Part 46
Hahaha ๐... Omg can't wait to see Arpita running around the house behind Geet with a stick... But Samarth was not wrong either bachi hi to hai.... And they're beginning to accept her as one of them.... But I think Geet is still not in the state of mind to notice all this things she's far too gone with the idea of her parents are still alive and in denial of the fact that she's married to Maan and has her own future. And she revealed the truth to Maan in a very blunt way that they had to go to Mahaguru for explanation alas they were in a dead end cause Mahaguru only revealed half of the truth the rest I think it's for Maan to find out on his own. Meanwhile Geet found the tunnel she's looking for like crazy and slipped in to the dark forest alone.... How clever of her to go alone and that too unprepared she doesn't even have her wand with her... And I really loved the fact that Maan didn't even have to think about choosing Geet and not her blood line... Whoa ๐ฎ they are well prepared for the war I see it's like they saw it coming decades ago... Geet and her mission find parents has been failed and there is no way to abort the mission or fallback from the attack now Maan is our only hope to save Geet and the babies from whatever the creatures are in there including the Naga's.... It's really scary Di but it's really good... Loved it... ๐ค
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Edited by UmaDevi97 - 1 years agoSuper update . nagas were ready to kill geet.. she tried to fight with them but no use cos they were very strong .shw was weak due to prgency maan saved her timely and fought with those nagas, geet was wounded. As maan lost the compas they could notfind their way back and maan asked help from mahaguru and an unicorn came there for help . unicorn told them everything abt their past life's.geet came to know about her parents later with the help of unicorn maaneet came back to manor. waiting for next part .
Nice update
Geet cone to room thinking maan parents talk
Maan come to meet geet
Geet say about all she hear naan parents talk
Sam and arpita come to geet room maan asked about his and geet connection half soul
Sam and arpita take maan to maha guru
Geet saw secret turral
Maha guru say maan geet life in danger she going to forest
Waiting for next update
Part 47
Phenomenal update di !!! ๐๐๐
Hair raising , nail biting & holding your breath type of update !!
You described such vivid imagery that I could actually visualize the scenes !! ๐๐ผ
Very well written !
That was a close call but thank goodness maan saved geet in the Nik of time .
A shaky geet cannot even stand after that attack
However I was very disturbed that she was cursing her pregnancy and finding her parents & her identity was her only priority . Parents risk their lives for their children & especially mothers have an innate ability to want to protect their young but geet has no emotional connection with her babies???
It is because she already thinks that she will be tossed out after having the children , so she is emotionally distancing herself from her babies & maan?? Being raised as a poor orphan , she is used to hardship & grief & she has been basically alone her whole life other than Adi โs friendship....... she thinks she is out of the Khuranaโs class & she is just being kept as a vessel to house the babies & she will be discarded once the babies are born . She is afraid of getting emotionally attached &being hurt .
Maan on the other hand has developed strong feelings for geet but has not voiced them
How will these two accept each other wholeheartedly when they do not communicate??
Sorry I got sidetracked but back to the update
The same unicorn from their dreams appearing was truly magical
Did mahaguru send the unicorn to help them ????
The telepathic communication was so cool
Now geet & maan know about the past , their friends /enemies & their parents histories minus the secret to stop their reincarnation.
Shocking that geet, Adi , pinkyโs families were involved ..... I kind of figured ahanaโs Family was involved ๐ค
So now that maan has safely taken geet back , what will be her reaction to the Khuranaโs who killed her parents ?? Are the babies ok ?? Will geet be ok ??
And if geet recovers, how will arpita reprimand geet ???
Oh so many questions have arisen in my head di !!
Canโt wait til the next update !!
Thank you di ๐ค ๐ฅฐ
Part 46
Nice update....
Geet share the connection between them with Maan and Maan went to his parents to know about truth and they took him to meet mahaguru. Geet saw the secret tunnel and she went there to find about her parents. Mahaguru told Maan that Geet is in danger and Maan has to save her. Mahaguru told Maan that only he can enter that place where Geet is. Maan's parents prepared him how to fight with evil.. And gave Maan some weapon to protect himself and Geet and wants him to save Geet.....
Thanks for the pm dear
Waiting for the next update
Password of part 47
Edited by Amiahangar - 1 years agoPart 47
Whoa ๐ฎ so that's what happened behind all this things... And Geet's parents are the bad guys along with Adi's and the others too... That was unexpected... So all of them are involved in this it seems so messy and complicated but once they except each other then there will be no harm... Yep she has to learn a lesson didn't she...? So now hopefully she would listen to any warning given by the elderly for her own good. The Naga's attacked her very badly to cause injury and to top it off she was freaking pregnant woman use your sense why do you have to go alone... She's lucky Maan was on time not really but he did came before anything else could happen and the unicorn ๐ฆ was the highlight of the update... Nice that he helped them go home and also help to clear up some confusion and doubt amongst them but he didn't reveal anything else about their bond with their soul. Hopefully they will figure it out before it's too late... Superb update Di you really nailed it... ๐ค
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Nice update
Geet is farm in her decision to find her parents
Maan is worried about her
Maan parents took him to maha guru
Who told him Geet life is in danger
Geet legt to find her parents
Letโs see is man able to protect geet and their children
Thanks for PM
Update soon
Maan saved geet and entered the tunnel back to his home. He told his parents what happened in the dark forest. Arpita realised that geet is her friendโs daughter and want to save her at any cost. When Maan asked she told the remaining story of them. Samarth tried all magic potion on her but it is not working . They called the doctor too but he couldnโt save geet. they all went to Mahaguru he told Arpita that nothing can harm geet as she is the daughter of Avantika. Mahaguru was communicating with Maan in his mind regarding geet
Part 48
Scary update
Why is geet not awakening ???
Sam & the doctors efforts are going in vain
Interesting revelation that geetโs mom & maanโs mom weโre best friends before she turned to the dark army
So it was a battle of good vs evil & friends against friends & a magnitude of powers against each other
Glad that good won
But lives were lost
& Adi & geet were raised as orphans
Maanโs parents seek help from the mahaguru but he conmunicates to maan via his mind
Is geet waking up linked to maan ??
Does he need to do something ??
Very interesting update di
Thank you ๐ค