone.He felt a sharp pain and he knew who was it. He never dared to speak against that person.

''Khote da puttar..marjaane..keere pare teri aisi vyavhaar pe.. Tainu uss kudi da dil torhne vich vadda maza aaya na.. Ab bhugat.'' Bebe spoke.

''Ki karte ho tussi,Bebe.. Sabke saamne tainu ki zarurat thi mera kaan khichne ki? Dard honda hai...'' Aakash replied,rubbing his ears.

''Woh Amitabh Bacchan ka kya dialogue shyalogue thha... Haan.. Mard ko kabhi dard nahi hota... Tu toh wohi si... Tainu dard shard nahi hona chahi... Phir,aae ki hai?'' Bebe replied.

''Bebe,mainu nahi pata thha ki baat itne aage bar jayegi... Main bohut pachta raha hu,Bebe.. Main aisa ki kara ki meri Ananya pighal jaaye..'' Aakash said to Bebe.

''Puttarji,kudiyo da dil bohut narm hota hai.. Unhe chhot sehn karna nahi aata hai.. Agar tu sach mein chahta hai ki Ananya tainu maaf kari de,phir uska dil jeetne ki koshish kar.. Woh tainu maaf karegi,mainu ae vishwas hai.'' Bebe replied.

''Sure,Bebe.. Iss baar Ananya ko kabhi apne se dur nahi hone dunga.''

Aakash thought of ways to manaofy Ananya.But,he was still confused as to how will he do it? Will he succeed in it? Will Ananya melt down?

Days went by and Ananya's health improved.Her bandages over the head were changed. She felt fine and better. Her discharge from the hospital is due in 3 days' time.

Her,Mahima called Aakash and told about what doctor said regarding Ananya's health and later on said that Ananya will be discharged within 3 days time. Bebe was also happy and prayed to Babaji to keep her small her family.

Precap: Suprise for Ananya..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
oohh.. Surprise for Ananya... it's must be from Aakash... yeee...
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
mona how you know punjabi so well? :O how? so good and i loved Bebe! so wonderful update soon pls pls pls pls pls! can not wait!
Edited by yudigirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Superb update was suprize for me too..
Lovely update.. Kaise manayega Akash ananya ko
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Ch6.

Ananya has been discharged by the doctors and the doctors asked Mahima to take care of her health and to bring her for routine checkups,as well. Mahima nodded and went towards Ananya,who was waiting in her room. Ananya thought that Aakash will come to take her from the hospital but later,she shrugged off the thought and smiled sadly.

Aakash was in Ananya's home where he did all the arrangements of her home coming with the help of Mahima's mother and Megha. Mahima already informed them before that Ananya will be discharged today. Aakash's Bebe was also there to see Ananya.

After a 30 minutes ride,Mahima and Ananya reached home. Ananya came out of the car with the help of Mahima. Soon,they stood on the threshold of her house. Ananya had tears in her eyes because she came here after a very long time after her parents' and Nanaji's death. Mahima rang the bell.

Megha opened the door and saw Mahima and Ananya standing outside.Ananya was surprised at the way her house looked so full and so clean. She looked at Mahima who blinked her eyes,making her understand that it was her Mom's idea.

Ananya saw an elderly lady coming out with Aarti Thaal and doing her Aarti.Ananya took her blessings and stepped inside to find Aakash there with a flower bouquet in his hand. She was half-happy and half-sad. Tears brimmed in her eyes,which was noticed by Aakash.

Ananya's tears affected Aakash a lot. He so wanted to hug his girl tightly and take away all her pain,but,he had to wait for the right time to come.

''Puttarji,etthe baith jao.. Tainu abhi aaram karna hai bohut.. Bohut plane shlane chala li aapne.Ab aapki aaram karne ki baari hai.. Mahima puttar,Ananya ko kaunsi davai kis wakhat deni hai,woh saare niyam hum sab nu samjha de.. Aur tu,khoteya ni hoye,Ananya puttarji ko andar leke jaa aur acche se,aaram se leta dena...'' Bebe said.

''Par,Bebe...'' Ananya hesitated.

''Main samajh sakti hu puttarji ki twanu dil ko kinni chot pohuchi hai,par,iss khotte ko bhi apni galti ka pashchatap hai.. Usse yeh sab karne de,usse yeh sab mehsoos karne de puttarji..'' Bebe replied with a smile.

''Ji,Bebe..'' Ananya smiled.

''Aye haaye.. Kinni sohni lagrahi hai.. Marjava gur khaake.. Kisi ki nazar na lage tainu.'' Bebe replied and did the nazar-utarofy thing..

Aakash swept Ananya carefully off her feet and carried her in his strong arms and went towards her room. Her eyes were stuck with his eyes trying to understand his feelings. Involuntarily,she smiled a little and a sweet,cute pink hue tinted her cheeks. Aakash laid her down slowly and pulled the quilt over her and was about to go when Ananya held his hands.

He was shocked at the way she held his hands. He was really happy and thought that this must be the right time to reveal everything about his life and mission and the reason behind his rude behaviour,that day.

Precap: Akya moments.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

very nice touching story.. pls update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
oww...
he is so sweet. .
mujhe laga nehi Ananya itni jaldi maan jayegi.. but good for Akya. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
WOW awesome re mona! update pls soon...update was wonderful!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Wow so cute update cheers to d awesome work :)

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