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Posted: 2 years ago

Thanks for the pm dear....

Commented on blog...

Posted: 2 years ago

Wonderful update...

Maan finds Geet on the cruise and finally after much awaited things happened between them. And finally they confessed there love for each other. Geet knew Maan was jealous bcoz of Alex And loved the way Maan was showing Geet  that she belong to him only no one else and Geet too accepted that she has feelings for Maan and their  status doesn’t matter anymore to her... 

Waiting for next.....

Thanks for the pm dear ☺️😘☺️☺️☺️

Posted: 2 years ago

Lovely Update

Aww!!!!!!! Maan after listenimg Geet,s voice , his anger, frustration and tension vanished in thin air, loved it

Geet knew it that Maan was jealous , actually she could feel every emotion and gesture of Maan and this time herself covered the distance between them, loved it

Geet provoked Maan and Maan could not hold himself , confessed his love for her and Geet also reciprocate his feeling, loved it

eagerly waiting for next

Posted: 2 years ago

Superb update  and  beautifully written. 

Maan is restless and keeps thinking  of geet and Alex. On top, this lady is blocking  his way.

Finally the moment  she spoke, he found back his life. Happy to see that geet is not with Alex, a big relief for  him. Here geet planned all this to know what was bothering  him after her with Alex.

Maan was got red handed  this time when he told her that he was jealous and afraid of losing her because of his status. At least he told her about his insecurities and finally  both confessed  their love.

Update  soon.

Edited by natu10 - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Hello Richa, hope you are well.

shall wait for Part 7, thanks

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by khwaishfan


Hello Richa, hope you are well.

shall wait for Part 7, thanks

I will try dear

Posted: 2 years ago

I guess none miss this fiction... If you guys lose intrest then tell me I will end it then...

Posted: 2 years ago

Part 7


Beautiful and Sensual Update


Maan and Geet on deck of the ship and making love

well Geet now wants to prove to Maan that she loves him

and means it too 

this is the first time that light was shown on Maan's insecurity

there must be lots of pain in his life 

its going to be exciting and thrilling to see Geet as a pillar 

for Maan and bring him out of his pain that he has kept well hidden


Posted: 2 years ago

Part-7 

Lovely update...

Commented on blog..



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