Hi guys,
After watching Mr Rishab Bajaj entry I have started KZK and I really liked the current track . So i have written SS guessing on upcoming Track about PriRish.. This is my first attempt at writing a story, so i have so many mistakes n error. so please forgive me for that . At first i have given a Teaser of os. . Please tell me if I should continue or not. All comments , constructive criticism and reviews are most welcome.
And lastly one request please don't be silent readers . Give your Response and suggestions to improve myself . Thanks! ❤️
With Regards,
Opsora
Index
2) Part 1- #Page-3
3) Part 2- #Page-5
4) Part 3- #Page-7
Edited by opsora2090 - 4 years agoTeaser
Mr bajaj stood up gripping the wine glass n went near to the window. After some silence
Bajaj- " prerna , I am sorry"
Prerna (in surprised voice)- "sorry for what mr bajaj ?"
Bajaj (in sad tone)- "mai tumahre sath bohot galad kia,tumko tumhare parivaaar , tumhare peyar, khusiya har ek chis se dur kia"
Prerna (sad tone)- "suddenly iyea sab aj kyu Mr bajaj ? jo waqt gujar geya mai usko duabara iyad nei karna chahti. jis mai serf dard ho. Mai apne dil ko ab samjha liya, shahed iyeahi mere kismet thi"
Bajaj - "nah , tumhare kismat maine biagada. Aj usikai karma mujhe milraha hai sneha ke jariye."
Prerna (in tensed voice)- "sneha , matlab? aisa kyu bola apne ? Keya hua usko ?"
Next Part - #Part-1
mujhe sharam abhe hai
iyea toh mereko bhi samajh nei aaa rahi , actually uska hua keya?