Nazar/ Piansh Stories - Page 65

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by nushy1995


Thank you dear! 😊

As I have told you, I love simple scenes. They have much depth in themselves. So as a reader and writer, I prefer such description.


I had started writing the TS but then I didn't like the introduction so scrapped it. Later when this idea came, wrote again and it seemed fine. I posted it only then.


But this para was special. So thought to add one short story which is not so emotional or comical but sweet.


I am glad you both liked it. 😊

Even I love simple scenes...

Piansh indeed had much depth in themselves...

This is indeed really beautifully written...

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Nikki_srk


Even I love simple scenes...

Piansh indeed had much depth in themselves...

This is indeed really beautifully written...

😊 🤗

Posted: 3 years ago

So, guys this is a really random and totally nonsensical OS... Bas likhne baithe the to aise hi likh diya...
Am ready for all the jootas and chappals that you guys throw at me...

Advance main warn kar rahe hain... Read at your own risk... Warna baad main mat kehna bataya nahi tha...


Jaadui Coat


Hmmm... To aaj hum baat karenge apne Sirjee ke coat ke baare main...


Aree na na na na... Koi aisa-waisa coat nahi hai ye!! Jaadui coat hai... Jaadui!!
Aisi-aisi cheezein nikalti hain na is coat se na ki ek baar ko Doraemon ko bhi complex aa jaye...aur wo bechara bhi dukhi hokar ya retirement le lega ya phir inke under main aakar inka chela ban jayega... Ab kya kare!!


Iske coat liye to bas yahi do linein arz hain:


"Tareef karu kya uski, jisne tumhe banaya"

Sachhi bata rahe hain... Wo coat banane wala tailor bhi kisi jaadugar se kam nahi hoga... Aisa coat koi mamuli insan bana sakta hai kya?? Bilkul bhi nahi... kam se kam is duniya main to aisa koi insan nahi hai jo aisa coat bana sake... Hota to wo aise coat bana kar bechta thode hi...wo to khud unhe pehenta aur ameer ban jaata... Shayad Ambani se bhi zyada ameer ban jaata...


Matlab pata nahi kaun si Doraemon ki pocket hai coat main ki jis cheez ki zarurat hoti hai, nikal aati hai...phir chahe wo Reevavanshi special rassi ho ya Kohrayan Katar ya Chalayan Dravya ya Patal Ketki ki bottle...bas farmaish kijiye aur cheez haazir!! Par ye hai ki wo jeb dikhti nahi hai... Bas Sirjee zara sa coat ke andar haath daalte hain aur chutki bajate hi cheez haazir!!!


Kabhi kabhi to man karta hai ki is coat ko chura lein aur jaadu ka khel dikha kar Mumbai ke world famous jaadugar ban jaye...
Par kya kare!! Har ek coat jaadui nahi hota na... Sirf usi coat main jaadu hota hai jo Sirjee pehente hain... Coat utarte hi jaadu bhi kahin gayab ho jaata hai... Shayad Sirjee ke paas hi koi special power hai jiski wajah se jo coat wo pehente hain, wo Doraemon coat ban jaata hai...


Sachhi bata rahe hain... Sirjee ka coat dekh kar na, bade-bade scientists ka bhi dimag ghoom jayega... Ka hai na ki apni poori zindagi main unhone aisi koi bhi cheez nahi dekhi hogi...aur na hi dekhne ki ummeed kar rahe honge...

Par kya hai na, yahan to aisi kai cheezein hain jo unhone kabhi nahi dekhi hongi... Ab aap kisi scientist se Daayan, Chudail, Davansh ke baare main poochenge to wo to aapko hi paagal bolega na? Kya pata aapka pagalkhane ka ticket katwa de? Ya phir aapke dimag ko ke jaaye apne saath ye pata karne ke liye ki is dimag main samasya kya hai??

To jis prakar ye log in Kaali Shaktiyon ke baare main nahi samajh sakte, waise hi is coat ke jaadu ko bhi nahi samajh sakte... Aur waise bhi, is coat ke jaadu ko samajhna har kisi ke bas ki baat thode hi hai...



Jo bhi ho, ye jadui coat to humare Sirjee ki aan, baan aur shaan hain... Hum to soch rahe hain Sirjee ke in jaadui coats ko (aur ho sake to saath main Sirjee ko bhi) kisi ajayabghar main rakhwa dein... Aakhir log bhi to dekhe duniya ka naya ajooba!!!


Inke coats bina to wo adhure hi hain...


Khair chhodiye... Aap bataiye, aap kabhi kalpana main bhi Professor Nishant ko bina coat ke dekh sakte hain?? Hum to nahi dekh sakte bhai...


