Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Aap ki Kasam |MG FF|Updated Thread 2 link @ p.n.1 @9/12/2022 - Page 10

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hello Mugdha

Hope you are well?


Interesting teaser

update soon 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice teaser 

Waiting for update 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Maan will save her from others, but will save her from him?

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Interesting teaser dear Watting for update
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I feel bad for geet and maan is what he some pyscho just beacuse of bad dream he want to get revenge from the girl didnt he knows the difference between reality and dream idiot 

I don't want geet to be a door mat to listen his scoldings and tolarete hos tourture like  damsel in distress i want a strong geet who stand up for herself 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice one....... Dadima is a blackmailer

She always make everyone do wat she wants🤣


So now maan is in Hoshiyarpur, can't wait to know the reaction of Maan after seeing the girl of his dreams

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Posted: 2 years ago





Chapter 3 




Teaser 


He kept gaping at her without a blink, his hands clutching her shoulder, unconsciously he pulled her closer. 

Geet gasped feeling his move; she blushed in pink shades, watching his admiring gaze not moving her face at all. 


Author's Note :-


I am extremely sorry for this much late, but again I was held up with my job and other activities. Also this part i was typing the day before holi, so need to proceed further with it...😛

I will try to post next soon but please like and comment lots of... Seeing only few numbers of it discourages me..smiley13

Next I think will put on password, since it would have steamy moments. But it also depends on my mood. If I get 40 likes and more I will post it here Direct. 

It's in your hand now... Let's see...

I am waiting already for comments...smiley42

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Nice update 

Waiting for next update.  . .

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🤗🥰 awesome part

Maan and his friend recognise geet which they seen her in potrait.💜❤️💕

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hi Mugdha! 

Thanks for updating


Chapter 13

Fabulous update…. greatly written 

So dadi knows Geet's mom

well dadi aware that he son is responsible for Madhu's condition

hate Samarth Handa

Madhu is indeed scared of him

of cos Maan is mesmerised by Geet's beauty 

but he is shocked and angry seeing her face as he recognises her face

hmm Geet has fallen in love with for Maan at first sight

not surprised that his friends recognised her from the portrait

Geet's confusion is reasonable

liked Maan's care for Geet

Madhu is worried about Geet

at least Maan took Geet to her house

dadi is surprised by this

as expected she noticed Maan's gaze on Geet and sees Geet blushing

wonder what dadi is thinking?>

sad seeing Geet and Madhu helpless

Geet forced to sign the papers 

dadi is surprised while Maan is irritated

so dadi wants to stay for Holi prayers

great that Madhu invited 

Maan's reaction was anticipated and he refuses to stay

loved how dadi emotionally blackmailed Maan

he now has to stay but he is MSK and never loses