Love, Unrequited [Thread 2 : Pg 140] - Page 15

Originally posted by: anitha.b

Canapoem referred to your story and just caught up. Love your style of writing and like to see how Kriti will realize who true friends are and what will Nishit be..he must be misunderstood or must be changing. Tejas definitely thinks about himself and although he has been kinder than other with Kriti, he has taken her for granted.  

Hi

Thank you. I hope the story lives up to your expectations.

There was something so real and lovely about these ongoing conversations. Sometimes the textual medium allows one to say things which we may not say in person, face to face. To lower the walls and let the other person see. This was in many ways an exploration of how they each see the world, what it is that makes them tick. As individuals, shed of the class differences. 

I can see why the songs really spooked her in a sense😆 they felt loaded. You made me listen to "panna ki tamanna..." hadn't listened to it in a long time. So thank you for reintroducing a gem of a song. 

Did Kirti ever have such charged conversation with Tejas? She has a lot more chemistry going with Nishit.

Feelings of emptiness and loss? Thats a lot for someone she saw so little of all these years.

She had to wait until midnight so she could blast him. Oh it was personal all right. Is that why she doesn't look for opportunities? She doesn't think she will get the job?

Simply loved how you set this up so they get comfortable talking to each other at length. 😍 They getting to know each other everyday lives without social constraints that face to face meet entails.

 She saving his number, he noticing and finally gives him an opening to text and just chat with her. 

The old songs exchange was beautiful.

Simply loved how this was written 😍

The other thing it stood out that Nishit is being his self,not apologetic of his wealth and career. They both are just getting to know each other without like you wrote "the indifference and pretense" of teenage years

Was he sending her a message with that last song? It sure felt like one. Does the advice apply to him too?

I have no say about expectations as I can’t write a line well 😀. You are beyond expectations. Thank you my dear.