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Part-26
When maan got up in d morning he saw geet cuddled up wid him hugging him
Man smiled seeing dis but soon his smile vanished thinking abt d last ni8 n geet's words
Maan quickly got up from d bed n went to take shower
He got ready n left d room widout waking geet up
Geet got up aftr an hour or so n sat up looking around d room,thts whn she realized tht maan wasn't dere
She quicky got up n looked for him in d whole room n washroom but culdn't find him
She sat at d bed cursing herself
Jhalli badi aayi thi use maanane wali
Lo ab toh who chala gaya aur tu soti hi reh gai
Lekin dekho na babaji kitna bada sadu h ye muje utha bhi nai sakta tha
Yaa right geet tu use kuch bhi bol n den u expect him to wake u up ri8 idiot
But itne dino se toh wai uthta tha n aaj uthaya n nai,kya sachi itna jada gussa h who mujse??/babaji pls kuch karo na apko toh pata h k me kuch bhi bol deti hun,,,kya ab who mere se kabi baat nai karega???thinkiing dis geet got teary n stared crying
Geet sat dere for a while feeling sad but den thought to make it upto him n appolgise to him for her all d mistakes,,,ab galti ki h toh sorry toh bolna padegga na
Thinking dis geet quickly got up to go to washroom to get raedy so tht she can execute her plan fastly
While here maan sat in a garden thinking bat d words tht geet spoke
She doesn't trust me yet,she still feels tht I want to hurt her,how can she think like that????
Why Can't she see d love n care in my eyes in my evry act????
I guess my love is not capable enough to win her trust
I guess I lack in it
Do I really mean nothing to her??/
D time v spent together means nothing to her???
Maan sat in d garden thinking all dis
N here geet called d reception asked them to help her to decorate her room
She ordered a sorry card,a cake n flowers
She asked Vicky to mail her dere childhood pics
She decorated d whole room wid dere pics from childhood n d sorry cards wid diffrnt msges written by her,,,she sat dere waiting for maan to come
Maan came quite late at ni8 thinking tht geet might hav slept but still a part of his heart wanted geet to wait for him
When he opened d door he saw dat d whole room was dark n he thought tht geet slept widout caring abt him widout waiting for him
As he was abt to open d lights d light came n maan was stunned to see d whole room decorated wid dere childhood pics n d sorry note
Maan read all d notes one by one caressing dem wid his hand n saw all d pics smiling remembering dere childhood
Seeing geet pouting cutely for sumthing n maan holding his ears sweetly,geet having her icecream n smilling mischeviously at maan
Maan scolding geet n many other memories
That is when geet came out holding a big bookey hiding her face
Maan though has forgived geet aftr seeing all dis but still decided to play a lil hard
He removed d bookey n geet holded her ears cutely saying sorry
Oh how can maan resist tht cute pouting face he felt like hugging her n kissing her but controlled himself
Yeh sab tumne kiya????
Geet cutely noded still holding her ears
Kyun???
Wo kal mene bht galat bola na
M sorry pls muje maaf kardo
Muje pta h ki meri galti thi
Pls aise gussa nai ho,dkho tum muje dant lo muje bura bhala kehlo but pls aise gussa nai ho mere se baat karna nai chodo muje kuch acha nai lagta h saying dis geet started to cry
While maan jst culdn't hold back anymore n hugged her really tight
M sorry both said together
N den smilled
Okh now stop crying my cry baby
M not crying baby
Yeah right thts y u r crying like dis
wo toh tum mujse baat nai kar rae the toh muje kuch acha nai lag raha tha
Waise bhi m angry wid u saying dis geet again started to cry
While maan wondered y was madam angry on him????
Maan asked curiously why?????
Tumne kal mere se baat nai ki muje gudni8 bhi wish nai kiya muje aaj subh uthaya bhi nai n aaj subh bina bataye chale bhi gae,tum bht gande ho me tumse katti hun hearing dis maan smilled at her childishness while geet looked towards him n cribbed
N dekho ab hans bhi rae ho jao me nai karti tumse baat
Pta h mene kuch nai khaya subh se muje kitni bhookh lagi h but tume kya tum toh apna muh fullae baithe the n ab hans b rae ho
Dekha na babaji kitne dushdanav h yeh n geet started hitting him wid her fist while maan jst held her hand
Kuch kyun nai khaya tumne???
Me tumhara wait kar rai thi
Maan felt really guilty for not being wid her n said
Okh baba m sorry ab se aisa nai hoga okh
Pakka
haan sweety pakka
chalo ab dinner karte h
nai use pehle cake cut karna h
cake???but cake kyun???
are wo mera sorry wala cake
maan jst shook his head while geet bought d cake n both fed each other while geet mischeviously smeard d cake on maans face
geet...
ye kya h???
dikhta nai h kya cake h
maan jst held her n smeared d cake on her face from his face n laughed
tumne muje maaf kar diya na???ab toh tum gusse nai ho na???
nai shone chalo dinner karte h
saying dis dey started to hav dere dinner,,,,,,,
later dey got ready for d bed n both slept wishing each other goodni8
thts it for now
will b waiting for ur response
Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
It's sweet love that Is building up between them... Cute and yet silly..light and yet deep... Small steps but ones which will leave a mark so deep nd big ...seen the love in their hatredness now waiting to see the love break every bit of the so called hatred icing ...liking the pace of ur story though it is short u have kept it well... Hope though that u bring more meaning in each of the updates with regards to the pace of the story and move it on when u think its right...
Thank u for the updates and the read... 😳
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