Chalo, aaj ke liye itni bakwas kaafi hai... Abhi nikalte hain warna aap log bhi joote-chappal lekar humare peeche pad jayenge!!

Chalte hain!! Jai Ram Ji Ki...

Edited by Nikki_srk - 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

Chappal to zaroor marna chahenge, par befizul ki batein karne ke liye. 😡


Now let me quote Saavi - Yeh Sab Idea Tumhe Aate Kahan Se Hain?   


Sir Ji ke coat!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


Honestly, I had the same reaction after reading every para, if not every line. Specially the magic is in Nishant - cracked me up! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣


Not to mention Doremon's complex. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆


As usual Naman was at his comic best! Keep it up! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Posted: 3 years ago

Chappal to zaroor marna chahenge, par befizul ki batein karne ke liye. 😡

🙈🙈🙈

Don't worry... Ye baate jaari rahengi...


Now let me quote Saavi - Yeh Sab Idea Tumhe Aate Kahan Se Hain?   

Kyon?? Kya hua? Idea achha nahi tha?

Bola to tha, I am a total crazy person... To dimag main aise crazy ideas hi to aayenge na??


Sir Ji ke coat!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Kya?? 😕

Naman calls Nishant as Sirjee only!!


Honestly, I had the same reaction after reading every para, if not every line. Specially the magic is in Nishant - cracked me up! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

See, magic ya to kisi ek coat main ho sakta hai ya zyada se zyada do main... Yahan to Professor Sahab ke har ek coat main magic hai... To definitely magic pehenne wale ke paas hi hoga na??


Not to mention Doremon's complex. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Doraemon ko complex kaise nahi hota? Bechare ke paas sirf ek hi pocket hai...lekin Professor Sahab ke paas to pata nahi kitni pockets hain, at least do to hain hi... Chahe left side main haath daale ya right side wali main, kuch na kuch nikal hi aata hai...


As usual Naman was at his comic best! Keep it up! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it. 😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Nikki!! This was superb, exact detailing and so true.

Sirjee ke coat ka gupt rahasya, 🤣

Like everything just comes at right time, koi bhi issue kyu na ho? Sab kuch coat me sama jata hai, and magically all things come..

Mast likha hai.

Sab ko complex aa jata hai, ki all answers in a coat.

Keep writing more, as you get ideas.

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Madhura..


Nikki!! This was superb, exact detailing and so true.

Sirjee ke coat ka gupt rahasya, 🤣

Like everything just comes at right time, koi bhi issue kyu na ho? Sab kuch coat me sama jata hai, and magically all things come..

Mast likha hai.

Sab ko complex aa jata hai, ki all answers in a coat.

Keep writing more, as you get ideas.

Thank you so much...

Well, Professor Sahab ke coat ka gupt rahasya pata karne ki bas koshish ki hai humne... Warna aise to poori ki poori CID team mil kar bhi iska rahasya pata nahi kar payegi...

Eggjactlyy!! Everything comes at the right time...phir issue chahe kuch bhi ho...

Sab kuch coat main sama jaata hai aur Professor Sahab ko koi takleef bhi nahi hoti!!!

Complex to aayega hi na!!! 😆

Definitely... Zarur likhenge...

 Jab bhi koi idea aata hai, likh daalte hain...phir chahe wo total bakwas hi kyon na ho!!!

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Nikki_srk


Thank you so much...

Well, Professor Sahab ke coat ka gupt rahasya pata karne ki bas koshish ki hai humne... Warna aise to poori ki poori CID team mil kar bhi iska rahasya pata nahi kar payegi...

Eggjactlyy!! Everything comes at the right time...phir issue chahe kuch bhi ho...

Sab kuch coat main sama jaata hai aur Professor Sahab ko koi takleef bhi nahi hoti!!!

Complex to aayega hi na!!! 😆

Definitely... Zarur likhenge...

 Jab bhi koi idea aata hai, likh daalte hain...phir chahe wo total bakwas hi kyon na ho!!!


You are welcome!!

Well on last line and previous bhashan of bakwas, I have put a filter and saving my e-space🤣

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Madhura..



You are welcome!!

Well on last line and previous bhashan of bakwas, I have put a filter and saving my e-space🤣

🤗

Ummm... Matlab?? Hum kuch samjhe nahi...

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Nikki_srk


🤗

Ummm... Matlab?? Hum kuch samjhe nahi...


Matlab baatein wo jhuti hai, and you write well, but keep saying it's nonsense, etc. Nushy will agree!!



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