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Originally posted by: music_girl

another name Ms. Lawyer for you 😆😉

Oh wow I am honored with the name Ms. lazy what a comment you gave.😛 where are the franlkie long comment don't worry you can criticism me. I don't mind  

Originally posted by: mel420

Oh wow I am honored with the name Ms. lazy what a comment you gave.😛 where are the franlkie long comment don't worry you can criticism me. I don't mind  

 i wonder why u didnt ask frankie like comment 😆

Originally posted by: music_girl

 i wonder why u didnt ask frankie like comment 😆

I wont give frankie like comment now because [for a couple of weeks] i come to read update quickly hit like reply PMs and comment quickly and log off

😭 kaise din age hai geet ke babaij yeh exams ki toh😆

Originally posted by: music_girl

Pls see scrap

checked and replied your highness of lazy town 😆

Geet has forgiven Maan for his mistakes but the main thing is how will he get rid of Emma and Eveline...

thanx for pm...

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Geet has forgiven Maan for his mistakes but the main thing is how will he get rid of Emma and Eveline...

thanx for pm...

Oh you will find out soon, won't tell anything😉

Ruchs
Part 30
G:Shh don't say that I will never leave you Maan. You know na your geet can't live without you. Your my dhak dhak.
M: I love you Misty

Geet and Maan stayed in a hug for a good 30 minutes. Geet broke the hug. Maan gave her an angry look and hugged her again.

G:Maan please let me go.
M:No never
G:Maan where is Maneet
M:He went to play with his friends. Ramu kaka is with them.
G:maan please I need to work.
M:You did that enough for the last 12 years. Now your DD needs you. Don't leave me.
G:Hmm
M:Geet where does D&G stand for.
G:Dhust Danav and Geet
M:Really I thought that it stood for Dhak Dhak and geet.

Geet freed herself from Maan.

G:You wish Maan.

Maan went and sat on the sofa.

M:I don't wish so I know so.

Geet came and put her head on Maan's lap.

G:So much confidince
M:Hmm

Maan started playing with Geet's hair.

G:Maan what are you going to do about Emma and dad how are we going to tell him everything.
M:Well
G:Does Emma still live what you
M:Yes
G:WHAT
M:Why jealous
G:Dust Danav

Geet tried to stand up from Maan's lap but he pulled her back.

M:Misty listen to me
G:Hmm
M:before I kick Emma out. I want her to be punished. I am mean so badly wanted to be my wife don't think we should let her enjoy a bit.

Geet sat up

G:What do you mean Maan

Maan explained Geet is plan to irritate Emma to the edge, so that she will yell out that she doesn; t want to live with him and what Emma and Evelien did.

G:Hmm
M:Just a couple of day more Misty and we will be back together.

Maneet heard Maan's way to get Emma to confess.

                                  Maneet's monologue
Hmm I don't know or that will work daddy but don't worry if it won't Maneet will save the day. He smirked. I've got a mind blowing plan.I think I should not disturb mommy and daddy. I think I will ask Ramu kaka to drop me home.

Maneet left from there. Geet hugged Maan.

G;Maan I am so scared how dad will react.
M:Trust me Geet he will feel guilty be he will be much more happier then now. He actes like he is absolutly fine but he isn't he really misses you. He is breaking from inside thinking what went wrong in his upbringing.
G:Hmm I really miss him too. Nothing went wrong in his upbringing but if he only trusted me.
M:I am sorry misty
G:It's okay maan please stop saying your sorry It's really alright.

Maan looked at the time. He needed to leave. His parents while be coming after a hour.

M:Misty I need to go.
G:No
M:No

Maan smirked. Geet stood up.

G:yes No. Maan you haven't worked the enitere day and didn't let me work either. You may leave after you work is done.
M:😆 Ma'am I am sorry but I get distracted when I see you.
G:😲 So you want to say it's my fault that you didn't work.
M:Yep
G:Remember one thing very clearly Maan the boss is never wrong. And if you leave before you time, I will have to fire you.

Maan hugged Geet from behind

M:Misty I really need to go it's important. My parents, Mohinder papa and Evil blondie are coming. I will call you tonight promise.

Geet turned.

G:Dad is coming (tears formed in her eyes). How.www is hee Maann
M:He is okay but he could do much better.
G:What do you mean he is okay but he could do much better.
M:He has lost a lot of weight. He really need his little girl back.
G:I wantt too sssee daddy to Maan.

Maan hugged Geet.

M:Shh. I promise I will take you to dad soon. Just a couple of days more Geet. I promise
G:Hmm

Maan gave a kiss on Geet's head.

M:Need to go Misty. Will call you tonight.
G:Hmm bye Maan.

Maan entered the house. It was a mess. Emma had all flour on her.She looked horrible. The kitchen looked like this:


M:EMMA WHAT IS THIS. WHY IS HER COCOA ON MY FILE.I ASKED YOU TAKE MAKE CHOCOLATE MOUSE NOT TO MAKE MY FILE EAT IT YOU STUPID GIRL CAN'T YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT.
E: Maan(crying) pl
M:SHUT UP I DON'T WANT TO SEE YOUR CROCODILE TEARS. ARE PARENTS ARE HERE THERE IN THE OTHER HOUSE.SINCE YOU RUINED ALL THE DINNER. I WILL BE TAKING THEM OUT FOR DINNER NOW GET READY.

Maan walked off (acting like he was angry) while inside he couldn't stop laughing. He hadn't accept anything less from that dumb Emma. Emma started crying. While crying she got ready.

At dinner Evelien said something which gave Maan a wicked idea.

E:Maan, Emma we really wnat to be grandparents right Mohinder.
M:Right
Maan:But what if Emma can't take care off kids. She can't even take care of the kitchen.
Emma:Maan (all hurt)
M:Why I said something wrong.
E:Maan my daughter is capable to take care of childeren trust me.
M:Hmm you now what your right it's time that we get parents. Right Emma.
E:yes Maan and I will be a great mother just like Evelien
M:Well we will find that out. Before we get kids, there is a tradition in our family( Maan lied) Right mom.
Mrs. Khurana:Sure son why don't tell Emma about it (thinking what is he up to)
M:Are you sure you don't wnat to tell it.

Maan said grinning like a devil.Mrs. Khurana glared at Maan.

Mrs.Khurana: Yes I am sure son
M:Okay if you insist. Before we get childeren. We take a couple of childeren from friends to take care of them for a couple of days. To see if we are ready to be parents.
E&E:WHAT
Mrs.Khurana:Yes it is a tradtion in our family.And I insist Maan and Emma fulfill this tradition.
Mohinder:well if it is a tradition Emma will do it a make me proud, right
E:eh yeah.

Next: Geet finding out that maan is legally married😲 and meeting Mrs.Khurana

Next:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54935575
  Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago

awesome update

nice update
loved it continue soon

Loved d update.
Thnx for d pm