PreRish SS ~Na Tum Jano Na Hum ~(Writer's Note,Page-13)

Posted: 4 years ago


Hi guys,

After watching Mr Rishab Bajaj entry  I have started KZK and I really liked the current track . So i have written SS guessing on upcoming Track about PriRish.. This is my first attempt at writing a story, so i have so many mistakes n error.   so please forgive me for that . At first i have given a Teaser of os. .  Please tell me if I should continue or not. All comments , constructive criticism and reviews are most welcome. 

And lastly one request please don't be silent readers . Give your Response and suggestions to improve myself . Thanks! ❤️




With Regards,

Opsora


Index



1) Teaser - #Page 1

2) Part 1-  #Page-3

3) Part 2-  #Page-5

4) Part 3-  #Page-7

Edited by opsora2090 - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago


Teaser


Mr bajaj stood up gripping the wine glass n went near to the window. After some silence

Bajaj- " prerna  , I am sorry"

Prerna (in surprised voice)- "sorry for what mr bajaj ?"

Bajaj  (in sad tone)-  "mai tumahre  sath bohot galad kia,tumko tumhare parivaaar , tumhare peyar, khusiya har ek chis se dur kia"

Prerna (sad tone)- "suddenly iyea sab aj kyu Mr bajaj ? jo waqt gujar geya mai usko duabara iyad nei karna chahti. jis mai serf dard ho.  Mai apne dil ko ab samjha liya, shahed iyeahi mere kismet thi"

Bajaj - "nah , tumhare kismat maine biagada. Aj usikai karma mujhe milraha hai sneha ke jariye."

Prerna (in tensed voice)-  "sneha , matlab? aisa kyu bola apne ? Keya hua usko ?"




Next Part #Part-1

Edited by opsora2090 - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago
You better post the enitre story or else I will eat you up
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by MisHumptyDumpty


You better post the enitre story or else I will eat you up

mujhe sharam abhe hai

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by mithilalovesksg


Ab sneha ko kya hua likho aage 

iyea toh mereko bhi samajh nei aaa rahi , actually uska hua keya?

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by opsora2090


iyea toh mereko bhi samajh nei aaa rahi , actually uska hua keya?

kjud writer ko pata mahi uske cjarector ko hua kya 😆 dont act like cvs you can be better than them ❤️ 

Posted: 4 years ago

Finally 🤗


Start mein hi ... drinks on him ,let's enjoy☺️😆

Sneha Ko kya hua ? Yaar plz ..don't keep it something big .woh papa ki pari hai

PreRish warming up😉  Aage kya hai ?

Jaldi pura update karo  smiley9

Posted: 4 years ago

Those pics  

Haye...plz keep them happy family 

Posted: 4 years ago

So it begins with guilt. Interesting.

Please continue. 😊

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