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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
SANGINI...PIYA KA MEIN BANUGI

Concept

She admire him ...like him... she not know him personally... but after this her heart beating fast , if anyone take his name... its infatuation or beyond this...

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Its only infatuation ...ya... it's happen in this teen age...

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But why she thinks so much about him...

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He is dream man for her...

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PROLOGUE

Geet distributing the sweets to her friends...

Chasmish ye sweets kis khushi mein

Geet : meri di ki shaadi hai issi week mein Sammy

Sammy : kisse

Geet : Maan Singh khurana se

.

What

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Geet ye tu kya kh rhi hai

Geet : jo sch hai nupur

Tum sbko aana hai

.

Aur koi bahana nhi chalenga

Kal se mein college nhi aayungi

Bhut se tyaariya krni hai

Aur tum sb bhi college ke baad directly mere ghar aa jaana

Meri help karonge na

Nupur : geet tune kuch kaha kyun nhi

Hum sb jaante hai

You love maan

Geet : Maan loves di

Nupur : par tu

Geet : No it's only infatuation ...not love

Now am going

You all come...ok

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this is simple love story of one sided love... she get the love or not...if destiny give her own love...he ever love back to her or not

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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
wo lamhe


this story simply based on arranged marriage...or said love marriage..this time its little confusing...you know soon why ?

khte hai jodiya upar se bnke aati hai

aur niche aake mil jaati hai

ye ek sanjog hi toh hai
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par kya ye jaroori hai
ye sanjog aapko phli baar mein hi aapke shi life partner se mila de
.
aur kuch asa ho
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partners exchange ho jaaye toh 😲

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Prologue

Adi : maan bhabhi ko kb tk room mein chipake rakhenga

maan : kya yaar tu bhi
teri bhabhi ready ho rhi hai

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annie jaake apne bhabhi ko le aayo

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she come out with annie ...
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pinky : bhabhi gunghat toh utha lo

annie help her in taking out veil...

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pinky : bhabhi you are so beautiful
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annie : bhai
ye bhabhi nhi hai 😲

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jinse aapki shaadi huyi hai
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maan : what you saying annie
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annie : truth bhai
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pata hai
.
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taai ji
ne kissi ko bhi bhabhi ka chehra dekhne nhi diya
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par maine asi hi koi jhoothi rashm ka khke
dekh liya tha😲

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MG SS - wo lamhe

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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
My Beautiful Mistake

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He is my beautiful mistake...i don't want repeat this mistake in my life again...
due to him i lost my self...now i am living due to or for my dad...

"kissi ke liye
na koi gila hai
na koi sikwa
na koi gussa
na koi nafrat"

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PROLOGUE


Daadi that's impossible

Daadi : why

He : daadi mein

I mean the Maan singh Khurana apni hi company mein as employee kaam karenga

Daadi : ye sb aapki wajh se hi huya hai

Ydi aap apni party se jyada company pe dhyan dete

Toh aaj koi aur Humari Company ko u take over na krta

.

Ye to sukar manaiye

Abhi bhi humare pass total 36% shares hai

Maan : par daadi

Daadi : bs

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Awesome work bittu ji

35% share toh maine market se buy kr liye the

Aur mujhe company ko take over krne ki liye jaroorat thi minimum 16% shares ki aur

Market se jyada se jyada hum 9% shares aur le sakte the

Par aapne bhut hi intelligence ke sath mujhe 20% shares aur dila diye

Wo bhi Maan singh khurana ke naak ke niche

Ussi ke younger brother se

Bittu : madam

Aap toh be wajh meri taarif kr rhi hai

Maine toh bs uski history nikalwayi

Aur pata chala

Uspe 2 crore ka loan hai

Bs usse 2.5 crore deke ye share hasil kr liye

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Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
WO HUMSAFAR THA

PROLOGUE


Mr. khurana we saves her but

but what doctor...

now she is in coma

he fall down on bench ...
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This Story starts from back past 15 years... where two different souls meet with each other 1st time... She playing with her friends hides & seeks in garden & bump with him... she sweetly said sorry to him & asks about her friends...

She : aapne mere friends ko dekha khi

.

Wo hum hid n seek khel rhe hai

He : khel mein no cheating

She : Isse cheating nhi help krna khehte hai

Her one friend come outside & supports him...

He is right geet...game mein tum isse kyun puch rhi ho

Geet : pari

Jb tu puchti hai tb

He left without saying any word...next day again both meet ...this time she asked his name ...

He simply said "maan"

Geet : tum mera naam nhi puchonge

Maan : I know

Geet : kaise

Maan : kal pari ne tumhe geet khke bulaya tha

Geet : intelligent

Par ye galat hai

Ase kissi ki baatein nhi sunte

Maan : tum shi galat ki baat na kro

Toh jyada thik rahenga

Geet : tum bad boy ho

Her daadi come & stop her...

Daadi : geet ase baat nhi krte

Say sorry

Geet : daadi maine kya kiya

One voice comes from behind ...divyani tum yaha

Daadi : savitri

Tum yaha kaise

Mein toh yhi rhti hu

Savitri : wo ram ka transfer huya hai yaha

Abhi kuch din phle

Bs

.

Kitni pyaari beti hai

Divyani : geet namastey kaho

Geet : namastey aunty

Savitri : aunty nhi

Daadi

Hum maan ki daadi hai

Aur aaj se aap hume bhi apni daadi smjhiye

Geet looks towards divyani ...she nodded...

