Aap ki Kasam |MG FF|Updated Thread 2 link @ p.n.1 @9/12/2022 - Page 31

Thanks for the pm and update

Chapter 8

Outstanding update…. nicely written 

Feeling for Geet

Maan was indeed rude

her thoughts and dilemma are reasonable

of cos his behavior perplexes her

well Maan's bitter words still hurt Geet

at least she resolved to be try and be happy 

after all she had started a new life

so Maan is angry thinking about Sameer

wish he would confront Geet or Sameer

oh Geet is sleeping naked

Maan is indeed affected

passionate moments

upset that Maan accuses Geet

dismayed that he thinks that she would do that

yet again he hurts her

liked her response to Maan why she did not lock the door

Maan goes to sleep in his car

In part 9 i loved the way geet always understands his anger in positive way and feels only she belongs to him and that's the reason he has the right to hurt her ..the day when maan comes to know the truth he is gonna regret his actions waiting to read more ❤️

Chapter 9

Lovely update…. fabulously written  

feeling for Geet

what she expected and what happened are two different things

she is all alone 

sad seeing her condition

Maan's dilemma is well portrayed

oh he dad saw he and knew he slept in the car

at least she realised something was troubling Maan

but she is correct that he has no right to behave like that with her

as expected Maan cannot stop thinking of Geet

eager to know why she appears in his nightmare

hate that he called her the venomous B****h of his nightmares

Maan is drawn to Geet 

liked that dadi understood Geet when she said that she does not know how to cook

Geet and dadi share a wonderful bond

Maan is mesmerised seeing his wife

loved Maan's possessives for Geet

oh she forgot to tie the dori

not surprised that accuses Geet

glad how she responded

her question was reasonable

Maan avoids answering

so Geet justifies his behavior 

update soon

aaah so maan accsues geet for sleeping like that...

he just couldnt stop himself from getting drawn towards her so he blmaes her for that...

here geet is puri deewaani..

he even shouts her for going out without proper dressing...its his possessive side...i hope this gimuy leaves all his impulsiveness n goes looking for the truth but seems like he will hurt geet more now

Wonderful update dear

Both update are owsome

Maan is to rude with geet

He thinks she was seducing him.

Hope he comes to know everything soon

Geet is so innocent feeling very bad for her

Thanks for pm

Watting for next update

Part 8 

Oh boy , geet is so innocent & naive 

Her cute gestures could melt anyone’s heart ........ perhaps even maan in due time 😉

Difficult to read how maan is so rude to her 

The innocent girl just defends his actions 

Hmmm , maan’s dad has a hint that something is amiss ...... will he get involved ??? He does not sound like a very loving & caring person 

Thank you di 

I like how descriptive your writing was .... nicely written 

🤗

Chapter 8 

Sorry I labelled chapter 9 as chapter 8 as well , I mixed them up 😕

Sensational chapter!!! 👏👏

Extremely well written !!! 

Maan’s inner turmoil again well depicted 

Geet’s innocent is dangerous b/c she is so trusting 

Maan is correct that she should of locked the door 

But he did not have to be so harsh 😔

He is very drawn to her , not sure , how long he can maintain his distance 

Thank you di 🤗

Chapter 8 

Sorry I labelled chapter 9 as chapter 8 as well , I mixed them up 

Sensational chapter!!! 

Extremely well written !!! 

Maan’s inner turmoil again well depicted 

Geet’s innocent is dangerous b/c she is so trusting 

Maan is correct that she should of locked the door 

But he did not have to be so harsh 

He is very drawn to her , not sure , how long he can maintain his distance 

Thank you di 

Going good...

When will he come to know about what really happened that day,and curious to know why he got all those dreams...

Looking forward to further...

Maan and Geet married. Maan starts to torture her because of a dream soon after the marriage and he is listening to the crap his friends are feeding his mind. There's no logic of the dream that he is behaving with her rudely when they have not met earlier.