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Meeting increases both become friends ...both share great bonding...but all things changed with time... His care lightened love in her heart...but it same happen with him or not...

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#55
khudrat ka khel

Concept

this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji & beeji fix her marriage in between of studies...
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Destiny bind both together ...πŸ˜‰ both don't want this marriage... but accepted this marriage too... πŸ˜‰



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#56
Teri Meri love story

this is simple love story... where u see maaneet cute nok zhok, ruthna manana, both love, breakup...

πŸ˜†









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#57
Is Life A Dream ?

Prologue






The story about the girl, not only one girl, I think each girl have dream about dreamy life partner...

Zindagi ydi sapno jaise hoti

Toh kitni khubsurat hoti ...😊

Par sapne aur hakikat mein

Koi toh farq hota honga...

She always dreamt about caring, loving husband in own life... But in reality she get or not...

Sapno si Zindagi ...

Ek bura khwab bn jaaye toh...😲


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Chalu toh...toh koi yuhi ched deta hai...

Kyu pati se kuch kaho...

Toh Wo hath mrod deta hai

Kyun umeedo ke badle... tujhe milti hai bs nirasha

Kyun khushiyo se bhara ghar ...lagta hai ek jhotti aasha

Khulke hassu... toh koi tok deta hai

Befikr jiyu... toh koi rok deta hai

Kyu tode h...kbhi sapne... kbhi dil ko

Koshish toh kare ye duniya ...smjhne ki ek aurat ko....

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Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Vivaah... Adhura Bandhan

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Concept

rachi hai mehendi in hatho mein... uske naam ki

intzaar hai in aankho ko...uske dedaar ka...

bs kuch pal aur

ho jaayenga pura hmara ye adhura bandan vivaah ka...

.

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Bs kuch pal aur

Wo simti hongi meri in baahon mein

Intzaar ho jaayenga mera... pura...

Ho jaayenga pura hmara ye adhura bandhan vivah ka....

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Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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#59

Tere Liye


Concept

Two unknown people approx with same background meet with each other and fall in love with passing time... Destiny plays own game and in some circumstances both get separates... both so lost in fulfilling the responsibilities forget own self in this... But somewhere in heart , in loneness, both remembering those moments, and thinks some time if this incidents not happen in our life, now both are enjoying married life ...

Sayad wo halaat na hote

Toh hum sayad aaj sath hote

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Chaha tha kya

Aur paaya kya

Not know where he is

Not known where she is

But the lamp of love kept lighting in the heart

In darkness, heart always surrounded with countless those memories

But we have to hold back all tears... Too...

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Character Sketch

Geet handa : 32 years old
Daughter of late Mohinder Handa
loving own family so much
now head Architect in one reputed company
Rano Handa : widow of mohinder handa
she is house wife
want to see marriage of geet... but ?
Nandini Mehra : married with dev Mehra
living happily with him and own son prem
she is elder sister of geet handa
Rajji Handa : younger sister of Geet Handa
her marriage fixed with Rohit Bharti in this year
Maan khurana : 34 year old successful business man
due to lost of struggle & sleepless night, today he reach up to here...
Roshni Khurana : mother of maan
she already lost her husband few years ago
now only one wish left
seeing Maan Marriage
Vicky Khurana : maan is father figure for him
he is younger brother of maan
and loves him a lot

Meera Khurana : wife of Vicky Khurana
loves her family a lot
she have a cute daughter pari

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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#60

Dil ..ki...Kalam se...

Concept

This story is about one girl life... when she feel happiness , her happiness turn into sadness... after all this she never loose hope, one day surely something happen good with her too... surely god write happy phase too in her life... But sometime she think god forget to add happy moments in her life... why this much pain...what she did wrong in past birth... in each phase of life she get major pain in gift ...

Prologue

My dairy

My only friend

Today am going to married with Maan

Again am fearing

If some happen bad with me

You know everything na

I wish this time destiny don't test me

.

She closed her eyes, Tear fall on page...

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Maan is so nice person, you know dairy I like him from our childhood...only you know dairy about this...tumhare alawa mein ye kissi se kh bhi kaha sakti hu... but always fear to go near him... if, due to my bad shadow, I lost to see him too... then what I do... you know everything about me dairy.. But dairy I don't write one thing here too... I not only like him, but start loving him too...really dairy I also now know... But... when uncle come and said he fixed my marriage ... I feel again something break here...she pointed towards heart...but thanks to god this time... Uncle chooses Maan for me... dairy we talk later...

She signed at below on page...

Geet

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Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana : 24 years old, young handsome guy.. But destiny play cruel game with him... he lost the parents in young age...

At this time surinder Handa give home to him and treat him as family member...

For Surinder handa he does anything...

Geet Handa : 22 years old, sweet ,bubbly girl... but with the phase of time her bubbliest lost in sadness... but she always try to smile... one by one she lost her parents... First she lost mom in younger age then after five years she lost dad too... his uncle surinder handa take her into own house ...

Mohinder & Rano handa : geet parents

Surinder Handa : younger brother of mohinder Handa

Pammi Handa : wife of Surinder handa

Brij Handa : Son of surinder & pammi handa

Pari Handa : younger daughter of Surinder & Pammi handa

Ada Khan : Maan best friend or ????πŸ˜‰

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Dil ..ki...Kalam se...

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago
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